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Delicious dental porn...
Happy Birthday.
am i the only one who wants to now see a rainbowXcolgate ship based on this? 'cause that'd be pretty awesome.
Happy Birthday!
happy birthday bro.
if u think rainbow has a prob i had 3 root canals from a sk8tin event
Happy bday
Braces are agony anyway, but that just sounds like hell. Poor Dashie, I hope that childhood dentist got fired and sued.
My dad actually smashed 3 permanent teeth (Skating)
. Suck it up Dash! God damn! 
I don't see what you hate so much about this, though yeah, molestation is pretty bad. Preeeeetty bad. Still, it worked out in the end.
Pretty unorthodox method, though.
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I hate this story because it completely missed the point of a clopfic. A few kisses and Colgate eating out Dash. That's it. I planned to do way more, but due to an incredible lack of drive I quit writing this thing into its originally planned length, leaving it in the bare-bones story that it is.
That's why I hate it.
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Granted point. What was the original length you were going for?
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Between 4.5-6k, like my other clops.
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...Seriously? Why not aim for 10k? Get all the development you can out of it by providing a distinct beginning, middle and end? Could've included Pinkie's chat with Colgate, some proper build-up for the scene, and maybe even Rainbow's next check-up where she's a lot more comfortable - even excited - working with Colgate again.
There's a lot to develop here, and you've got a good chance to just start filling in the gaps. Bring it to the length you want it to be at.
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I don't have the dedication that many popular writers have, what with not being a native English person and all. So no, 10k is not gonna happen.
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Ehhh, you'd be surprised how quickly words can stack up if you get going. Just start with one of the scenes you wanted to include. Maybe stretch out the clop scene? Add in Pinkie's chat? You've got lots of areas to expand here, so just give it a try.
Even if you aren't a native English speaker, you still planned to give this a 5k length. You've got a goal, so go for it.
Trust me, I've really surprised myself with my clop. Released story is 12k long, and the one in development is around 11.7k and still growing. Planning on adding another 3-4k onto it.
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I include multiple aspects into this sort of consideration. One is, as I said, my limited English knowledge, meaning my average writing speed is 1k per hour. That, bundled with what comes with editing and everything, would mean I'd sit days on writing such a long story.
The other one is that I personally despise long clopfics. Of course, each to their own, but I've come for a quick release and not some meaningful character development or stuff like that. If I'm writing something I don't like I'm missing the entire point of writing (which is also why I almost didn't post this story).
Finally, I take into consideration what the general public will like, as I almost always write with the intention of getting at least a few nice words in return. I definitely know I'm not the only one who dislikes long clopfics.
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To each their own indeed. Still, I see room. It's up to you to use that room, or merely leave the story as it is and keep feeling disappointed in it.
Who cares if it'd take you days? Writing takes days in general. Just add to it bit by bit while doing other stuff. Do it because you want to. If you don't, then that's that, I suppose.
Did enjoy the concept here, but I can see why you hate it.
That was kinda weird. I didn't check the tabs, so it went from dentistry to—...
Huh. This actually wasn't too bad. I enjoyed it.
This was pretty adorable.