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I know I just released the last chapter on the 23rd, but I've been so eager to get to this bit that I just had to work on it until it was complete. A new chapter five days after the previous one? You better believe it. Who loves ya?
It's a "shorter" chapter than I usually do, but I think you'll all agree it's been a long time coming. Hope you all enjoy it, and Happy New Year!
Thank you ! :D
Both finally confessed?
This fic. I swear, you are the only author that I've ever seen (given that I don't really read much) that writes things at this level. I've yet to read another fanfiction written similarly. I've seen amazing slice of lifes, adventures, action stories..... clop...... But NEVER have I ever seen the subjects that you've chosen to write about in this story written in so much detail. There's also the fact of actually dating the princess. I have only seen a few authors write about it like how you did. Few people, including yourself, actually portray the problems behind just getting the date. Kudos to you.
In other words, thank you for writing this. I know it's for the public, but I'd just like to say that I enjoy it in my own special way.
Thanks.
Yes finally! I've been waiting for them to get together with such excitement. And when it finally happened it was much more heartwarming than even I expected. It kind of got to me i.imgur.com/w8fIAh.jpg
Great Chapter!
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You do!
And we love you!
And Terico loves Celestia!
And Celestia loves Terico!
And...! And...!
I'll just say, "yay!"
Now... What does she have to tell him about what she knows of humans? Even when things are getting exciting and going well there's still that tension lingering in the background.
Be strong Terico. She's not just any cute princess horse.
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YOU SHOULD BE ASHAMED OF YOURSELF YOU MONSTER!
P.S. Hugs
Thank the heavens they confesd!
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Hurray! they are going to be together…now if Celestia could find a spell that grant Tercio immortality? hey, he is already unusual with that weird command that make him go Tasmania devil so it could be, boy will Celestia be so fill of joy if that is the case
Yay
YYYYYEEEEESSS!!!!!!
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Maybe I've been reading too many Celestia Romance stories, but I have to wonder if this story will end up with Tercio somehow reappearing in Ponyville a thousand years later or something, while also somehow being granted agelessness.
FUCKING FINALLY!............................my washing's done..........................oh and they finally kissed too, its about time they did as well
great work well done
They confessed!!!!!
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while i agree with those below my post, I only worry about the 'prophecy' regarding the human. This can go so many ways now...
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Huzzah! The shippiness have begun!
:D
Somehow I'm looking forward to 'meeting parents' scene (if there will be one considering circumstances that our heroes are facing), it should be very funny.
Dear Mom and Dad,
I will visit for Hearth's Warming, although my stay will be short. However I'm sure Mom that you will be happy to hear that I will be coming together with my very special somepony. I'm sure you both will love her.
With all my love,
Tercio
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I'm more worried about the pendant given by Elinwyyn to Celestia. Although I suppose both pendant and prophecy can be connected.
The ship has set sail!
OH BUCK YEAH! ALL ABOARD THE SHIP!
Woo!
WAY TO GO, TERCIO! Didn't think these two kids were ever gonna get that done. One problem down, another thousand to go :) Love the build up in this story. This is well on it's way to epicness!
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Subtlety is for cowards and the Dutch.
I think this will be most appropriate regarding the princess.
I find her courage enlightening. Courage is going forward despite ones own fear. And she is just as capable of feeling it as any other. Whether it goes over well, or ends in tragedy (and the greeks loved those) it will be quite the ride.
One of my favorite things about this story, and particularly this chapter, is that you didn't go three chapters in, or two or even the first and have Celestia fawning over him. You built it up, took your time and made it mean something. Even more so is that he has flaws, as does Celestia. It was satisfying to see them finally confess their feel's to each other.
The quality of your story is...Well, it's pretty good!
keep it up man!
Is it okay if I just stop here, where everything is just so sweet and perfect?
Bah who am I kidding this story is to damn good, just try and stop me other me!
YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YEEEEEEEEESSSSSS!!!
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Hell yes!!! Finally!!!!
THIS is romance done right! Slow, cautious, and unsure. This fic has been so well written, I can't stop reading it.
Was reading this chapter in class, and since I got so immersed I hadn't realized I said, "Fuck yeah!" Teacher just rose an eyebrow and asked what I was read to warrant such a reaction.
YES!!!
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Wait what now... Please do explain. You have awakened a very curious side of me with that statement.
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Ooooh, i think it is a little too late for that i fear.
I found it funny how I was listening to Boulevard of Broken Dreams while reading the last bit.
It fit so wrong!
Now let this be a lesson to all you aspiring writers out there. THIS is how you do it, cautious, well thought out and slowly paced. No need to rush into something, and the characters naturally gravitate to each other. Extremely well done, and I'd put this up right next to Xenophillia as an example of how to do it right.
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Well thank you! That's very nice of you to say
(Excited noises that are more fitting of a pubescent school girl)
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Precisely
And so our little romance arc hits it’s high point- I could stop here, and lie comfortably knowing this is when everything is going to shit. Right here. Too bad I’m too damn emotionally invested to stop the inevitable feels train. Ah, shit.
I'm just glad they did romance slowly and not like others where it is "love at first sight" bullshit.