When a single, pointless fight shatters the love of a lifetime, the story we all thought we knew changes in ways that nopony could have expected.
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Argh! You do like you cliffhangers, don't you? :D
Arming the friendship cannon's secondary fire mode!
ooooh, nightmare celestia....most excellent....
This fic is great. I love "for want of a nail" AUs.
Whoa, is Twi ascending already? I guess that kind of makes sense considering how they activated the Elements this time.
Damn that chapter was awesome! The tension as we waited for the trap to spring, Chrysalis' attack Luna being temporarily turned against Celestia the all out brawl that followed. The return of nega-Cadance! Twilight snapping her out of it and Celestia putting her hoof down! it was all so incredible!
so much to ponder on, Why the love empowered element's did't drop Chrysalis even if they weakened her to some degree. Just what exactly the effects of cadence being involved with the element's magic will be. How Celestia went all out on Chrysalis only to be held back by Luna at the last possible second. Just what exactly the fate of Chrysalis and her changelings will be. Why shining was limping and what magic was used t seal the mines!
Let's not forget the elements deciding to throw a monkey wrench or three into Celestia's plans by apparently ascending Twilight early. Though we don't know for sure if that's what's happening but it appears to be so. Also why is it the elements are forming a ritual circle and why does Cadance need to be a part of it? is this side effect of her love magic being temporarily connected with them?
The questions and the unexpected twists just keep on coming and unlike a J.J. Abrams TV show we actually DO get satisfying answers! I can't wait for the next chapter so much to look forward to! The consequences of whatever magic is overcoming twilight! The girls eating some humble pie, a possible real wedding for Luna and Shining! Hopefully another chat with Celestia to explain what's happened and possibly even some further progress on both her and Cadance's issue!
Eee! So much to anticipate! I can't wait to see it all unfold! Why isn't time travel a thing so I don't have to wait!?
I kinda expected more form Chrysalis this time around. Her plan wasn't all that much better than the first one.
I'm hoping how this Chrysalis knew of the previous timeline's events will be addressed.
So, Shining Armor really did propose to Luna. I was kinda hoping he didn't. You know, to add more layers of drama.
Twilicorn so soon? Sombra is hosed big time then. That means poor Spike won't get his chance to shine in this timeline.
That...is a serious understatement.
Fun chapter. I'm guessing we have one or two more before it's all over?
Awesome. AWESOME! MORE AWESOME!
[AWESOME INTENSIFIES]
What happens next! Please don't leave us in suspense too long!
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Actually... Shining DIDN'T Propose to her.
You'll see how that shakes out.
All things Chrysalis will be addressed.
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I was wondering about that, but hey who says no to a goddess when she says, "you're marrying me, and I'm gonna rock your world tonight"?
Every time I see a twilight ascension scene done, I always think back to a great comic I saw where right after she disappears and leaves a big black scorch mark, the other 5 think the elements killed her and start to plan their alibis and how to best cover it up. Sadly I couldn't find it again to post it here, maybe if somepony knows the comic I'm talking about they might have better luck.
Sorry, I'm going for two!
Curse you, cliffhangers~!
THANKS M.A. LA
RPIS.Also: eeeeeeee, can't wait for the next chapter.
Ugh the cliffhanger D: You cruel monster
This one 'took so long'? This was still way faster than most stories I follow.
Cliffhanger!
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Probably because until they actually went off Chrysalis was still drawing on the lust of half the guard force and Luna herself (even though unconscious). Only once that was all taken away would Chrysalis be truly vulnerable, not before.
You'll notice that afterward she had no power.
4113979 Fair enough though why was that an issue if elements are shown to have the power to undo all the damage that Discord does? considering that he's implied to be in a class all his own even within the show itself?
Somehow, a one-chapter curb-stomp of Chrysalis seems... incredibly anticlimatic. And I find Celestia's line that Twilight being force-ascended out of thin air "has to happen" vaguely disquieting.
Woah. WOAH. WOAH.
Luna you kinky!
Y'know, if Celestia knows this isn't how it's supposed to be now, then how the hell didn't she notice it earlier?
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Celestia isn't noting the difference in timelines when she said that
Lol now this is going to be good. Can't wait to read the next chapter well done so far.
I loved how you used Murphy's Law to cause Twilight to ascend.
Now what would be funny is if he never intended to marry Luna at all.
Now, when will Chrysalis tell them all what she did all those years ago? Would have been a real good taunt when she and Cadance were fighting, throwing doubt into an old issue.
Great chapter cool fight scenes Cadance and Celestia were so badass in this chapter and what Luna said to Shining Armor was hilarious!
Great chapter! I loved the fight scene, and how Chrysalis ultimately screwed herself into being defeated even harder by changing the timeline. Messing with the Princess of Love on Hearts and Hooves Day? She should have known better...
I definitely also enjoyed Celestia getting some licks in in this redo. Her being defeated so easily in the original episode always rubbed me the wrong way.
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It’s got a reason why. In the original timeline, the guests were unaddressed, but we can assume they were present. In this one, they were being “struck down” by the changeling and corrupted guards. They were already in danger, and despair from her crush being dead. She has free rein to get ANGRY
This is cool. As postulated by Forthwith and some others, ascending to alicornhood is very easy. All you have to do is 1) have mastery over a fundamental force of nature; 2) have a power source capable of sustaining an ascension; and 3) a catalyst to kickstart the process. Twilight has the elements, is a master of magic, and her catalyst was linking Cadence to the elements successfully unifying love and harmony.
An interesting to think about changelings here is: do changeling queens work like flood graveminds? this Chrysalis is not the one who altered the past, yet she behaves like she is. is it possible that every queen of the same bloodline possesses the memories of all who went before her thus allowing her to update her knowledge to that of OG Chrysalis? It would certainly enhance their ability to adapt and the level of danger they present.