• Member Since 25th Apr, 2013
  • offline last seen Dec 23rd, 2017

Sakura

Welcome to the Dubstep (On hiatus until July 26th)

Sakura Joined 25th Apr, 2013 · Offline

Also LikedSimilarAuthor

Comments ( 3 )
RemareShadows
RemareShadows #1 · Dec 22nd, 2013 · · ·
Reply

You have two.
sometimes
In the same sentence... oww Kill one of them.
....

Rarity said no.

>:0 why am I being told this, I wanted to shown the action and reaction.

Sweetie belle is a true robot.
'Yes, rarity'
Is her go to line, what happened to her spunk.

----
The story idea is fine, tho it is riddled with gammer mistakes at this time.
----

Make Sweetie a bit more spunky, child like and whiney, she wants a tree she likes and keeps getting denied. Even I would get a bit mad.
The Robot just goes thru a process of. Is this what the user wants. Until the end.

Needs a touch up,
Nice try, tho.

SuperPinkBrony12
SuperPinkBrony12 #2 · Dec 22nd, 2013 · · ·
Reply

You gonna do all 12 pains from the song this fic is based off of, with Rarity and Sweetie Belle? Or with various ponies? :trixieshiftright:

Sakura
Sakura #3 · Dec 22nd, 2013 · · ·
Reply

3664252

I was going to do that idea, but then I changed it....but I still think that's a better idea, so I'll change it.

Login or register to comment

Stats

Page generated in 0.082 seconds
Total duration
1,080 users online
2,021,980 hits today, 2,782,760 yesterday

• Site Statistics

FIMFiction

My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024

• Privacy
• Cookies
• Staff
• Licenses

Follow & Support Us

Support us
SubStar Chat!
Discord Follow us
Twitter

MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®