As a fan of the show, I always loved Rainbow Dash and her cutie mark, but I never wanted it to appear on my leg! Now that it has, lots of things are getting weird around here. I'm a guy, not a mare! Cartoon ponies aren't real, right? (Mature version)
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... *Sighs*
3549402 Guys am I right?
I know I am one
3782957 Lol take me with you XD
Also Leroy Jenkins refrence is not subtle.
I loved it all so much it was awesome,.The part about the Brony was hilarious and I can't wait to see what happens next to them all.And like I said herd between the three of them.
Good Gal Rarity
3549402 at the end I sighed in real life but it is interesting
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No you fool! You don't want to go down this road!
There will be a fight and they will magically change their minds in order to use it as ammunition!
Fool me once, shame on you! Fool me twice, shame on me. Fool me three times and I guess I fit the definition of insanity...
No, not shining! Don't do it!!!
So, i wanted to point out a few things. The first being from this chapter, regarding the area twilight complains a bit about being a pony. She claims she is getting used to being a mare, or something along these lines. Search the page for parentheses, it's in that area.
She was always female.
Another point i've noticed, involving this group and fluttershy for the most part, is that they seem to completely forget themselves, and who they are. They act as if they were always their gender and species and gender. Shining is in extremem need of sexbut doesn't seem to realise he was once a girl who likely had morals involving more usual rules of sex.
Fluttershy was a normal shy girl who was maybe a bit too nice prior to the changes, but now that she is fluttershy, she freaks out more than the 'original' does. An example would be her being unable to fly more than a few inches without feeling like she's in danger.
I figured that was going to happen. In both the instances of the hotel and the other person that was supposedly a pony. I hope Shining keeps his urge in check. It seems that your characters have some incredibly active libidos. Stay faithful, for it is a test! Also, that picture the one dude took? That's going to be how the other group finds them. Can't wait to see what's next.
~SolidFire
ELEMENT OF F**KING GENEROSITY!!
Damn, that's like...REALLY sketchy.
5436385 Well it is only sex, so it would be ok, but I guess that's just my view on life
I didn't find the Vancouver group as interesting as the first one. One of the reasons is of course that I as a reader already knows what'll happen. The main problem is that I'm not overly fond of the depictions of Pinkie and Twilight and I also feel that the second group doesn't have the same great chemistry as the first.
Shining, Rarity and Pinkie are all fairly quick at finding themselves at home in their pony bodies and don't seem too bothered by the fact that all have also switched gender. The only one finding the situation really difficult is Twilight. She feels frustrated by not having the answers to the others' questions and by all the fragments of her old memory now being completely gone. Personally, I find it hard to see Tess as Twilight. Twilight is the pony I feel I understand the best. Even though every fics interprets her slightly different it's usually no problem fitting them into my own image. In this case my mental images of Twilight appear slightly blurred. In retrospect it might have helped to have my Twilight-plushie sitting next to me.
I find Dash as sex maniac charming. Pinkie however is just creepy. The biggest difference I think is that Dash can control himself and isn't pushy.
Part two has considerably more action than the first and I miss the contrast between the bizarre and the mundane. But I do understand that the author feels the need to slowly ramp up the amount of action. I can see an epic battle against Discord looming ahead.
Incas nobody caught that bout of foreshadowing, when "stargazer" snapped a shot
I can imagine these net surfing po is on the other end are definitely gonna find it.
Counting that's what their initial goal is now.
Collect the mane 6
" oh hey jack!"
"Yeah dash?"
"Some old geezer just posted a picture of twilight brother."
"Holy shot dash! Where?!"
"Mm....it says Seattle."
Goof luck with that one!
Well shit, now I'm thinking of angry sex Rarity.
Officially the best way to describe penetration. 10/10, absolute masterpiece.
I already gave my opinion on this shitty myth in a previous comment so I'll just rage in silence this time.
Not sure if self-hate, or self-love???
Hm, looks like the revelations line up timeline-wise too, we're almost to the day the other group finds Flutters.
Damn, another dead end for our heroes.
Someone has their priorities straight.
Goddammit Rarity
Leerooooooy Jeeeeenkins!
It was nice up to that part...
... and here, I just lost it.
I know it's awkward to admit, but at this point at his place I'd have a huge problem of whether the heck would I sleep tonight... Since I wouldn't accept this kind of generosity. At least not by being tricked into it.
"Tab A into Slot A"
Also isn't it "Tab A into Slot B?"
Still funny tho
People are turning into fictional ponies, your friend somehow came up with the entirety of the MLP:FiM canon, and the automated motel is what's sketchy? Who do you think you're kidding, Pinkie?
This whole story is Etch-a-Sketch levels of sketchy!
Why'd they take a break from sex to build IKEA furniture?
That moment when you feel like you just insulted yourself, but you're not sure how.
I feel like they're drilling in this guy's pony name too hard to have him just disappear from the story. Fillies & gentlecolts, we may have a new recurring character on our hands, whether good or bad.
I'm totally gonna use that phrase now! Thanks!
Rarity, everypony! The Element of f***ing Generosity. (Quite literally.)