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Shorter chapter today, been a busy couple of weeks. I wanted to get out something for an update, rather than make you wait for another week or more, so here it is. Enjoy!
Oh, and if you haven't heard yet: THE WAIT IS FINALLY OVER! Season 5 officially premieres on April 4th.
GET HYPE!
Are those hints of Glindraanis X Alinalyys I see in there?
And you get a ship! And you get a ship! And you get a ship!
I really like to see the mixing of cultures even in the war. Equestria and Whitetail are neighbors so there should be some deer on one side and some ponies on the other because even the best border isn't impregnable. I'd bet that some of those inn-goers were locals and were more than ready to stand up to Terico in Glindraanis' defense. He's been one of their community for so long.
Now that would have been an interesting altercation to see.
P.S. I just began wondering what the Equestrian history books say about this period. Twilight's a pretty thorough researcher; what does she know/think about Terico?
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Mystified most likely. For Twilight, this man would probably be legendary in his actions.
This was actually a really good chapter in my own opinion, even as "short" as it is. Good job!
The problem is that if Chancellor agrees to surrender, he gets disgraced, but ends the war. Agreeing to Corvalix's offer will result same in him getting disgraced but fuels the war again. Care to explain why he chooses the latter?
5708520 April 4th you say??
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>and some ponies on the other
Not, if what Glindraanis heard about deportations and executions is true :/
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I know right!
I tend to have to take it in bite size bits because of the same reason.
But, oh how great those bits are!
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Unfortunately, I have now run out of bits to read! I honestly feel the excitement of waiting for Season 5 and for a new chapter of this story with equal measure.
Drefsab, you are doing Celestia's work with this story. I impatiently await a new ep, err chapter.
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Oh, hohohoho!
I see what you did there.
I that's some major hype mah friend!
This should really have more views and likes than what it currently has. This is like an HBO series lol no joke, some minor grammar errors though, not really all that annoying, just unpleasent to see. For example: ''reds and blues and purples''- obviously not from this story, but you do this often enough, you should use more commas.
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Funny, I tend to get people telling me that I use too many commas. In all honestly, it's a stylistic choice. One of my favorite authors, Dan Abnett, likes to write his descriptions like that, so I thought I'd copy his style. I kinda like it, but, of course, YMMV.
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Heh, i never quite heard of anyone using repeated ''and's'' xD but ok.
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Eh, can't please everyone. I'm fully aware that normally there would be commas there, but it's a stylistic choice that, usually, exists to convey a sense of urgency. I try to keep such uses confined to things like combat scenes, but sometimes it slides by after writing for long periods of time.
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I've been reading (The Chase) for the last 2 months only, tring to get it done and after 700 chapters i felt i needed a short break. So i started on this story and i will say that i'm glad i did. HIE storys are not always my thing, but i do read them and this has been a thrilling story. I will be looking forward to the updates once i have caught up.
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700 chapters? Holy shit! And I thought I was long winded. Glad you're enjoying the story, it's pretty close to wrapping up.
From earlier depictions I thought Vinawyll was a character of integrity who was going to be caught between the best of bad outcomes and a Senate that would not see reason. Unfortunately, it presently looks like I was wrong. The choices are surrender to the Equestrians, surrender to the redtails, and surrender to death; a courageous deer could to have presented that choice plainly to the Senate, adding that only one option did not accompany his resignation. I mean, if that option outrages them enough that he fears pushing it too hard would invite assassination, surely they would accept him merely losing office, instead of insisting on his life as well.
But as later opined (I write this having read up to 31), perhaps he just doesn't see loss of his position as acceptable no matter the consequences.