Equestria Girls 03: Heart of the Dress

EEquestria Girls 04: Nothing but a Number
Equestria Girls
Slice of Life
During a sleepover at Sweet Apple Acres, Scootaloo reveals a secret. A secret that terrifies her friends.
Apple Bloom
Scootaloo
Sweetie Belle
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This story is a sequel to Equestria Girls 02: The Sunset Sentry

Rarity works in a boutique in the local mall, and she's a good employee, but she's always dreamed of selling her own designs. When she realizes her online store might be a nonstarter, she asks her boss about putting her dresses up for sale, but she has to prove that her dresses are worth putting next to world-famous fashion designers. Now it's up to Rarity just how far she'll go to make that happen.

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Jigoku Luna

Jigoku Luna #1 · Aug 20th, 2013 · 1 · ·

I'm loving these episodes so far and am looking forward to the next one. As for the episode itself, I'm happy that I was not the only one who thought that Rarity only worked there, not own it,

Psykosis

Psykosis #2 · Aug 25th, 2013 · · ·

I like how, even after living in the human world for a few years, Sunset Shimmer still doesn't quite have a hold on nudity taboos. Just a little quirk that I think rounds out her character a bit.

Equestria Girls Episode 04: Nothing but a Number

Hmm... Maybe about Dash having trouble being part of a team?

Jakob85

Jakob85 #3 · Aug 26th, 2013 · · ·

Great job on the story.
Can't wait to read the next episode, any plans to feature Snips and Snails.

DragonShadow

DragonShadow #4 · Aug 26th, 2013 · · ·

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Thanks for the comment. I have no current plan to use Snips and Snails, but I haven't discarded anything.

Fernin

Fernin #5 · Sep 5th, 2013 · · ·

I happened upon this one at random, but now I will definitely read the others when I have time. I like your take on the characters, the plot worked well, and the piece seems well edited. Nice.

Bootsy Slickmane

Bootsy Slickmane #6 · Oct 18th, 2013 · · ·

This series continues to please me. I've only gotten a taste so far, but I'm really liking Sunset Shimmer as you portray her. Being a reformed villain (and basically an alien in this world), she's quite a bit different from the six main characters we usually see the most of. I look forward to exploring the new dynamics of this group, as well as the rest of the human world.

I think you've done well with anthropomorphizing Equestria based on the way the movie portrayed this strange new world. It makes sense so far, though I'm wondering how one might fit Rainbow's weather duties into this, what with her being a high school student. I'll just have to keep reading.

BenRG

BenRG #7 · Nov 30th, 2015 · · ·

I've always wished that more writers would focus on Sunset and Princess Twilight's alien natures and the fact that their native culture doesn't have a nudity taboo. It doesn't have to be salacious but instead innocently funny. Maybe the girls are at Sunset's apartment; she's excited about something and comes rushing out into the living area, buck naked, and proceeds to engage in an animated conversation only slightly puzzled at their inability to look directly at her.

Periwinkle fay 22

Periwinkle fay 22 #8 · Apr 14th, 2018 · · ·

I really liked this story. The conflicts and resolution in particular strike me as fitting, and having happened upon this by chance, it will be nice to read others. This interpretation of the eqg world is commendable, despite, and perhaps because of it’s early conception.

ScisetShimmerEvan

ScisetShimmerEvan #9 · Feb 15th, 2022 · · ·

The last week, no orders. The last three weeks, no orders. The last three months, no orders. In fact the last order was more than six months ago, and while the customer had left a glowing review on her site, there wasn’t anything after that, or for the three months before that.

Ouch

“I’m afraid perhaps they’re simply not good enough… I mean, I know I still have much to learn about fashion, but it’s not like my prices are unreasonable…” Rarity heaved a sigh, running the fingers of one hand through Opal’s fur, which seemed to calm the cat down, and he began to purr softly under the caress of her fingers.

Don't lose hope rarity, you might get your dream come true if have just have faith, it'll likely happen someday.

“Oh I know what you mean! I mean I still come here myself, but it’s simply not the same!” Rarity exclaimed as she and Fluttershy made their way into their separate dressing rooms, where they shed their street clothes in favor of a pair of towels wrapped around their bodies and their hair up in buns as they emerged. “Why the last time we came here was at least two years ago! It’s almost criminal how many spa days we’ve missed! It’s been so long you weren’t nearly as filled out as you are now!”

It's pretty obvious what was the cause why they haven't done it in 2 years.

Rainbow Dash gave her a droll look. “Don’t take this the wrong way… but I’d rather eat one of your dresses.”

Seriously rainbow dash, I mean seriously!

The local park was calm and breezy, and the last of the storm clouds that had been hovering for the last few days were drifting past the distant horizon. It was such a nice a nice day that the rest of Rarity’s best friends had gathered outside for a breath of fresh air. Rarity was almost hesitant to ask them to abandon such a gloriously nice day for her sake.

A nice a nice day doesn't make any sense. Should of just said a nice day.

“Oh Rarity, I feel like a princess.” Fluttershy giggled. “I like this so much better than the dresses from the boutique we wore to the Fall Formal.”

There's a sign that you might get your wish soon rarity.

“Aw shoot, you don’t gotta thank us, it’s just what friends do for each other.” Applejack winked.

Yep

Suddenly dozens of tiny black nozzles sprang up from the grass as the sprinklers kicked on, spraying water across the entire park, and immediately soaking the six friends down to the bone.

Uh oh! 😨

Not that revealing was always bad, she had to admit. She was trying to impress a very male boss… perhaps a couple of revealing pictures could help sway his opinion. It wasn’t like they were lewd, after all, just a couple of clingy wet dresses on smiling girls with wet skin…

Maybe he might like them, it's worth a shot.

Her formal high-heels click-clacked across the tiles of the mall as she made her way towards the high-end boutique. A business suit replaced her usual street wear, but one she made sure still looked good enough to come off as someone who knew a thing or two about fashion. She even wore her glasses, even though she didn’t really need to aside from seeing fine details in her dressmaking or when she got on her computer. Glasses were very much in right now, and who was she to argue with fashion trends?

Good thinking rarity.

Most kids got a car for their sixteenth birthday. Fluttershy got a house.

Wow

“Oh you stop that this instant, you were all great models, and great sports for agreeing to it. It was my fault for rushing it, and I could have chosen better dresses for each of you…” Rarity trailed off, staring down at the carpet with her hands clasped between her legs. “It was my fault I failed.”

But you did your best and that's what counts. 😊

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