As a fan of the show, I always loved Rainbow Dash and her cutie mark, but I never wanted it to appear on my leg! Now that it has, lots of things are getting weird around here. I'm a guy, not a mare! Cartoon ponies aren't real, right? (Mature version)
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Since I pointed it out in the 'normal' version... LOVE that Fifth Element quote.
YEAH, about that... It should NOT take that long to fly from Seattle to Iowa City. Unless Private Jets are SLOWER than Charter (Which I doubt. I thought they were supposed to be faster, actually.) it would only take three, four hours TOPS to make that flight, even at Charter speed. (Speaking from experience here. I fly from Central Illinois to Lav Vegas every other year. NEVER takes more than four hours, and that's when you're flying against the Jet Stream from East to West. Since they're flying from West to East, WITH the Jet Stream, it shouldn't take them longer than 3 hours at a CHARTER speed.
So yeah, you should prolly edit that bit. X3 (Sorry for being so technical. I know it doesn't really matter, but small details can help.)
I still tear up at the end, dammit...
I look at Shining and smile. “Yeah Shining, come on, what could we possibly have done?”
Twilight shakes her head and turns to leave the room to go get Pinkie. “You ponies are crazy.”
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“Well Shining, I’m plum tuckered out of ideas,” Pinkie says to me as I’m not really paying .
I'm not sure if this is this or last chapter because this is one of those fics where I can't remember if I hit "next chapter" or not, but it looks like there should be 'attention' at that last little bit there.
3549547 I know bro I live in Pennsylvania and go to Las Vegas a couple times a year and it takes like 5-6 hours, less sometimes to get there.
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Google disagrees, the flight should take over 5 hours.
3784574 Boeing 757, the 5 hour result: mach .8 cruising speed (about 475mph in practice). Gulfstream G650 cruising speed .85-.9 mach (about 550-600 mph in practice). A commercial airline will also have to factor in loading, takeoff, landing, and disembarking into time factors. A Gulfstream would take anywhere from 3-4 hours once all the "commercialized" nonsense is cut out and you just factor in the limited number of passengers and their lack of actual luggage, plus the .05-.1 mach speed gain. While you are right in theory, the actual math says otherwise (plus add the fact the Gulfstream's max speed is just over 704 mph, as the fastest private jet in the world)
Sources: Math. Nerd.
I loved this chapter it was so sweet it truly warmed my heart.I can't wait to see what happens next to them all.
Spectrum, you truly are an accomplished writer. Every time I read this chapter, I full-out cry at the end. If you go to BronyCon this year, I'd love to ask you for your autograph.
dem feels at the end
I really can't agree with this chapter title any more if I tried... just wow...
Thats upseting, yet so heartwarming. Rarity , you really out did yourself
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WOW enough said
That was a fairly touching chapter, especially that at the end. Rarity... Tom... She's really the element of generosity. When I get to a more stable internet connection, I'm going to have to look up how much it costs to charter a plane like that and the like. Now everyone is going to be back together after twenty-five long years. Maybe they'll figure out how to do... whatever it is they need to do. Get back to Equestria to beat Discord? Either way, things are good and keep getting better.
~SolidFire
GENEROSITYYYYYYYY!
IT HURTS SO GOOD.
Every so often I just think back to how Rarity's human name was Tom. Like the rock. It never fails to make me chuckle.
This chapter just sucker punched me right in the feels man.
Well using a chartered jet was clever and it was nice seeing some more open minded humans. (Money can work wonders) But I still think only having to trust one human (Starbreeze) would have made more sense. Plus, more chapters for the road trip! ;p
I love how each of the characters is still A combination of their hum and pony selves. Y'know Pinkie is still harry even dash still has a bit of Dave in her, And yet they are also Very much Pinkie and Dash. This chapter Was Rarity/Toms Time to shine in that regard I just... Feel sorry it cost her so much.
You are fired!!!!!...
Welp, at least I won lunch.
I can imagine these two scenes in a totally different way.
The limo would be one trip.
Hell on wheels could be a good chapter in that book.
Then the plane ride would be a whole nother!
This chapter had me spewing questions constantly, finally I have my answers!
OMG my FEELZ!!!!
I am sorry...
I have read Fallout: Equestria and Fallout equestria: Pink eyes
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No feelz left, for this chapter
Adorable
Oh.
Fuck yes, go Rarity! No wonder this chapter is named after her.
Ooooh sick burn. I'm not sure if I've mentioned this five times already (I have) but I really missed Dash for those ten-ish chapters.
Well of course, what else would they teach you?
This is literally the best thing.
WHY MUST YOU MAKE ME WEEP???
. “Rarity, you signed a personal checkFail business practice, alot of people would have bouncing checks, and they would be out a ton of money to allow checks.
That is a very Rarity solution.
This chapter gets me every single time. As someone who works for a living and knows the value of earned money, with a savings, I know how hard that must have been for Tom/Rarity. But this is why she is my favorite of the main six and why I connect with her the most. If I were in her position, I would have done the exact same thing to help out my friends.
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Same here, and I've also read Past Sins and Bride/Daughter of Discord. I completely understand.
Damn you can write.
Ok I just looked this up but so far what I’ve seen these things go for 58 Million to 65 Million dollars
JESUS CHRIST
Hot damn! I started to tear up at the end of this one.
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IKR
This chapter made me cry...
Goddamit you did it again TwistedSpectrum
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I know this respond is years late, but she. You are talking executive transportation like that, a bounced check of that amount would likely be a felony. Too much to risk for most people. So, yeah, taking a check would be fine.
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Yeah, this chartered flight with limo service is likely 30-40k easy.