Sometime in the distant future, on an impossible day, the Void; linked within the Space-Time Continuum is opening from another point in time creating a paradox in the process.
As Equestria is at the risk of being erased, their only hope lies within the heart of a stallion Earth Pony; Star Blade. Now he must stand side by side with his closest friends, the Mane Six, as Equestria's past, present, and future depends on it.
While Equestria's future is in his hooves, his own future lies hidden within in a great power held secret for a long time by Princess Celestia.
Chapters (5)
Damn, I know a guy who's trying to write a story hitting every single possible Mary Sue trait.
He'll be annoyed you beat him to it.
3576699 I laughed way too hard at your comment.
Red and black OC alert!
Red and black OC alert!
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Information, we bronies, are absolutely not aware of. =/
3578089 I know! The show never, ever covered this, did it?
I guess I should congratulate the author. I've never seen a story hit so many horrible cliches before. It's really quite amazing, isn't it?
3578089 The reason why this was here is because it's a way of talking about the character, location, or object to those who either don't know it or possibly don't remember it. All stories might have something like this, filling the reader in about certain things that has the story make more sense, even to those who may already know what they are. However if these kinds of things bother you, just ignore it and continue reading, it's not like you have to read that section anyway.
No one will probably give a damn about this, but I might as well say that I've changed the story a bit. Fixed some errors, and changed a part of the flashback in Descension. That's all. Have a good day.
Update to Shepherd of Fire: Yes, it's no longer divided into two parts anymore. Shepherd of Fire is now it's own separate story. However, this doesn't mean "Part 2" is dead. At least not for now. Shepherd of Fire's sequel; Quest of the cool pony written by Eder the cool kid and co-written by your's truly; has been submitted and will be up in case you want to take a look at it. He technically wrote the whole story, I only helped with grammar because he's from another country, as well as parts that had to do with the original fan-fic. If you like Shepherd of Fire, you might like this. If you didn't technically like Shepherd of Fire this might or might not change your mind. As for "Part 2", it will be its own separate story. When it will be completed, I'm not sure, But before it's done, I'm gonna be taking a break on fan-fic writing. I'll be back though... don't you worry... I'll be back,
The best fan fic, I ever ready
4703181 Okay. Since you blocked me, probably so I couldn't respond to those abusive PM's you sent...
You're fucking with a SITE MODERATOR. Who has NOTHING TO DO WITH ANYONE ELSE THERE. Do you really think that's smart?
JUST. FUCKING. STOP! I do not want any of this shit in the comments of my fanfic! When someone makes their own opinion about a fanfic, DEAL WITH IT! I understand that not a lot of people like this fanfic, and to be honest, I DON'T GIVE ANY FUCKS. I only made this fanfic for the experience, not for the likes or dislikes. So if you guys like it, that's fine. If you don't like it, that's fine too. IT'S YOUR OPINION, AND MY FRIEND MADE HIS. SO SHUT UP AND STOP ALL THIS, OR GTFO.
4704113 Okay, YOU'RE at least being moderately mature and self-aware about it. Fine, I'm out.
Deleting comments, eh? That's against the law in this town. To the gallows with you.
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Wow. You must really be foolish, or at least careless. Fucking with me and some of the other notorious reviewers is one thing- especially since I was ready to give you the sort of advice to fix your shit and give you another shot. But this? You just fucked with Fallen Prime, a moderator. If you literally had any chance left of saving face and repairing your nonexistent reputation on this site, you just shot it in the face. Kid, you need to learn to chill out and at least politely react to comments if not actually listen to and learn from them. But, I'm wasting my breath. You obviously don't care about getting better, being a functioning part of the writing community, or even acting socially acceptable, so just continue throwing a tantrum. I'm sure it'll help when it's pushed everyone that might have given you a second chance away.
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Prime's not a Mod. I'm pretty sure he was referring to the comment war between Eder and Eldorado on the sequel's comments.
Just mentioning.
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Oh. Whoops. Sorry. I thought Prime was a mod.
Still, not a smart move by any measure.
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Mods have that blue or black (I don't remember) bar that says "Moderator" under their username tag. Also, their User Name is blue.
Holy shit, those deleted comments.
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Ah. Good to know.
Why did you delete my comment? I was perfectly reasonable. It was your friend that ruined the party for everybody else.
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... How can you fight with Eldorado? Meester or WD I can understand, but Eldorado?
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God damn you pythons...
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I have never laughed that hard.
'Shepherd of fire', eh?
Mind if we set the story on fire, too?
This story made me cringe so hard, it gave my permanent disfigurement.
4704657 Just to let you know, I wasn't even talking to Prime Fallen when I said that. I was saying that to those who continued to fight in the comments, and what I said was a clear way of telling all these people fighting TO STOP. I respect what people say about the fanfic, whether it's bad or good. But when it starts a fight, that's going too far. What my friend said was his clear opinion, and then this whole fight had to start. True, he kind of continued the fight on and on, but none of the others had to continue it as well. I treat the Moderators as I would anyone else; with respect. Also I understand that you wanted to give me a second chance, and I'm sorry if you were affected by what I said. But again, I was talking to those continuing the fight in the comments.
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Ok... Against my better judgement, since you apologized, third chance being given here. Be warned that it's only three strikes before you arrive on the dead to me list.
But, yeah. Forgiving you as long as it doesn't happen again.
As for the fights thing, it's a slippery slope. If you want the advice of someone who's been here a good while the first thing to know is you should never delete any comments, no matter their content. If it is truly offensive and despicable, it's best to let people see it for themselves so you can prove that it's awful. If you delete their comment, you have no proof that it was uncalled for.
Next step: let it go. Some fights it's better to just let people duke it out on. If you let it go, nine times out of ten they'll either let off their steam and calm down or get so tired of fighting that they drop it.
If the fighting gets a whole lot worse to the point of insults that are beyond "you're an asshole" or "shut up troll", then you can always politely nudge people away by stepping in and telling both parties they should calm down. Speaking from experience, the important part of that route is to remember not to play any favorites: even if a friend of yours is in the middle of it, you can't defend him any more than the other guy. Remember, you aren't trying to support who's right or prove them right. You're just trying to stop an argument.
If it continues to get out of hand after a warning or two, try telling a moderator to step in. They can speak with a lot more authority and while it may be the last resort for conflict resolution, it is damned effective as I've never seen an argument last long after a mod steps in.
Hope this helps.
4726464 Okay. Thanks for the advice.
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Go right ahead.
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4705209 You think that's bad? Check out it's sequel, Quest of the Cool Pony written by my friend.
4734319 Oh gawd.
4736279 IKR?
I really didn't want to be mean...but dude...I gotta' be mean. It feels as though reading this story has somehow simultaneously lobotomized my brain and buttfucked my soul without lube. Was writing something this awful an intentional goal of yours? If so, then I laud your efforts. Very avant-garde of you. (I'm sorry about all this.)
4737390 Leting edger written your story destroyed any sort of reputation you have or ever will.
4773164 Hey, be mean all you want about this story. I literally don't care about this story anymore. And hey, I didn't expect this story to be good or bad, I just wrote it to see what it's like to write a fan-fic. You wanna know what I'm better at making? Videos. I feel that writing a story is so much of a pain that your mind just dies when you can't take any more. So basically, making this fan-fic wasn't as fun as I intended it to be. Making videos however? It's MUCH more simple because you can imagine what you want in it, and put it right there. So yeah, I don't mind your opinion.
4810333 I don't really care about this story anymore.
4971885 This story, sucks ball.
4704610 He is-a ugly Red & Black Oc, what you expect-a?
The worst story I've read in the world.