• Member Since 25th Apr, 2013
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Sakura


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Comments ( 3 )

You have two.
sometimes
In the same sentence... oww Kill one of them.
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Rarity said no.

>:0 why am I being told this, I wanted to shown the action and reaction.

Sweetie belle is a true robot.
'Yes, rarity'
Is her go to line, what happened to her spunk.

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The story idea is fine, tho it is riddled with gammer mistakes at this time.
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Make Sweetie a bit more spunky, child like and whiney, she wants a tree she likes and keeps getting denied. Even I would get a bit mad.
The Robot just goes thru a process of. Is this what the user wants. Until the end.

Needs a touch up,
Nice try, tho.

You gonna do all 12 pains from the song this fic is based off of, with Rarity and Sweetie Belle? Or with various ponies? :trixieshiftright:

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I was going to do that idea, but then I changed it....but I still think that's a better idea, so I'll change it.

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