When a single, pointless fight shatters the love of a lifetime, the story we all thought we knew changes in ways that nopony could have expected.
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Seriously, screw you Celestia. Agency...That's all that needs to be said.
Also, great job on the chapter.
I do wonder what'll happen when they find out it wasn't Shining Armor, either, all those years ago.
And ten years is a long time to let go of grudges. It's good that Shining Armor is forgiving. Good for Celestia, especially. Better to earn the ire of one who'll forgive you in order to gain forgiveness from one who wouldn't otherwise.
I hope that Twilestia thing becomes important, and it was good to finally see Cadence mare up
Hmmmm. I guess I was wrong. After the last chapter I had thought that Celestia and Shiny could be a thing.
I can't wait for somepony to ask where Luna is... erm, 'hiding.'
Now I'm curious what interest Luna has in Twilight.
It's good to see Shining again. How exactly does his position as Luna's personal guard compare to the captain of the royal guards?
Is Cadance's magic affecting the ponies around her, or is this some alternate equestria where everyone is bisexual?
Well, that would've been a bit more interesting than what actually happened in the show.
I cannot like this enough!!!! cant wait for Rainbow to join love beat and Twilight though.
Also is Twilight war on hold? been awhile since that was updated
That was a much better Gala. Much, much better...
And please please, PLEASE tell me Luna wasn't with Shining or some random guard when the magic struck?!
Something tells me in this story ships don't matter because in the end, everypony bucks with everypony.
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It's a more personal position. Think of him more in terms of her Champion, rather than a guard captain. He does fulfill that role for her, but there's a lot of other duties involved.
Also - Cadence's magic is DEFINITELY Effecting everyone around her. This will be noted, and rather soon. ;)
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Yes. I needed a break from Twilight War's dark undertones. I've been going through some tough stuff in my life, and I needed to get away from it for a while.
Twilight War updates will resume in the near-ish future.
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Okay I won't tell you that.
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Grr, trollestia...
I'll let you know that for your story I'm ridding myself of any preconceived notions.
Ships go through the window because Chrysalis will choke on the love in Equestria at this rate.
Please, pull it off in a way that nobody is offended because of pairings.
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Good Lad.
Don't worry. I shall not dissapoint.
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If anyone can pull it off, it's you!
I believe in M.A.Larson Lapis-Lazuli!
The romance was sweet.. RarityxCelestia was sweeter.
Wait. Wait! Guys!
Doesn't Spike have anything to say? Didn't he have anyone to buck?
Rage... rising. Urge to do something unforgivable to a certain Princess... increasing... No, I... I won't... I...
"CELESTIA YOU ARE NOW WORST PUPPET MASTERING PONY!"
Well...Rarity always was aiming for royalty...
Oh bucking hell that ending. That is... *whistles*
This was a good chapter. Certainly a nice closer to my night of reading. Good work.
Bemused = confused
also: Marshmallow shipping for the win.
The moment I saw the part about cadences' magic spilling over, my only thought was, "AND THEN SEX HAPPENED"
WHOO ORGIES!!!
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All in favor of Twilunestiadance, say
Also,
Alternate Equestria? You must not be reading the same shipfics that I am
Ship Shining Armor and Luna! NOW!
For Shining to be a Hero of this era, he needs a reason to defend what better to be somepony and that would be Luna, now that he is the PERSONAL guard of said Princess of the Night.
I don't like the arising Twilight attraction story bid. It was funny and a story driving point for a few times but now it is basically the driving element of the story and keeping their "Friendship" which is not the basis for friendship.
That was a good chapter. I liked how you handled the privet conversation between Twilight and Cadance. It seemed to do them both a lot of good to hear her say that and say what she felt. The best part being that they still have to hammer out the details of things. Though I'll admit I wonder what spell twilight's got waiting in the wings.
The Gala will never be the same after this. I'm glad the girls and Spike had their fun though I can only wonder the havic that will be wrought once everyone's heads have cleared up come the morning. I'm almost betting more then one illegitimate foal was sired this night. And I'd really laugh if pinkie was carrying one such foal, bonus points if it's Blueblood's!
Still as excited as I am to see how the story progresses especially with discord coming up I wish you luck on your finals.
My mind is blown, keep up the good work.
Cadence and Twilight finally a thing. Nice.
AppleShy. Nice.
Celerity. FANTASTIC!
Rainbow's group / Pinkie's group, meh, not my thing but it was funny.
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You have my vote for it being a possibility!
But I see it more likely that Shining hooks up with Luna. Or HAS! We haven't see either of them yet.
Pfftahahahahahahahahaha
"The mare whom, by"
who
Oh dear me! That's certainly a… different version of the Gala! :D
My vote is also, Shiny and Luna.
I can't believe Twilight waited so long to tell Rainbow about spitfire though, figured that would have been a bigger priority.
Lapis has a dirty mind
The version of the Gala where everyone has sex instead. I'm fine with that.
Whoo hoo! Great job on this chapter!
AppleShy doesn't get used enough so I'm glad to see it done here.
I'm kinda curious why Rarity was with Celestia when the magic hit? Shouldn't she have been out flirting with Blueblood?
Odd...
Last chapter, when Cadence came back form doing farm work the wording of her conversation with Twilight implied she had sex with Applejack. Specifically this part:
That line about their friends being nuts is why I didn't think she had got it on with Big Mac.
Everyone wanted to see Luna and Shiney together and this may very well have set that into motion.
I really enjoyed the conversation between Cadence and Shining Armor. That was a long time coming. I'm glad to see Shiney isn't holding a long term grudge. I'm curious if he is really OK with Twilight getting together with Cadence. There is a large age gap there plus their own history together. I'm hoping we'll see more of Shiney.
Time for more speculation. We're coming up on Discord. I'm looking forward to this. Especially if Cadence gets 'Discorded'. Talk about a blow to a budding relationship. Since Cadence is Love her opposite would be Hate. Twilight may wind up very, very hurt.
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Ah ha! Thanks to you I get to ask Lapis his favorite question!
*ahem*
Where's Spike?
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Why indeed was Rarity with Celestia?
Luna and Shiny was planned long before the comments rolled in.
More Shiny is to come.
Spike was busy getting busy with Octavia.
The above line is an absolute fabrication, and now I want to make it into its own clopfic. *sigh*
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Sounds like a fun one shot to me.
I was giggling in delight and softly exclaiming various curse words FOR THE ENTIRE CHAPTER.
You have made my evening!
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Luna and Shining, huh? Very interesting.
My thought after Cadences magic started spreading:
Oh no!
No no no no no!
Oh dear Celestia NO!
Please don't have Rarity sleep with Blueblood, please please PLEASE!!!
*Celestia and Rarity walk in together*
Oh, thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou!!!!
So... did not see that coming. Or anypony else coming, for that matter!
I think I like this "Best Night Ever" story more than the original, and I look forward to what else Twilight and Cadance are going to get into.
And the grand galloping Gala was forever doomed to be awkward, between those who were afraid it would end up the same way and those who were hoping it would end up the same way.
I'm guessing babysitters will be in high demand for the next few galas
This... cannot possibly end well. °-° That's all I'll say for now.
Well Rarity, that's a major step up from Blueblood.......lol!
Well at any rate I'm gonna guess that Chrysalis's plan is going to unravel even faster this time around. Because she's going to have to be replacing and more importantly, confining, Luna, who very definitely does know how to fight. I giver her plan perhaps 8 hours till it all comes crashing down around her ears. And thats assuming that Luna somehow cannot use magic to just blast a hole straight through the side of the mountain to open air about five minutes after she wakes up. Or that Celestia doesn't go "Wait one second, I've known my sister a while, and you are not her." And even if she does somehow keep Luna confined for long enough, there's going to be a 3 on 1 Alicorn tag team battle waiting for her at the wedding.
Here I thought Cadence finally committing to Twilight was going to be the highlight of the chapter.
Then Rarilestia happened. Hee, marshmallow shipping.
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I am fairly certain it is utterly impossible to write a pairing that doesn't offend somebody, somewhere. Heck, a story shipping Mr. and Mrs. Cake is bound to rile someone's sensibilities.
4027329 I think I prefered when Luna called Twilight "Mistress".
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Oh god no, PLEASE go mad with the pairing!
TwiDance, AppleShy, RariLestia, ShineyLuna, Pinkie x all the stallions, Dash x All the wonderbolts! now we just need ChrysCord and everyone will be happy forever!
well, maybe not that last one...
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No no no no no! You're not thinking big enough. Twilight x Cadence x Everypony. Absolutely everypony. It will be a marriage with 92 million participants.
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Ah, of course, how narrow-minded of me.
Truly, how could I be so foolish?
Great chapter! I was concerned there for a few moments, but you did a very good job. I also like the way you handled Shiny and Cadey in this chapter.
Still damn... that differently was a better Grand Galloping Gala than cannon!
I approve of this Gala!