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Hello there readers, friends, and mortal enemies! Sorry to keep you waiting for so long for the new chapter, but I really wanted to get my Nightmare Night story done and out the door before picking up JBtD. Unfortunately, How the Foundation Ruined Nightmare Night has about as many views as hours it took to write it over two years, so that's pretty disappointing. Nevertheless, I got chapter 20 done and I'm pretty happy with the result. I spent four hours finishing it up at work last night (late shift is pretty slow...) and it even managed to be longer than my usual chapters. So, hooray for that.
Anyway, enjoy the chapter, and thanks for reading. Much love.
-Dref
Mein Gott.... It's beautiful.... "Kneels down to bath in the fics holy prescence"
PRAISE THE SUN!!!
its fun watching two people try to rationalize how they arent interested in another
Yes I knew Tercio wouldn't fall for her err... womanly- marely charms???
Good chapter. Can't wait for more! :D
Well, That was certainly unexpected, as to her sudden advances. I'm not partial to HiE stories, but I must say, you've got me hooked on this one...
Pony date rape drug always sneak up on people.
So, Sapphire has her as a servant?
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At first, I thought she gave him the love poison. I guess an aphrodisiac is pretty effective too. Wonder how Celestia will take this, assuming she finds out about it at all.
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Glad to hear it! HiE has become my "thing", it seems. As long as people are happy with it, I'm happy to keep writing.
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Pony-Roofies are a hell of a drug.
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You know, I've never actually watched RWBY. All I've seen of it is an incredibly bad-ass fight scene gif. I should really give it a go some time.
So freaking awesome! I certainly hope that Tercio finds his longing with Celestia as guard or otherwise even more strengthened by this night.
I was certainly missing your next chapter and leapt on this as soon as it hit my inbox.
I look forward to the next chapter of the story!
Would what Sapphire did count as rape?
Nice to see Tercio able to overcome the date rape.
Also, Celestia feeling a bit jealous :D
It be an update mon.
Celestia will not be happy when she finds out. Wait, if this is inspired in part by Rome, does that mean brutal executions?
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Maybe. I was thinking of banishment to the sun. That probably wouldn't be very fun.
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Purification by solar flame does wonders for the soul. Not so much the body though.
Awesome chapter! Ohhh boy! What's gonna happen to Sapphire once Celestia hears word about this!?
Awesome chapter! Ohhh boy! What's gonna happen to Sapphire once Celestia hears word about this!?
Thank you Tercio, you live up to my expectations.
It's interesting to read the chapter and note that totally suckering him probably wasn't Sapphire's actual goal, though she did want him amenable. This could simply be that ancient ponies don't understand how different substances can have different effects based on body type and species. A little does for a pony could be almost an overdose for Terico.
But even a misunderstanding has to bow before true feelings, though it's going to cause problems in the process.
Especially if some are too reserved to take the steps to realize the truth.
(You hear that Celly? Get off your (gorgeous) royal rump!)
So, bros before hoes is the lesson here?
Tercio: "Yo Sapphire, I'm really happy for you, Imma let you finish, oh wait, no I won't." BUUUURRNNNNN!
Well, props for being the first HiE where the human is drugged and raped that actually surprised me. I was not expecting Tercio to come to his senses and do the proper thing, namely think with his bigger head, put that bitch in her place and walk out of there.
The funny thing was, given how drunk he already was and how he was already sort of wishing the mares gave him more attention in the bathhouse, if Sapphire was a bit more patient and tactful she could have had a night of fun with him anyway, even if she couldn't get him as a freakshow sidepiece.
How pleasantly surprising. I figured he was under the effects of some sort of drug, but i didn't think he'd shake the effects. less so that he'd feel shame in what had happened. Most every story I've read up to this point it has only turned such an event to anger. I'm glad to see a difference in this one.