Burnt Oak has been in Canterlot Long Term Emergency Medical Hospital for almost a year now, and he is still not showing any major improvement.
Despite the fact that Magdalena has only known him for a few months, she is still waiting for any word on his condition for either the better, or the worse, and sees him every weekend.
One day however, things take a turn when a mysterious pony comes up to her with a deal. One that can save his life, but change it forever.
Will she let him go, or will she let him give Burnt Oak another chance? And if she does, will she follow him down that path in life?
After all, what great changes can take place when changelings are involved...
All I have to say is... WOW!!! Not many fics grab hold of me so quickly that I blaze through it, and end up craving more.
OUTSTANDING JOB!
Well, the plot starts to thicken... It seems that the good Dr was not completely forthright with his explanation of the procedure, and some within the hive dissent because of that fact.
An excellent chapter. This felt about the right length for what was conveyed in this chapter, and it was very well done.
Damn why there is no pic with Chrysalis flipping table?!
lol V-Pony originally intended for Blue Angel to just be a oneshot... and now it is nearly 800k words long at 71 chapters!
Just write the story, and it will come to it's proper conclusion when the story does.
I know that one well. I too find myself searching for my own style at times, and I find that experimenting, and simply writing help me to achieving the goal of discovering that style.
'Duel cit...' Dual
Another resurrection! Nice!