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Derpy Forever
Well lets see what kind of trouble i can get into.
Derpy Forever
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Well. That was, interesting to say the least. I really want an alternate ending where Celestia just randomly appears, but you can decide what to do if you decide to continue.
More? like His Marefriend getting into it?
HAHAHA, oh luna, you kinky f**k.
Well that was interesting.
*pokes in for a look*
Interesting story. Can't understand all the dislikes though. Probably all those anti-clop haters who downvote everything they see that is rated mature with the sex tag. And of course, they never bother to read it before passing judgement.
Anywho, cary on sir. May you create more freaky and kinky stuff to amuse us.
I'm wondering if it is ok that I write a small twist ending for this using some of my fanponys? If your not ok with it that's fine to me
Not a big fan Clopfics, but this was very well written
That made my Fanny hurt...
4000325 go ahead it is fine with me I would like to see a spin off of it.
Dayum, that was hot! Thumbs up!
Please, may I have another?
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... my bum hurts...
4000175 Ok look I am not judging anyone here nor am i getting at you in any capacity i just wanted to clear that up before i continue OK good.
So the down votes i can practically grantee are not from clop haters trust me on that, when you put up a story which in it's entirety is the degradation and breaking of another sapient being, that we as humans can relate to you know in terms of intellect and emotional response then your gonna get hate.
I am not saying it's wrong because this is sort of what the internet was created for, to allow everyone to create what they want and share it with others that is the inherent beauty of the internet, with some obvious restrictions such as exceedingly graphic content or something like that but this story certainly is coming close if not past a line that most will not cross.
4039106 I can understand what you are saying, and if that is the case then my next fic is going to hit rock bottm and be kicked to death by everyone who reads it or just looks at the discription.
So I will give you a heads up my next fic is going to contain large amounts of foalcon and a few fetishes, got it as a request from the first person to ever request a fic from me so he got it for free.
So I will have to see where that takes me but its understandable from a human stand point but I am sure a few of those are clop haters.
4039106 You didn't have to make your comment a reply to mine. I just hate it when people dislike stories just for what they're about, and they don't read it.
You, on the other hand, provided an insightful comment on why people would dislike these types of fics. The reasons you provided are understandable, but c'mon, its fiction. I guess I'm weird for thinking that fictional stories with fictional characters who encounter unpleasant things should go without hate from people who won't bother to read them.
Then again, I suppose another reason this story is attracting so much hate is that it's in 2nd or the reader's perspective, and not 3rd.
I think that the down votes are for the breaking of spirit also but I do think that you need to add a chapter(s?) so that she f**ks him until he likes it and begs for it earnestly because its the fact that he still doesn't want it in the end that sours the entire thing. This is shockingly dark and terrifying without the submission or longing for more pleasure in the form of pain Iits missing that fundamental piece that make you want to be in his position rather then run from it.
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Agreed. This is pretty much a torture fic, through and through. While it forces the reader to endure or at least envision such suffering, it can't really be said to be called a enjoyable experience. Most stories that go this route are either not second person, so you are watching another suffer and you try to get what is going on through their head. The adrenaline rush of a good gory horror story is what attracts fans of movies like Saw. When it is a second person fic, they tend to be kinda....bittersweet is the word I'm looking for I guess? If you make it so its purely a unpleasant experience, there's nothing about it that would make you want to immerse in the viewpoints perspective, barring the reader being a complete and thorough masochist.
4072139 The thing this is that I actually am a sub and a masochist, and a bit of a switch in the beginning but that is only to antagonize the responce I want. The thing is, yes pain can be pleaure, but that is the thing that is missing. The pleasure is missing. The sharp smack of a hand is like a quick slice of pleasure bringing you into bliss quicker then anything else. Its suppose to snap your experience up higher and higher with each hard stroke. This pain without enjoyment not even a masocist would want if it didn't in the end give them that pleasure.
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Interesting.
I have a feeling that this story might evolve a bit in the future...
sequel maybe he will escape or kill her :D
this was awesome
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The thing is, rape isn't supposed to be pleasurable and this is a rape fic. It's even stated that she enjoys the stallion suffering. And since the stallion is you, your supposed to hate her and what she's doing to you. Unless you want to degrade it down to a Stockholm Syndrome (which I bet Luna would kill him afterwords if that happened) it's fine the way it is.
Take a look at The Scent: Darker Paths for a better understanding especially the chapter "A Poisonous End."
Spoiler: I personally wanted to do more to Blueblood than what he got before being killed.
ME GUSTA
Could be worse, could be raining.
I was about to read this, but then I realised it was published on my mother's birthday.
Yeah, I'm giving up on life.
That was pretty good! Man, Luna really went brutal mode.
I have no rebuttal...
I never thought I was a fan of femdom, until now.
I loved this story. All doe, I wish their was more about what happened afterward. could your write more about this story it was just so good?
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The nuke is all ready on the way. I called up my good friend. The emperor of man
Just remember luna.... death is an end....and when I am done you will beg for it. First the horn with a rusty saw blade, just to snap it off half way. Then plucking the wings before ripping both off. After that takeing a chisel to your hooves. The entire time pumping you full of shit to keep you awake. Of course I would close your wounds with an iron after rubbing salt in them. Then after breaking your back right leg in 10 places and your front left I will turn to dust. After that I will let you live all you have to do is answer a simple question. Right eye or left..... oh wait I know I will cut one out and put lemon juice in the others. So witch one..... This is the wrath of humanity. What I said right here is tame to what I hear some contrary do so if someone wants to add.
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And to top it all off, shoot her corpse with a railgun.
well.... it's still far better than that fluttershy fic at least.