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supercomputer276


Author of the Game Over series, including Game Over MST and its MLP spinoff, and the /good/ Ghost Trick crossover.

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Tonight in Ponyville, something's going down. Something big. But Twilight Sparkle may not live to see it, as a mysterious assailant breaks into her home and kills her. But then someone else appears to her, a lost spirit that claims he can change her fate and save her life with inexplicable powers. And though she can't figure out how he's doing it, he does it and only the two of them remember. He's not supposed to be here, but he has to be here for a reason, right?

Many mysterious things will happen in this town tonight.

It's Trick Time.

WARNING: Will contain major Ghost Trick ending spoilers.

NOTICE: This takes place between seasons 3 and 4, thought I will try to avoid stepping on season 4's toes too much.

Sissel's Record (will be updated after every chapter)

Mirrors: FanFiction.net | Archive of Our Own

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 61 )

YOU ARE A GOOD PERSON AND I LOVE YOU.

Now to read the story.

... A ghost trick / MLP cross.

WELP. You have my attention! And, given that i could see the scenario playing out like an actual section of GT... you have it firmly!

Yesssssss, a Ghost Trick crossover. Reading this combined with Ghost Trick's soundtrack overloaded me with nostalgia. I hope you keep making these! :pinkiehappy:

In any case, Save?
[youtube=www.youtube.com/watch?v=EwiF0n073zE]

you realize this story is gonna be a real bitch right? you're going to have to keep track of where everything is and where everything goes

Yeah, Sissel, don't you hate the fact that you're going through something like this again?

At least this time, you know everything there is to know about your ghost tricks

Also, I suspect one of the next things Twilight does will be to let the other Princesses know about what happened. After all, it would be a very bad idea to keep another pony attempting to murder you a secret.

Oh man, GT is just amazing. This is going to be a great story, I can tell. BTW, thank you for reminding me about a GT/Ace Attorney crossover I forgot I was looking for. After reading this chapter I'll get right back to looking.

Very nice. Poor Sissel is back in the saddle! I noticed a minor typo, though:

Spike moved over to a refrigerator and placed the mug on the counter beside it. As Spike opened the fridge and dug into it, Sissel took notice of a door of the side. “Where does that door go?”

Spike took notice of a door on the side, perhaps?

Yes. All of my yes.

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Whenever I read or write pretty much any work of literature, I tend to visualize it as video game footage in some way. As you might imagine, this helps when writing video game fanfiction.

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I can keep it all straight! ...I think! I mean, I'm usually good and rather obsessive with details, and it'd have to be fairly old in Internet terms for me to forget those sorts of things. And failing that, I have Excel.

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Well it's Sissel taking notice, not Spike, but yeah, thanks for catching that. I'll fix that up right away.

Ghost trick is by far one of my all time favorite games because of it's amazing story. I don't have time to read this right away and its killing me!

are you busy with next chapter

My god, the writing feels just like it did in the game! You simply must continue this story soon! :raritystarry:

I should note, reading this while playing the soundtrack to the game in the background (with the music updated as the situation changes in the story) makes it 1000% better! It's like the sequel to GT we all wish for! :yay:

For those just joining us, this should set the mood as you read the story's intro!

I watched a full playthrough of this game, and I have to say that you have your work cut out for you.

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I'm glad to see that I'm not the only one who wants this to be a real game.

well finally someone makes a fanfic based on this game with sissel in it =))

btw sissel is my favorite character in the game. which one is yours?

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Thanks! ^_^ It's a shame I couldn't figure out how to properly embed the video into my post like you did with yours, which was wonderfully clever by the way. I just don't know what went wrong! :derpytongue2: Maybe PM me with how to fix that? :twilightblush:

Edit: Fixed! :yay:

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GODDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
You had better continue this. My second favorite game and my favorite TV show crossed over is nuts yo.
So... good luck on the story! Liked, watched, and faved.

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Believe me, it'd be awesome if this could be a fangame. Heck, I'm a bit of an amateur programmer, I half-considered it. But as you can tell by just many of the pony game projects around, it takes a lot of work to make a game, and since I lack much skill in sprite creation and music composition, attempting to turn this into a game by myself would just result in another never-to-be-done project.

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I think Sissel's my favorite too. Though Missile's a close second.
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Ah, a shame then. Only in our dreams. :fluttershysad:

Well, what do we have here? :rainbowhuh: A crossover between one of my all-time favorite games and my little pony. :rainbowderp:

I have to admit. I was a bit skeptical at first to read this fic, didn't think someone could really pull off successfully a crossover like this. :applejackunsure:

But you, my friend, have proved me wrong. :rainbowlaugh:

I very much enjoyed this chapter from scratch to the end :twilightsmile: It really has the mystery hanging in the air by just reading the first lines. I also liked that you were very descriptive and detailed about the scenario and how Sissel executed his stuff accordingly.

Oh, and it was a pretty good thing that I downloaded the entire Ghost Trick OST the other day, playing the right track makes the whole reading experience like if you're playing the game itself :pinkiehappy:

Speaking of games, it would be so badass if a dedicated group of people had the will to make an animated series out of this :rainbowkiss: Just like Turnabout Storm, an Ace Attorney crossover with MLP: FIM.
But sadly, it can take years for that project to get started :ajsleepy:

Anyways, please take my favorite and follow :pinkiesmile: This is one story I wanna see through till its very epic conclusion, so I'll keep an eye on it. In other words, YOU'D BETTER DON'T LET US DOWN :twilightangry2:

Good luck and have a nice day :twilightsmile:

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Speaking of games, it would be so badass if a dedicated group of people had the will to make an animated series out of this :rainbowkiss: Just like Turnabout Storm, an Ace Attorney crossover with MLP: FIM.
But sadly, it can take years for that project to get started :ajsleepy:

I've actually been imagining things like this while listening to the Ghost Trick OST myself on my 3DS during my bus rides to and from school. An animation, I mean. Mostly the series capoff and credits while listening to the credits music. It'd definitely be more complicated than Turnabout Storm, that's for sure, given all the animation required. I showed similar misgivings about a fangame earlier, as you might have seen.

Anyways, please take my favorite and follow :pinkiesmile: This is one story I wanna see through till its very epic conclusion, so I'll keep an eye on it. In other words, YOU'D BETTER DON'T LET US DOWN :twilightangry2:

It's "YOU BETTER NOT LET US DOWN," incidentally, but you're point is well-made. I have no intention of disappointing my fans, which is why Chapter 2 is taking so long. Hopefully the winter break (finals are next week) will give me the time to finish it. The 4 Minutes here is a little hard to figure out, given the seeming general lack of references for its interior (doesn't even have its own MLP:FiM Wikia article, unlike the Golden Oaks), and a little twist in it actually compounded the work a little. You'll see what that means when it comes out~

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It's "YOU BETTER NOT LET US DOWN," incidentally

Huh, that makes a lot more sense. :raritystarry: No wonder it sounded so freaking weird inside my head and when I read it out loud. But I couldn't quite make out what was wrong in that sentence lmao :rainbowlaugh:

The 4 Minutes here is a little hard to figure out, given the seeming general lack of references for its interior (doesn't even have its own MLP:FiM Wikia article, unlike the Golden Oaks), and a little twist in it actually compounded the work a little.

I hear ya, but I guess it could be a perk as well. You can unleash your imagination to create a background in the 4 Minutes scenes and pretty much on every aspect of the fic. Be it indoors or outdoors, you don't have to follow a specific canon scenario from the show. It wouldn't hurt to re-watch some of the episodes to have some references though.

How's about we play a little game? Nothing meaningful, just a little diversion. To play, just reply to this comment.

The composer for Ghost Trick: Phantom Detective was Masakazu Sugimori, who also composed music for the Ace Attorney series. In both series' soundtracks, all the major characters and some of the minor ones have their own associated music tracks that play to accompany their on-screen actions. They often follow a specific naming pattern, namely "<character name> ~ <descriptive phrase>". Examples include "Lynne ~ A Targeted Redhead" and "Detective Gumshoe ~ I Can Do It When It Counts, Pal!" You can find more examples by searching for the games' soundtracks.

It should be no spoiler that I intend for all the Mane 6 to show up in this story at some point or another. So I wonder what their songs would be called...?

And that's the game. Come up with names for theme songs for the Mane 6. Or any other pony, while you're at it, but the Mane 6 are priority here. Do as many or as few as you wish. There's no prize; it's just for fun. But I am interested in seeing what you guys can come up with. You don't have to come up with an actual song, just the title.

I swear to god, I'll try to keep them from getting this long in the future.

Actually, I really like longer chapters. Maybe I'm the only one, but I would rather have one awesome huge chapter every couple months than have an average chapter every week. Make them as long or as short as needed, I love it either way. Keep up the awesome writing!:pinkiehappy:

When comes the next chapter

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A challenge eh?
Well, I would hand Lynne's theme to Twilight, Missle's to Pinkie, Welcome to the Salon to Rarity, Chase to Rainbow, and Suspicion to AJ.
Ghost Trick's OST doesn't have a cute, innocent theme in it, so I gonna have to use a song from its sister series and give Pearl's theme to Fluttershy.
Ergo,
Twilight Sparkle~A Studious Bookworm
Pinkie Pie~Time to PARTY!
Rarity~Simply Dreadful
Rainbow Dash~I've Got Your Back!
Fluttershy~Innocent Butterfly
Applejack~The Honest Truth

And the theme for end of this chapter is Save?

So, the second (and third) people Sissel saves tonight are Fluttershy and Angel! And what makes it worse is that Sissel needed two attempts to save Fluttershy... it was hard to read a second time. And unlike the original Ghost Trick, where almost nobody seems to give much of a dang about dying (Lynne practically laughing off her deaths around Death 3, Jowd practically having a devil-may-care attitude about his first death, and Missile's only concern being Lynne and Kamila), these guys take it A) very seriously and B) extremely traumatically (similarly to how Kamila did, and how Sissel thought it would be for Lynne back when she was younger). In short, you show how no matter how cheap death is for Sissel since he can rewind time, the reminder of them actually DYING is pretty much scarring for someone like Fluttershy (and perhaps the others).

At the very least, though, I'm assuming that we just found out whose responsible. Putting together the clues so far (the fact that the assassins are using wood from a place no sane pony would dare get wood from, the murder weapons for both of these hits are explosive crystals, a 'His Majesty', and the fact that these assassins I'm assuming to be Earth Ponies with grey coats), I'm going to go out on a limb here, and say the villain of this story:

King Sombra. He came back from the freaking dead, and has gone out of the way to kill the Mane Six so when he makes his real appearance, nopony could stop him. It's not Chrysalis, because you established the villain is female, and Discord is out, because if he was going to kill the Mane Six, he wouldn't hire hitmen to do it, since he probably is more powerful than Ghost Yomiel (and Yomiel can manipulate people into doing country shaking events) and could easily make the Mane Six's deaths look like accidents. And unless you're introducing an OC villain King, I'm not seeing others who could be considered "His Majesty".

Well, if you're asking for song names for each of the Mane Six (I'm assuming you're going to kill all six of them at least once tonight, because you're asking for themes for all of them), well, here you go.

Twilight: "The Purple Equine Princess"
Fluttershy: "A Timid Caretaker"
Pinkie Pie: "Missile's Pony Counterpart?"
Rarity: "The Type of Pony Everypony Should Know"
Rainbow: "The Sonic Rainboom Pegasus"
Applejack: "The Apple Farm-mare"

Oh, and if you give Angel Ghost Tricks (provided Sissel's body-- wherever it is) is near Angel if he dies again), I'd probably say "Hop to It, Ghost Style". As for Spike, I'd say "Noble Dragon's Code". If you throw in Celestia and Luna, you could say "Two Royal Pony Sisters", Day Mix for Celestia, and Night Mix for Luna.

I think you've got a typo.

Who knows what those ponies will are plotting in the dark of the night?

And I've gotta agree with 3685338 on who the mastermind is. The crystal grenades on their own were enough of a giveaway.

3685491 Also, should we assume that the rest of the Mane 6, and maybe even the Princesses, will have died by the time the night is over?

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Feel free to assume whatever you want~ :derpytongue2:

That last line gave me chills. This was worth the wait! :heart: :yay:

Well, this is looking good so far, and I think it has the potential to be a great story from the looks of things. Good luck man, I'm rooting for you.

Listening to this track when our two heroes find Fluttershy's home ablaze really pumped me up! :pinkiegasp:

I'd say the wait for this chapter was so worth it :rainbowkiss: A shame I couldn't find the time to read it as soon as it came up :applejackunsure: I tend to prefer longer chapters because I feel the storyline is way more developed and less vague, so feel free to take your time when writing.

I can't imagine the awkwardness Sissel must have felt when he was reassuring Fluttershy after going in shock, 'cause the victims in the game were all like 'Lol I got killed, but Sissel will save me so screw it'. It truly was a change of scenario for him.
I feel bad for Fluttershy, she will remember seeing her's and Angel's calcined corpses in her new life... such a sad fate.

Oh by the way, let me ask you this incredibly-super-important question... Is Missile going to make a badass appearance later on in the story?! :pinkiehappy: I love that little guy, he always succeeded to make me smile and go 'Awww :pinkiesmile:' when he was seen in the game, personal favorite character from Ghost Trick.
If you choose to use him, that'd be awesome :twilightsmile: If not, that's fine too (sobs on the inside :raritydespair:)

Anyways, I think it has gotten pretty obvious of who's the bad guy here. If it isn't King Sombra, then I say it must be a devout follower of him. Somepony with powerful speech, like Hitler, to raise up an army of assassin rebels.

3684238 A challenge... Iiiinteresting... :rainbowdetermined2: You've got me interested!

Okay... I almost think Trixie, if you put her in here, would have Child of Magic 2013, otherwise known as Trucy's theme from Phoenix Wright: Dual Destinies. Pinkie Pie's theme might be Athena's theme- Let's Do This! from the same game... Well, that or Missile's theme. Fluttershy's theme... Hmmmmmm... Well, I think Pearl's theme probably fits her the best... since there's nobody else TO choose...

The Chicken Kitchen could probably be Derpy's theme, since she's goofy- almost like it's song! Welcome to the Salon would definitely be the palace if you ever go there, and thus, Celestia's theme. Twilight's might be Lynne's theme, since she's pretty upbeat most of the time, buuut... Ray might work too. The others... :rainbowderp: I GOTTA DO HOW MANY MORE!? HECK NO!! You figure those themes out!

But actual NAMES for their songs....

Princess Twilight Sparkle~ I'm a Librarian Princess!
Twilight Sparkle (if you ever go that far back in the past)~ Time for Books!
Pinkie Pie~ Fun Times Ahead
Rarity~ Drama Queen Extraordinaire
Rainbow Dash~ Loyal to the End
Fluttershy~ A Loving Heart
Applejack~ Howdy, Pardner!
Derpy~ My Bad, Mailmare!
Vinyl Scratch~ Where's the Wubs?
Octavia~ A Classy Mare
Celestia~ The Celestial Being (You KNEW I had to put that in there!)
Luna~ Lunar Enigma
Trixie~ It's Showtime!

Lynne's as a falling anvil. Hilarious. Let me read the next chapter before I make a longer comment.

Oh man, this so great! You've kept the feel of the game so much, it's amazing! These scenes must be a bitch to write though, keeping everything in mind and giving Sissel cores to link to. I swear I can see everything happening, even in the game's art style! I so did not expect you to include a failed aversion, though.

3684238 Oh, this sounds interesting! Let me give it a whirl. I've got a few in mind for each.

"Twilight Sparkle ~ A Studious Princess" or "A Royal Librarian"
"Fluttershy ~ Meek, not Weak" or "A Kind and Gentle Soul"
"Applejack ~ An Honest Working Mare"
"Rainbow Dash ~ Rainbow Racer" or "Loud, Proud, and Loyal"
"Rarity ~ Chic and Magnifique" or "Debonair with Flair"
"Pinkie Pie ~ A Jovial, Jubilant Jester" or "SURPRISE!"
"Celestia ~ Warm as the Sun"
"Luna ~ Comforting Night"
"Shining Armor ~ A Gleaming Protector" or "B.B.B.F.F."
"Cadence ~ Love Conquers All" or "Do a Little Shake!"
"Spike ~ #1 Assistant"
"Trixie ~ Razzle Dazzle Them!" or "The Boastful Magician"

I don't know how much of this you have planned, but I think it would be hilarious if not only does Pinkie avoid being killed due to her Pinkie sense but is still able to communicate with Sissel using the same ability.

Anyway I eagerly await the next-!

(Published Oct 2013)
(Updated Dec 2013)
(Current date August 2014)

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YOU BETTER BE WORKING ON THIS RIGHT NOW, BUSTER!

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Yes, ma'am! Sir! I don't know! It's in the works! Please don't kill me!

Wow, what a Christmas present!
Also, they probably got Sweetie Belle or something.

I'm guessing that the assasins already visited Rarity and are blackmailing her with a hostage. Probably Sweetie or her parents.

I gotta say, I'm really impressed by how true to the style of the game this story is. Reading through a chapter of this reads almost exactly the way the game does.

I am going to guess that Sissel will eventually hitch a ride on spike's dragonfire letters. Aside from that, another guess is that Sweetie Belle is being held captive and Rarity has to fulfill the order...which of course is setting up anti-ghost garments for the bad guys, along with a trap to get rid of Rarity.

Anyhow, onto the song names. Those with 2 or higher were suggested by other people.

Pinkie
(1) She who laughs last

Dash
(2) Loyal to the End

Rarity
(1) For whom the Sweetie Belle tolls

Appplejack
(1) Dead Mares Can't Lie

Fluttershy
(1) Guardian Angel


Spike & Sissel (two-parter)
(1) Through the Fire...
(1) ...And the Flames

Cadance
(2) ...Do a little shake!

You, my friend, just earned a Favourite. This is the greatest crossover fic I've read so far, even better than Pokémon X Ponies! Update soon!:raritywink:

*mega-squee!* :pinkiehappy: Woohoo! Now strike while the creative iron's hot, Super! Next chapter! :raritystarry:

:rainbowderp:... It lives.
:pinkiesmile: .... It lives!
:pinkiehappy:IT LIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIVES!

Ok, back to theo story: Sweetie Belle has been kidnapped by the organization and is being forced to make the runes. HURRY AND SAVE PINKIE! Or revive her, whatever.

Yeah, I've gotta agree with the others. This offer that Rarity can't refuse, to the point of not being able to worry about the safety of her friends, combined with anti-ghost clothing, is probably Sweetie Belle being held hostage.

And it looks like Pinkie Pie just got killed. Time to revive her, and then see who needs help next.

I love Ghost Trick.
I enjoy reading MLP Fanfiction.
This is a match made in heaven - especially considering how original flavor (in terms of ghost trick) this is! I was sort of expecting this to be completely different, and am glad to have been wrong.

Oh darn it! Pinkie's the next victim! Great, knowing how kooky she is in the series, the puzzle to save HER is going to be extremely twisted. Really could use Missile for this one. You know, swapping things so people don't die.

Hm. I wonder...would Pinkie Pie have special properties as a ghost?

Y'know, Sessil's body had a meteorite fragment in it, so anyone who dies near that will get ghost tricks. The question is, where is Sessil's body?

I'm happy to see this back.:pinkiesmile:

So, Pinkie's the next victim, huh? I do wonder if there will be any traces of Temsik around Equestria...

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