As a fan of the show, I always loved Rainbow Dash and her cutie mark, but I never wanted it to appear on my leg! Now that it has, lots of things are getting weird around here. I'm a guy, not a mare! Cartoon ponies aren't real, right? (Mature version)
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Okay, what the fuck happened with this. It never goes anywhere. No Sunshine Clouds, and no Lemon Hearts. What. The. Buck. Seriously, that should be taken out. It's a huge plot hole of WTF since nothing comes from it. (Unless you somehow make it tie in to chapter THIRTY, but still. Why mention two background ponies that they now KNOW are ponies if they NEVER try to contact them or get them to the farm? What. The. Fucking. Hell.
Why do I get the feeling you are talking for personal experience with these clop scenes? If your a girl the your life is Awesome! If your a guy... well... then your waird... and this is awkward
Wow. I love the way you portray Flutters here. The quiet, unspoken strength. It's great!
I loved it all and they all are acting like them salfs like in the show perfectly good job with that.And this chapter had so many funny parts I loved it.And I like the idea of Big Mac and Rainbow dash they seem cute together and it be awesome if Fluttershy joined it they become a herd.And I wonder how many other ponys are out there and where are they are they ok and that they get together soon.
Ooh. Ima getting a feeling that the 'FUCKING EPICNESS' level of this story is about to increase. Exponentially. Great. Now I sound like a mix of Dash and Twilight.
I read the mature version of this story for two reasons. When I began reading, I jumped between both versions of the story for the first five chapters, making idle comparisons. Because of this, I recognize this version to be the better of the two. Reason number one. For some ungodly reason, there are less errors in this version. I have no clue why... There are still plenty, enough I sometimes wish I could just fix things as I read, but this version isn't as bad. Two, The humor. It is so much less suppressed. The other version visibly pulls it's punches and falls flat in several places. This... well, you have scenes that just click. Like the one above... I flipping love this story, The clop is heavier then I care for, But I find skimming it, I get the best experience for my tastes. Sort of like a balance between the versions.
Apparently somepony has a time machine....
3968625 i know right i probably wouldny be reading this story if it weren't for the clop-err-good plot lol
That was an interesting point you made if the show ended with Twilight's "Demise" It would make sense that Twilight was already human and knew her Friends were somewhere on earth she would write the ending of her own demise in hopes that her friends would pick up the hint that she was looking for them. Plus wouldn't that Twilight is also twenty-five and that her birthday would also be May first, too right?
This was an awesome chapter. Probably my favorite thus far, and that's mainly because of just the last segment. The way they explain it makes a ton of sense too. Another thing I really like about this is how you got to make up/give your own predictions for what's going to happen next season. I really hope Dash gets into the 'Bolts, and I really want to see Lightning Dust again. I loved how you had her and Dash as friends, because that's how I've got it set in my head. Now that they know Twilight works for Hasbro, they're going to have a heck of a fun time finding her. I can't wait to see what other chaos unfurls for them.
~SolidFire
I can't help but daydream about this story and come up with scenarios. This only happens when I get lost in an amazing story. I know the story is finished and I'll have all my questions answered when I read, but I can't help but voice them. I can't help but see the ponies in a new light since they lived on earth. They really only have their human memories and everything they learned as they grew up. Hell, I found myself smiling as I read dash's (Dave's) lines. It seems like you made her smarter and less of an egotistical bitch like she used to be. Granted, she still has an ego problem, but she seems more humble now.
I also wonder about how you view intelligence when comparing the brains of humans and ponies. In almost every fic I read, I consider humans to be the smarter species, possibly with larger brains. Going back to what I mentioned before about dash, it seems as if this is crossing over (just my guess for now). I actually laughed to myself wondering, assuming my theory is true, how smart twilight really is now. Stuck in a world of advanced technology that makes Equestria look like the dark ages.
A final thought, and one that I always question, how violent are the mane six now? Yes, in the show they were always willing to solve differences without the means of violence (usually), but something major changed. For the past 25 years they lived as humans. Now, before anyone starts hammering me (considering they even care enough to read my thoughts), be aware that this is my own opinion of humanity. The mane six have no doubt gone to school, learned about history and have been involved in violence of some form. Unlike the peace loving ponies, humans are actually quite cruel. I always see humans having two major advantages over other species: they are survivors, capable of escaping even the most harrowing of situations... and they are good at killing. Now, personally, I haven't killed anything in my life, but that doesn't change the fact that I have animal instincts that would rise to the surface should the wrong 'buttons' be pushed. Humans don't have magic, but we have technology that would awe Equestria should they see it. We have weapons of mass destruction, capable of destroying the planet itself should these weapons be misused. I'll use dash as the example I'm about to give. She might be 100% pony on the outside, but her mind is still 90% human. She may look like Rainbow Dash, but she doesn't have her personality. In fact, I would go as far to say that RD is dead and this is the new her. Her mind is influenced by human behavior and as such can be much more violent as a result. I wouldn't be surprised if, pushed over the edge, she would gladly kill in order to get revenge.
Which leads into my final thoughts. If they are more violent and have the influence of humanity in them, who's to say they wouldn't end Discord for good? Sometimes a wild animal needs to be put down for good. If dash (seems most likely to do this) got her 'hands' on a gun, one of humanity's most feared invention, who's to say she wouldn't use it to blow off the head of discord. Hell, if they got some chemical weapons, I'm not sure if even the god of chaos would be safe.
Wow, did I really write this much about a story? Goes to show how much I love it. While I doubt anyone would read this, I would be honored if you did and give me your opinion on this matter. It's been on my mind for some time and I would love to start up a conversation. If you're the author, well, I would be ecstatic to hear your thoughts regarding what I have written here.
Wait M.A. Larson is Twilight Sparkle? This makes all of his episodes make sense. He makes everyone a princess then they go back and super alicorn Discord's face off.
THANKS M.A. Larson!
This is where I'm struck by the ingenuity of this fic. The main characters are the actual ponies of Equestria but have had their memories erased by Discord and sent to live as humans on Earth for 25 years. What a unique way to explore the characters! This is exactly the kind of unique idea that I've longed for. Seriously... wow! The whole idea of heredity and environment suddenly enters the picture. They have about the same personality but they have lived a different life and have different experiences. It also explains why they react so differently to the transformation.
It also provides an opportunity to explore more unusual ships. And even though I am a fanatical TwiDasher and normally avoid straight shipping I have no problem at all with this story's RainbowMac-shipping.
Honestly, I wish everyone chose to read this version of the story. The sex scenes are more than just gratuitous clop. Dash's exploration of her own sexuality is closely linked to her character development and her ability to accept her new situation. It's like a third puzzle piece alongside Dave's obsession with Rainbow Dash and the realization that he/she was the real Dash all along. I haven't read the other version though so I do not know where it draws its line and how much of Dash's sexual escapades are actually mentioned.
Taken out of context this line sounds really weird. I'm mentally crossing my fingers hoping for her to come around on the topic of anal as well. That's be the icing on the cake.
I heard rumor of an extra way to like this fic but after a century of searching, I return with nothing
*looks at like button*
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Yes I found it!
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VICTORY IS MINE!!!!!!!
I swear to jeebus if it's LAUREN FAUST I WILL CUT A BISH. That is all.
Eve. Robert. Sunshine Clouds. Lemon Hearts. Adam. Rebecca..
Am I the only one who noticed Adam and Eve in that list?
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And here i got the theory that celestia made it to earth and created the television series, and didn't die
I hope she's okay though
I raise an eyebrow “Is that by chance, alcoholic cider?”
She laughs “Of fucking course it is! What do you think this is, a kid’s show?”
... yes
Having the humans actually be the cursed characters is good but having Twilight as a creator of the show is brilliant. Great way to shift into the reclaiming friends act!
Ok. 1. Major spoilers.
2. Its totally fine by me
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I can't believe I never saw that coming...but...she obviously panicked.
Remember the TV scene? The one where a "mysterious" explosion at a library?
I can say for a 99.9% FACT, that was Twilight.
Now how on earth could that be the only known scene? Did hasbro find her?
What did they do to her if they did?
And why, if other totally random ponies got teleported, did celestia and Luna not get the same?
I wanna see a kid a girl turn into a bucking Princess ponies!!!
Adorable 101.
This is getting framed.
"Woke you so you could sleep", makes sense to me!
And what happened then? Well, in Ponyville they say -
That the Dash's small belly grew three sizes that day.
I can't stop cackling holy shit
OH FUCK.
(PS disappointed that they didn't at least recognize Lemon Hearts out of the two they found.)
What a twist.
Pony road trip, Fuck yeah.
I was trying so hard to resist the urge to necrocomment, but this scene positively slayed me! I am done! Kaput! Dead! Finished!
(Not with the story; this is comedy gold)
Let me see,dash is a hore,mac desire for mare. This better is because of discord's magic
I don't know why, but out of all the things in this chapter, this one made me laugh and smile the most
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Yeah.
Oh wow, dash is getting EVERYPONY in this story
Holy fucking crap, 140 acres?
Soo... other than the season five finale, you changed how much of the show?
I never thought I'd see "Faded" quoted in a ponyfic. c.c
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This was written before the airing of Season 5.
Which is a shame, because this premise would be much better as an alternate to the S5 finale with, well, me as the villain.
I ship Fluttercord too hard to believe Discord would ever do anything to actively harm Fluttershy, and we've seen quite a few times now that he's become a fairly decent guy underneath the Q dickishness.
called it
she’s pregnant now
*facehoof*
ah
a dream
that makes that scene make more sense
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I kinda figured half way through when AJ was being all accepting this soon, kind of a good way to scare her from creampies though.
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I suspected this is a dream as soon as she noticed a bulge. That's too freaking early for a bulge and scene with AJ approved that. Another dead giveaway were how everything started to happen real fast. I'm actually amazed how Twisted Spectrum made that part feel like an actual dream. And I suspected she's infertile yet, but wasn't sure for how long. Her pregnancy didn't made sense neither from biology point of view nor for the story. Good thing she connected the dots when it wasn't too late...
This line deserves an award