As a fan of the show, I always loved Rainbow Dash and her cutie mark, but I never wanted it to appear on my leg! Now that it has, lots of things are getting weird around here. I'm a guy, not a mare! Cartoon ponies aren't real, right? (Mature version)
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Please tell me if you see any glaring formatting errors.
I had to pull this version from Google Docs and post it here since FimFic no longer allows linking to externally hosted stories.
Since it's over 200,000 words, and there was a lot of copy and pasting, there's a chance something got clipped or formatiing hiccuped somewhere. So just let me know if you're reading this and something doesn't make sense
3533492 FORMATTING no. Grammar? HELL YEAH. It's gotten better, but there's still quotation marks added or missing here and there, among other small errors. But you know, whatever. I'd have to be able to edit the doc or fimfic itself, and that isn't gonna happen! XD
as soon as the bad dragon thing fell out I knew it was shining armor this is hilarious
3604980 what??? also, there are over 100 more ratings than views. how is that possible?
but more importantly, which version is written first? is there any sort of 'canon' that you think would fit the story better? like is this for extra entertainment or is the other one just heavily censored?
i love this story so far by the way. i just really hope SA and RD don't get shipped
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Probably people who read the worksafe version then upvoted both.
Tom... really?
Spectrum, I don't know how you do it, but we'll done! Another awesome chapt. Funny as hell
I loved it all so much and I so happy to get to know what happens to some of the others I can't wait to see what happens to them next.It's just keeps getting better and better I can't stop reading this fic.I mean other fics that I been wanting for new chapters I can't seem to go to them ahhh it's too good damm you for making it this good.
You really do need an editor to go through these chapters. Perhaps I'm being nitpicky, but basic errors like these tend to be slightly immersion-shattering for me.
That being said, I am liking these new characters. The female to male gender change is going to be interesting. Oh, and the part where they grow horns.
Not sure if someone already pointed this out but
I can't help but call bullshit that was pulled totally from the authors ass for plot convenience and it's really bothering me
Interesting hint that Tom is Rarity. Execellent way to use the rock that Discorded Rarity thought was a bonafied diamond. Hats off to you
Why do I feel like this is Homestuck: The MLP Fanfic?
Anyways, this is awesome. Great job, TwistedSpectrum. I have two complaints, though.
1, This seems way too fast-paced.
2. And this is sort of a nitpick, but the whole "blame it on Discord" idea has been used in way too many HiE fics or Five Score fics themselves (well, duh).
But besides that, great job, and I love that one-liner at the end.
It IS possible to have purple eyes
Well then. Less than a day and only one step into the transformation we see our first Twilight freakout. It's About Time anyone?
So, just started reading this fic last night, and I love it. Gotta admit, my first thought was that Rachel was Rarity. What with her name starting with an R, the whole Tom thing, and the giving of gifts. Damn. Shows how smart I am. Derp.
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Only in albino people, though. There is one actress who looks like she has purple eyes under certain light, but those eyes are actually blue.
Canada!
I was going to be nit-picky and point out that there are no currently described phenethylamine derivatives with narcotic properties. They're all stimulants, hallucinogens, psychedelics, and/or entactogens.
Then Wikipedia informed me that the DEA has "helpfully" redefined all chemical meaning out of the term; at least by U.S. law, any illegal drug is a "narcotic."
My argument is invalid. Carry on.
5687023 Yes that was a LOST opprotunity there.
I swear if she's Lauren Faust
Fine, but a hundred dollars says the answer you’re looking for is ponies.”
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Im just now remembering that volcano scene.
RIP celestia, thine fate was undeserved.
now is Luna on Erath now too? Or was she just tossed in a volcano too?
well , shayning is a terrible commander, left his people to die.
Holy shit, 10/10, best friend ever.
I should've seen this coming.
Ponkers is gonna get payyyyyed
They're in a better place now, Shining... atop your head!
This just made me think of Harry Potter *shrugs*
Boy, there's nothing quite like reading a story twice! :D
But it is possible for eyes to change colour. I should know because mine go from blue to green every so often and hurts like hell when they do.
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Could you elaborate on that?
Obviously, these three are Twilight, Rarity, and Spike.
WHAT
eheheh...
I CALLED IT
and as soon as Rachel’s mark is revealed I WILL HAVE CALLED IT AS WELL
Oh well. Guess Harry might be somepony else? Maybe Pinkie Pie? Or a background pony? Or maybe still Spike?
Damn, I thought for SURE it was Rarity.
so it IS the beloved Ponka!
that’s why circular cakes are better
because its all equal
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Communist.
I love you author....
Gee, Twi were obvious, but for a while I thought her sister will become Pinkie and wasn't sure who Harry will end up, but... I really had to see this comeing. After all AJ and Big Mac end up as siblings as well. Poor Shining Armor. And Pinkie. Darn, I wouldn't mind end up Pinkie, but I think I'd freak out as hard while slowly turning into her.
Ok, guess Tom is Rarity then.
Technically, pure ecstasy isn't bad for you. The street ecstasy we know is mixed with other compounds like cocaine and heroin.
So we are talking about other ponies turned people and a name Tom is mentioned.
I bet it's Rarity.
Yes, we finally get a Pinkie Pie!!!
So... I just started thinking about this and it is bugging the HELL out of me: Why is Pinkamina male?
I interpreted the sex-swap as some sort of poetic justice--Shining is usually considered a girly-wuss and AJ and Dash are cannonically rather tomboy-is--, but that interpretation is (un-ironically) thrown put in Pinkamina's case. Is it just a matter of "Pinkie being Pinkie" or is there more at work?
It has been about a year since I actually read FSDF, so I could be forgetting a given answer... I am also witing to get the hardcover before re-reading.
In a galaxy far, far away...
ANIMANIACS POG LETS GOOOOOOOOO