Even Nightmares Have Happy Endings

iamli3 #1 · Dec 3rd, 2013 · · ·

why do all the newest fics seem to get 2 thumb ups and downs by default?....

aww man come on , you put several long chapters of interesting story into 3 lines of description :l ? i wanna read what the description is about before reading what this fic is about.....

BarrenBaron

BarrenBaron #2 · Dec 3rd, 2013 · · ·

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This is an original enough idea (not the ship, I feel like I've seen it before) that I was almost tempted to ask permission to write more in this universe, then I remembered I can't write to save my skin.

Bakmah Genesis

Bakmah Genesis #3 · Dec 3rd, 2013 · · ·

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Sowwy. This probably won't be my only clopfic. If I do anymore I will add length where it will be needed, chapters where they are wanted, and fix all the other mistakes I put into this. Hopefully the next ?x? Clop I do is a bit better than this thing.

iamli3

iamli3 #4 · Dec 3rd, 2013 · · ·

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3571240 >apologizes saying this wont be the only fic
...ok , how does that matter to what i said though?...

3571239 hah.....

but god danmit , 5 downvotes already? there be some nightmare luna haters about.....

Bakmah Genesis

Bakmah Genesis #5 · Dec 3rd, 2013 · · ·

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I was apologizing due to its lack in length. I seem to have that problem.

Discord Kantus

Discord Kantus #6 · Dec 3rd, 2013 · 1 · ·

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This was really good. I enjoyed it quite a bit. Having said that, there's one problem with this that could easily be a deal-breaker for some; the story. Not that the story's bad; I found it pretty good, as far as 5000 words on a site for writing stories about cartoon horses really goes. The main issue is that you tried to have both a pretty decent story and detailed lesbian sex at the same time. Those interested in storytelling will be turned off by the clop, and cloppers will be annoyed to have to sift through 3000 words of story in order to get to the good stuff. I personally enjoy both varieties of story, so this was an enjoyable read in my opnion, but the common ground between the two is uncommon at best.

BarrenBaron

BarrenBaron #7 · Dec 3rd, 2013 · · ·

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3571275 What? At the very least it'd be nice to write more about the reformation period...

iamli3

iamli3 #8 · Dec 3rd, 2013 · · ·

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3571374 like what this should have been.....

3571364 basically what this guy said.....

benjamin

benjamin #9 · Dec 3rd, 2013 · · ·

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more like this?

Mist Shaker

Mist Shaker #10 · Dec 3rd, 2013 · · ·

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Damn... Just hearing about how Nightmare Moon came to be makes me feel bad, you know... sad, not sick, because I really don't like seeing nice people get rejected and become mean.

Mist Shaker

Mist Shaker #11 · Dec 3rd, 2013 · · ·

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3571285 For a first clop, I would say that it is actually worthy to be added to two groups, one of which I am an admin of called Post Apocalyptica, there is another called The Shameless Self-promotion Bureau. join those groups and you will not be ridiculed by any of the members and as admin of the first mentioned we have five admins that are at hand when available but I will have contributors soon.

StormHoof32

StormHoof32 #12 · Dec 4th, 2013 · · ·

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im sorry but no...just no. Downvote from me.

I'll explain later. right now, too tired.

Frankie2

Frankie2 #13 · Dec 5th, 2013 · · ·

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Not bad. Not bad at all for your first clop fic. I really liked it. BTW:

"If you can call burying your muzzle in somepony's vagina talking," whispered one of the two guards that came with them. The guards chuckled only to be cut off by Moon glaring at them.