4726697 it is when underaged ponies engage in intercourse with others, be they of like ages or adult. and if that was sarcasm i literally give -1800 shits.
4731303 Ohohoho, I have a feeling you're gonna cover most of Ponyville.. meaning Pinkie is gonna have her turn too, another one the blog skipped over. Can't waaaaait.
Thankfully it was still attached to the the pole I..I’m here. Just a moment Dash continued, gostling her bags Oh..um, well would feel a bump against her teats as the slime push forward as evidenced by sudden stop in motion Nothing went passed us as we fell As Scootaloo inhaled a deep breathe from the first intrusion causing some of it so seep in between slow, smooth movements and short Applebloom looked passed Scootaloo as Applebloom continued to watch Scootaloo’s stomach expanded once again lobing bomb after bomb
1. Extra The. 2. You forgot to complete your ellipses. And you need a space after it. 3. Jostling. 4. Same as 2. 5. Pushed. 6. As evidenced by a sudden stop in motion. 7. Past. 8. Breath. 9. To. 10. Smoothe. 11. Same as 7, Past. 12. Expand. 13. Lobbing.
Welp, Twilight just done gone and summoned little tentacles into herself. What a way to (accidentally) get off. Now she has to observe though the haze of pleasure. Good thing Spike isn't that tall or wasn't there at all
So, quick recap: Fluttershy cums her brains out, Twilight summons an interdimensional worm colony into her uterus, and the Cutie Mark Crusaders get covered in tree sap. Again.
4733769 Gotta disagree with 10. Smooth is a completely correct way of spelling it, there's no need to change it. In fact I don't think I've ever seen it spelled as 'smoothe' (even spell check says that's wrong).
4739980 Hmm, could just be my education system which differs in spelling. Like how it's comparable for US and UK. Welp, it'll be noted then, thanks for the heads up!
5465517 I am trying to work on the next chapter, but work has been slow due to me having recently moved and high stress at work. Im hoping to finish it up soon, but how soon soon is still remains to be seen.
Comment posted by Doomagedon deleted Jan 6th, 2015
What's foalcon?
4726697
it is when underaged ponies engage in intercourse with others, be they of like ages or adult.
and if that was sarcasm i literally give -1800 shits.
4726736 no I really didn't know I usually don't read such things
Holy schnizzbiscuits. There's going to be so many distended bellies around Ponyville come tomorrow morning...
4726829
Welcome to the dark side, we have cookies too
4728257 Mmmmm, chocolate chip. Yummy.
4728296 Whenever I get around to finishing it. I don't really have a set schedule for releases.
Welp, even more mares (or fillies) got unintentionally stuffed
I'm surprised Twilight made such a simple mistake, though. She must have been really distracted by her eagerness to summon those little tendrils
Also, I hope we'll get to see that futa-endowing flower (mentioned in the previous chapter) in action some time in the future
4728679 Are you a mind reader?
Them slimes are the CUTEST!!!!
4728739 The blog that inspired this fic, which is just as excellent, got no love for Rarity. What about you, do you plan of using the character?
4731188 Have you gotten into my notes?
4731303 Ohohoho, I have a feeling you're gonna cover most of Ponyville.. meaning Pinkie is gonna have her turn too, another one the blog skipped over. Can't waaaaait.
Thankfully it was still attached to
thethe poleI..I’m here. Just a moment
Dash continued, gostling her bags
Oh..um, well
would feel a bump against her teats as the slime push forward
as evidenced by sudden stop in motion
Nothing went passed us as we fell
As Scootaloo inhaled a deep breathe from the first intrusion
causing some of it so seep in
between slow, smooth movements and short
Applebloom looked passed Scootaloo
as Applebloom continued to watch Scootaloo’s stomach expanded once again
lobing bomb after bomb
1. Extra The.
2. You forgot to complete your ellipses. And you need a space after it.
3. Jostling.
4. Same as 2.
5. Pushed.
6. As evidenced by a sudden stop in motion.
7. Past.
8. Breath.
9. To.
10. Smoothe.
11. Same as 7, Past.
12. Expand.
13. Lobbing.
Welp, Twilight just done gone and summoned little tentacles into herself. What a way to (accidentally) get off. Now she has to observe though the haze of pleasure. Good thing Spike isn't that tall or wasn't there at all
So, quick recap: Fluttershy cums her brains out, Twilight summons an interdimensional worm colony into her uterus, and the Cutie Mark Crusaders get covered in tree sap. Again.
4737198 Just another day on the internet.
4733769
Gotta disagree with 10.
Smooth is a completely correct way of spelling it, there's no need to change it. In fact I don't think I've ever seen it spelled as 'smoothe' (even spell check says that's wrong).
4739980 Hmm, could just be my education system which differs in spelling. Like how it's comparable for US and UK. Welp, it'll be noted then, thanks for the heads up!
Damn! Zecora is a bomb-slinging badass!!
~The Rift Walker
That was interesting.
Keep up the good work.
Damn, I was half hoping the futa-plant would get the fillies. Whatever.
4731303 plzzz tell what happens to twilight
5465517 I am trying to work on the next chapter, but work has been slow due to me having recently moved and high stress at work. Im hoping to finish it up soon, but how soon soon is still remains to be seen.
5465865 plzz hurry i cant wait any longer plzz
Damn, Zecora is such a badass. Reguardless of that, I can't wait to see what you do next.
Update?
*sigh* zecora... you are several minutes late. Dontcha know?!
5578507 huh?
5578921 i had meant that to be talking about zecora... it was a mistype.
5579268 Oh, okay. Had me confused for a moment.
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5614902 Be careful, they may go further than hugging.
Mind if I add this to the "Parasites and Symbiotes" group?
5690720 No problem. Go ahead.
5690723 so hey, can we get a status update on this story?
5731961 I have slotted several hours this weekend to work on it.
5732410 nice, man. I'd love to see what is cumming next in this story:)
Aside me, that is.
So is there going to be more? (I love btw)
5732410 Plzzz hurry I feel like ima splode from anticipation
sad that there hasn't been anything new on such wonderfull and hot story
Update?
oh good, the ass tree died.
I'm not usually one for foalcon, but multi-recipient tentacle sex?
me likey.
While I feel horrible joking about this and actually am more than a little appalled at the UNDERAGE RAPE SCENE, someone had to say it.
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