The Latest: "Friendship is Magic: In Harmony"
Years ago, music teacher Octavia tries to convince her students to work together in harmony instead of trying to take over their song.
This is where my Super Short Stories will be posted, stories so short they can't be called stories, so they're more like individual scenes or vignettes really. Anyway, these stories will range from funny to piercing to even sexy sometimes, but don't worry, each story will be marked individually for content where applicable.
Chapters (3)
Y'know, I'm not usually a huge fan of Lyra being completely obsessive about humans/ponies, but this was actually pretty funny.
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Really enjoyed it, you should write a fallow up story with Lyra and twilight.
Fun story, and a well-written action scene to boot. Nicely done.
Action and fight scenes are a tricky business to write well, but I think you did a good job with this. It flowed nicely, and the level of description was just right for the speed of a good fight.