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Chapter 2, completely typed up and ready to go in 3 days of work. Not too bad if I do say so. Hope you all enjoy it.
Also, you didn't see me accidentally publish this without a chapter name at first. Nope. It was all a figment of your pony-crazed imaginations. A figment, I tell you!
This chapter didn't pop out on my update list. Weird.
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Same here.
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Really? That's pretty strange. Not sure what could cause that.
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Luckily I saw it in my feed, but it wasn't in my update list.
Pretty awesome. I get this Game of Thrones feel from this, if you can believe it. I like it, personally.
This reminds me so much of the HBO show Rome. It's my new favorite thing ever.
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Nine times out of ten, it seems to be because the author (accidentally or otherwise) published, unpublished, and re-published the chapter. The server thinks it's a re-post, and doesn't flag it as new. The rest of the time, who knows.
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Not true. When I accidentally unpublished and then republished two of my chapters (who the fuck puts an unconfirmable unpublish button next to the edit button?), I had tons of comments asking where the new chapter was. However, several times when I update, I have even more people mentioning that my story didn't show up in their favorites list. First I assumed it was because there's over a hundred chapters and well over a million words and the server couldn't handle that, but I'm hearing more people having the same problem.
Something is rotten in the state of fimfic, and it's not writers fucking up when they publish chapters.
I have little doubt that this visit may have been spurred by the appearance of the traitorous guard... I'm interested in seeing what the chancellor has to say about it.
Chances of Celestia being waylaid and hiding out in Summervale? My 8-ball says "likely."
I'm also very suspicious of Terico's almost evasive answer about his "relations."
I can tell this is going to be another one of those stories that's strangely hard for me to read. Like Indigo Eclipse's "To Love the Moon" I just can't help but be jealous of the protagonists and their relationships with the princesses. Terico you lucky bastid.
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I love Game of Thrones, so that's a huge compliment
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Rome was my biggest inspiration for this story, and I've tried to capture the feeling of it here. Hopefully I can keep doing so!
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Not sure exactly what is is about Turcio, he just really reminded me of Lucius Vorenus from the show.
It seems like the pacing is setting us up so that, though his lifeis central to the story, his actions will directly and indirectly affect all the little political and tatical intrigues going on around him.
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Just please don't actually make it like Game of Thrones. As much as I enjoy the writing and a lot of the elements Martin puts into his work, he completely lost me as a reader by the end of the series. All those jokes about him killing everyone in his stories aren't exactly exaggerations, and it made it completely impossible to actually care about any of them. After all, why bother caring about a character when you already know what's gonna happen to them?
But I have faith that you're better than that, so I'm not worried. I finally got the free time to catch up on this and now I wish I had waited longer. The wait for the next chapter is gonna kill me. I almost literally can't wait to see what's next.
This is one of the best stories I've read in a long time.
I just wanna say that: ponies being better in personal combat against a human, complete bullshit.
Even if the average Earth pony were stronger than the human, our maneuverability and agility far exceeds any pony. Humans are among the best fighters in the animal kingdom if they don't suck. Add swords into that, then a human should be a decent fighter against all Earth ponies, most pegasi(I'm guessing some might be too fast and be a hassle to fight), and I suppose unicorns too (depending on how strong the unicorn's magic is)
Another thing, How do you pronounce Tercio?
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Well it's a good thing Tercio hasn't fought anyone yet, then. But don't you worry, I have plans for our resident human.
And to answer your question, Tercio is pronounced thusly: Tur (like fur)-see-oh. Tercio.
Easy, right?
Jupiter's cock! Enjoyed this chapter immensely, well done!
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And don't forget humans stronger weapon, our brain, if a way don't work his intellect could always bring the best of him and bring him victorious, that its how imagine he reach the royal guard, because its more than obvious that he had to compete with a thousands unicorns, pegasus and earth ponies for a place there.
So either he outwit all of them and manage to find a way to cast magic, or manage to block it, I aiming for the second option
3885168 Ok thanks! Glad to know I was pronouncing it correctly.
Interesting. I'll keep reading for now. Can't really get a gauge on it since this is all set-up still. Looks promising though!
Some things I have found:
Sooooo, is he the only human in equestria?
3885410 also we are predators by nature and in a world of herbavores, we are the boogeyman. Also a flash of our canines should dissuade many an attacker.
I swear man, you have such brilliant execution. My mind gave Swift Strike such a rough, heartbroken, and trembling voice. I actually had to stop, and briefly take stock as I had tears welling up from literally feeling like I was there; Like a sorrowful movie scene playing out in my mind.
Now shit is about to hit the fan. I'm quite hooked on this story now.
DEATH TO THE TRAITORS! Sorry, just my inner Adeptus Astartes speaking...
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Their heresy will not go unpunished! Hail the Emperor!
Darn it now you got me doing it.
Roughshod certainly does have a very Roman view of relationships and life doesn't he.
LEGIONARIES, WHAT IS YOUR PROFESSION
TO SLAUGHTER ALL WHO STAND AGAINST ROME
And it shows just how much can change in a scant thousand years, doesn't it? When Luna was banished, the people couldn't imagine a world where there weren't two princesses ruling Equestria. A thousand years later, and the people couldn't imagine a world where there were...