*Checks the tags. No Dark tag*

Ok, I feel better about how this is going to go now.

6276352 Same here. I'm hoping it leans a bit more towards consensual in the next chapter though.

i eagerly await more, also I wonder if rarity is going to become ever mor burdened with eggs and ..expanding boobs~

It's Alive! Woooooo I didnt see the earlier update... Q-Q I cri'd... the chapters were good tho, I love this Rarity development

leaving her to fully breath for the first time

1. Breathe.

6278085 You'll see that a lot all across Fimfiction. Like seriously, the amount of times I've seen something like "I can't breath!" used in a story is just ridiculous.

It's so nice to this updated.
Also, this chapter was awesome.

I wonder what is so special in Rarity that made some tentacle abomination tear a hole through the fabric of reality and target her specifically to carry its offspring... Was it a simple coincidence, or does her being the Element of Generosity have something to do with it?

Anyway, I'm glad to see this story still going on

6278704
"Of course you can't breath! Breath is a noun not a verb!"

Excellent work, as always! :D

I didn't know slugs liked marshmallows.

Well, she's fucked. Oh, wait... Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.

6278704
Well, to be honest, it's way easier to breathe than to breath. No wonder so many characters have trouble with that.

*sees incomplete status then sees last updated*
Please sir may I have some more?

Any plans?

Is it dead?

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Thank you for confirming what's going on.

Will be awaiting your next story. You're really good author