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Whew. Finally! I've been busting my ass to get this chapter finished recently. Thankfully it's been a slow night so I managed to get my proofreading done in one go, albeit slower than I would like thanks to Fimfiction's bizarre tendency to smash random words together when you commit the unthinkable sin of indenting your paragraphs. I think I caught them all, but let me know if one slipped my attention.
Anyway, the update is finally here. I could have had it out sooner, at roughly half its length, but I wanted to take the time to make this one EXTRA THICC so that it wouldn't end on an unsatisfying cliffhanger. There's still that 'I wonder what happens in the next chapter' hook at the end, of course, but it's better than having it cut away just as shit is getting interesting.
Those of you who have been waiting for Celestia to do something awesome: rejoice, your time is neigh! I never planned to have her be a useless goddess ala Aqua, but I also don't want her to be a one-pony wrecking crew. Striking a balance meant that I had to bide my time with her, so hopefully everyone is happy now that she's contributed. I had that scene planned out for a loooong time. Like, over a year. I've been impatiently waiting to write it out just as much as you've been impatiently waiting to read it.
Tia is pissed. Ain't no goin' back now!
Enjoy the chapter, and I'll see you again soon.
...I wish we'd get new ponemotes. Why is our only Celestia emote her being a smartass? I demand regal Celestia, damnit.
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The endless fight for more pone emotes is a tiring one.
This was the moment I've been waiting for the entire fic. Absolutely epic turnaround. You do not fuck with Celestia
Oh this is just too damn exciting!
Kill them Tia. Kill them all.
Muhahahaha.
Talk about dishing out burns. Serious sunburn right there.
’Bout time Tia let loose. It’s what I’ve been waiting to see all this time.
Elinwynn better hope that dark magic she’s consumed (by) has some serious tricks up its sleeve.
Another fantastic chapter, I'm dying to see just how badly the dark magic will end up affecting Elinwynn.
This was a great back and forth between the two rulers, things were said that needed to be out in the open for all to hear. Now I wonder what the deer will do with it.
YES. I need more right now, in my bloodstream.
Wouldn't "neigh" actually mean "never" in this case?
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Elinwynn, fully consumed in her transformation: "ABSOLUTE POWER! DIE, CELESTIA!"
Nightmare Moon: "Ah, someone was stupid enough to tap into my power. You belong to me now, 'empress.'"
Elinwynn: "This power comes from you? No! This is all mine, pitiful pony-"
*yoink to the moon*
Nightmare Moon: "Ah, a plaything to keep me company until I find a way free, sister..."
Celestia: *gulp*
-----One Thousand Years Later-----
Twilight Sparkle: "We freed Luna! Yay!"
Mane Six: "Yay!"
Rainbow Dash: "Wait. Who's the deer curled up in the corner, and why's she crying?"
Finally! I just love seeing Celestia out there giving those wicked deer what they deserve. Hope there's one hell of a reckoning coming. Celestia should have assimilated the Cervidaen Hegemony before they got so powerful though. Turning a blind eye for so long has definitely been a mistake in my opinion. Better to take a tyrant out when they've just come to power then let them be an issue down the road.
Time and again history had proven that those who welcomed it, who nourished it and fed upon it in turn, were never contempt with letting it consume themselves alone.
Should be "content"
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Whoops, didn't notice that typo when I was proofreading. Thanks!