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Here's your bi-weekly update, gentle readers. No one has called for me to be tarred and feathered with the shredded remains of my story just yet, so I'm assuming things are a-okay. I'm currently balls-deep in Prison Architect so I don't have a witty saying right this moment. I do, however, have some pony music for you to listen to. Good luck getting it out of your head for the next week. YOU'RE WELCOME.
So, enjoy the chapter, and I'll see you for the next one.
i had a hunch the deer couldnt be trusted, and now i feel bad for our human. we all know how he will be "entertaining" miss quills.
Good chapter, can't wait to see Celestia's reaction to Tercio's acceptance of the party.
Aaaaah, the arrogance of upper class ladies, gotta love how they actully belive that the entire World circles around them.
I think the redtails have been watching to much Game of Thrones.
I suspect those two or someone connected to them have something to do with out human's appearance here.
Seems everything was not as it seemed to be, and mores the pity, seems not everyone is honest in intentions at the moment.
I'm honestly surprised that Celestia has let the Equestrians touch White Tail territory. The ponies did not want war and stopping immediately after driving the deer back across the border would have proven this to the deer. The ponies could have but did not, and the deer would have known this.
A bloodthirsty conqueror - like the fanatics tried to make her out to be - doesn't pull back at the edges of their own territory.
Also, what the heck does Celestia know about humans?! There's history there, but she always feigns ignorance when around Terico.
Wow I hope that mare doesn't try to rape him
Tercio's inner musings are always a treat to read and the way you distinct factions at war and otherwise, do wonders in terms of world building and lore. This story is just way too much fun to read!
Hot damn. I hope you make a point of showing why there are no deer in the setting of the show.
I know exactly what Sapphire Quill needs
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This girl is THIRSTY.
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It is indeed quite fun. If I didn't have this pesky "work" thing, I'd be reading this nonstop until I have caught up.
...Called it.
Considering the state of "mordern" Equestria...We can be pretty sure about the outcome of this incursion from the deers.
And I guess the griffin/griffons will plays "Good guys all along" and help out their Equestrian neighbour.
This fic exemplifies why I will always LOATHE the Equestrian mythos regarding their solar system; Kill one pony, doom the whole fucking world.
Though I am trying to figure out what's going on. Narrowed down to three possibilities, no ideas on the human bit though.
1) Luna did go crazy/become jealous/dabble in dark magic a bit too much and genuinely became Nightmare Moon. I find the jealousy bit hard to agree with though if Celestia is being even half truthful about those letters of admiration. Also don't quite buy that she can be summoned to Equestria in any waking form while banished to the Moon via Elements.
2) Red deer did it, whatever their empire name is. Already shown the ability to dominate one ponies mind, what's to prevent them from dominating Luna's during a state visit. A convenient scapegoat for their destabilization of Equestria, though their plan to kill Celestia...and hopefully they had one in case they succeeded.
3) See 2, substitute changelings. Actually wait, it's always changelings.
Hmm. I suppose one could spin it that centuries of magicking the Sun and Moon have interfered enough with orbital mechanics...and/or that as long as Celestia and Luna are alive and linked to the bodies through their Cutie Marks orbital mechanics won't function.
So Elinwyyn is behind the Nightmare Cult? I'll bet the gift she gave Celestia is what's causing her nightmares and seeing hallucinations of Luna and Nightmare Moon.
Welp. I did not see that coming. Nice.
Alright, so the true antagonists show themselves- well, I question that notion, being that it’s early on in a half a million word story, but they are antagonists of challenge nonetheless. May the puppet games begin.