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The home of the Shadowbolts Adventures and various other stories, mostly related to Equestria Girls.

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This story is a sequel to Equestria Girls 05: A Destiny Denied


At last Twilight Sparkle is going to make the rounds and meet all of Pinkie Pie's best friends, but when she comes face-to-face with Sunset Shimmer, it opens old wounds that may keep Pinkie's dreams of a giant group of close friends from ever being a reality.

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It's immature of me, but my favorite bit was Sunset swearing a blue streak. :rainbowlaugh:

And you definitely have my agreement on AJ being an effective leader.

I gotta say, I'm not a fan of Pinkie breaking the fourth wall all the time. It honestly kind of ruins the immersion for me. Still, that's just a personal gripe. Other than that, it was a pretty decent story and I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next.

This one bugged me a bit. I have mixed feelings about fourth wall gags, even with characters as crazy as Pinkie. I prefer the more subtle jokes, but I like subtlety in general. It's still a solid story, and I liked it overall.

I felt bad for Sunset Shimmer in this one. After Sunset Sentry, being nabbed like that has got to be about 94% worse, even if nothing really happened. You just made feel sympathy and worry for Sunset. Huh.... Well done.

As much as I want to see this group fully get together, Pinkie really verges on being a villain protagonist here.:facehoof:

Woow, Pinkie, Chaotic Good much?

“Applejack offered to show me around the farm… I finally said yes.” Sunset Shimmer blushed. Oh yeah, that happened in the second episode. It was so long ago it was no wonder you probably forgot.

Was that a fourth wall break just now!?!?!? 😨

Pinkie Pie cooed sympathetically. “Aw, I wouldn’t worry about it, you just didn’t get enough screen time. Eep!” Pinkie Pie yipped as she was whirled forcefully toward Applejack, who was gripping her shirt with one hand and flashing the others a disarming, toothy grin.

And there we go again with pinkie letting the cat out of the bag. :facehoof:

“Ssshhh! This episode is rated E!” Pinkie Pie warned before turning back to Twilight. “Please Twilight, you’ve gotta give her a chance, she’s a good person and she can be an amazing friend! Being friends is so much nicer, isn’t it?”

How am I not surprised pinkie would do it again, probably because it's her thing. :ajbemused:

“Augh! No! You just gave us a Teen rating!” Pinkie exclaimed.

You had it coming pinkie as you've tied up sunset. I'd feel the same if that happened to me. 😒

“You’ll be much happier once you’re friends with Twilight! Believe me!” Pinkie grinned back at her.

Ok pinkie, I think your taking this a bit too far this time. 😰

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