As a fan of the show, I always loved Rainbow Dash and her cutie mark, but I never wanted it to appear on my leg! Now that it has, lots of things are getting weird around here. I'm a guy, not a mare! Cartoon ponies aren't real, right? (Mature version)
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I must wonder, should the merge be realized soon?
With this, fates will be put at rest.
Won't you return their memories?
Awaiting further releases.
Well that chapter sure was interesting...
WOOH river adventure!!
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Just the other day I saw a story on 60 Minutes or Dateline or whatever about a guy who planned to rob an armored car and escape by running to a nearby creek where he'd stashed an inner-tube and floating downstream. I'd like to think this will be about 20% cooler than that.
I figured Cadence would show up!
Ok, so the boat will somehow get lost on the river, go through a cave of horrors, over a waterfall, and wash up on shore near their destination while Pinkie Pie snaps photos of the trip for her scrapbook...
Did I miss anything?
Heh, either that or Pinkie will be water skiing out the back because... "Why else would there happen to be a length of rope and waterskis in the boat Twilight?"
What is this languages. Seems like what Vikings used to say.
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Most people know the phrase from the New years song, the name of the song is the same phrase, Auld Lang Syne
The phrase itself is a form of really old Scottish dialect that's not spoken today. It translates into "for the good 'ol days."
I figured it was a fitting end to the ponies leaving behind everything they know, and making one last journey, with no plans to return.
It's a farewell to the only lives they know, but they are leaving with their heads held high, in memory of the good 'ol days.
All through this chapter I couldn't help feeling a somewhat personal connection or atmosphere to it. I've been thinking about these characters for the past 2 months since I started and towards the end I could almost here crickets and see fireflies in the dusk scenery. Idk, maybe it's just the late talking, but I could really feel it. Best story ever, and by far my all-time favorite. I am 100% confident that it will stay that way.... unless of course you kill Dash or Scootaloo. Fucking everyone kills Scoots So yea, I'm following much more closely now.
I still prefer the one you used with the toaster thing...
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Right in the feels.
I'm crying now dude...
I'm crying.
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Have you read The Last Crusade? Scootaloo sees Dash as a sister, but Dash sees Scootaloo as just a stranger with a vague familial connection. From Scoots' perspective, she is justified in feeling cast aside from what shouldn't be a particularly dangerous mission. All the worse because Dash treated Scootaloo as no different than a background pony.
Dammit, I can't wait to see how you handle Equestria once they're through.
Brilliant little scene with the changeling btw.
Thanks for introducing Cadence, even if it's only to release Shining so he can stay with Rarity. In order to be a "realistic" FIM story, she had to show up sooner or later. Not to do so would have left a big gaping hole in the plot.
I think I just said something dirty.
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And I did it for you!
...ssshhh, just roll with it
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Speaking of dirty innuendo, while editing I realized I unintentionally wrote the following line when Shining trots off to give Rarity a goodbye: “Alright, I better go say goodbye to Rarity and make sure she’s packed."
Interesting choice of words brain.
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As for "What Cadance this is?" I leave that up to the reader. There are three or four fics that include Cadance in them right now. Just like with the Luna and Celestia scenes, I'm leaving the Cadance shown in Five Score to be open to suggestion. If you really like Cadance-from-the-Asylum, the congratulations, that's the Cadance that just met with Shining in Five Score. And meanwhile, if you really liked Cadance from Return of Dawn, then congrats, for you that's the Cadance that just met with Shining in Five Score...
This really isn't the best way for me to deal with multiple side fics of the same important ponies, but it's too late for me the change course now.
And Gilda?
She'll be on the farm in the next chapter, and will catch up with the mane six later... I knew I forgot someone >.>
Fantastic chapter. I started reading this a couple months ago,thinking it was finished. I only read finished fics because juggling unfinished ones is anoying. That being said, I have no regrets starting this one early, and eagerly awaiting updates! Great work, and it seems to be winding down to a close :( . Thank you for the story, and I'll be looking forward to the next chapter!
Cadence. Oh God yes, Cadence is my waifu. Please don't mess this up. Man, now I'm excited for this fic again.
I'm always happy when I see this update Great chapter!
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GOAL!!!!!!
Good chapter.
I like what u did with chrysalis kid trying to deduce shinning. My only question is as followed. How quickly do changelings grow?
And one thing I didn't like but can completely understand was Scootaloo's outburst. She has a right to be upset but at the same time I think she was overreacting.
Not mad at author just scoots character.
Happy with author because there suppose to give you shit to complain or praise about.
Therefore, author did a good job here. Go u!
Dat changeling scene.
When you talked about the river going through the town last chapter I was like: "Transportation. Right there." I should start calling these.
AAAAAHHH!!!! ITS THE EMOTIONAL CONFLICT WE'VE ALL BEEN WAITING FOR!! RIRITY VS. CADENCE, WHO HAS THE BEST FLANKS?!
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Don't worry. Big damn hero incoming. Sooooon....
3854574 as long as you dont make Gilda a complet bitch (like to hate on her) ill be happy
The anticipation is killing me I can't wait to see what happens. Great chapter!
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If I rememver correctly, despite being 25 + whatever-age-she-was-in-equestria, she is now in kid's body, mind is one thing, but hormones, so also emotions, are another. Whole CMC has a bit of problems because of this. I am still suprised how well they took having two sets of memories, each as different person, and now being mix of those two.
Loving this story, been with it since the beginning and it's come so far. Please keep up the good work and I'm really excited to see what happens, it spiked my interest to possibly write my stories again. I know you probably get a ton of pm's in your inbox but I'd like to throw something by you if you get a chance to check it out that would be fantastic.
Cheers,
~HondaRider92
3856304 Hmm... Goddess of love or a Unicorn fashionista?
Give me a moment to think about that.
I love how you incorporated the viewpoint transitions into the actual text. Ingenious.
As always, the fucking Shining Armor love story is what I hate the most.
Is this irony here on purpose? First of all, changing species and gender means nothing if the mind isn't changed, and that's exactly what happened twenty-five years ago. Hey, what's this?
Not to mention the fact that they are instantly attracted to each other when they meet, regardless of the lack of memories.
I am really not liking the Shining Armor love story. Honestly, I'm barely tolerating it just so I can read the rest of the story.
But I have just one question. If the Equestria Girls is canon. Then, Wouldn't the ponies turn into humans once they cross the portal?
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My understanding is that the portal "makes human" any ponies that use it to get to Earth, like Twilight did at the start of EqG. And vice versa, it "ponifies" anything going from Earth->Equestria.
But a pony going to Equestria? The mirror wouldn't change them. It would detect someone going to Equestria and try to turn them into a pony... but since they already are a pony, it doesn't change anything.
That's how I figure it works anyway. It just makes sure anything going through it will "fit in" at the new location. The mane six going to Equestria through it shouldn't change anything.
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No worries. I'm sorry you disliked it, but I had to bring it up in this chapter because that side story was a huge loose end that I had to tie up before the story could move into the final arc.
In any case, it's all done now and I hadn't planned to really bring it up again. (Well, not until the closing epilogue anyway)
3861571 total mind fuck bro
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Thanks. I look forward to the final showdown.
I cannot wait to start reading this chapter!
3874331 JESUS MAN! We get the point, you love it! There's no need to spam the comment section
Finally! Enter Cadence. Spike too, who was a bonus that I thought managed to get away from Discord. Guess not.
Hmmm, Spike x Rarity is a popular ship, and Cadence x Shining Armor is also common, an even assumed for those two. But if Shining stays with Rarity, then what if... Cadence x Spike? Yeah, just realized that's a potential outcome or twist. A potentially sexy outcome or twist.
Very uncommon ship that would be, I don't think there are any Spadence/Cadike(?) shipping fics around here. I'm sure there be like two or three somewhere. I'll have to check.
3900284 ... Okay, moron? It's called emphasis and repetition. I was getting frustrated at that point, so I first capitalized what was missing, to help draw the eye to what was wrong, and then wrote it again to make sure it was understood. Hypocritical, no. Belittling, maybe a little.
Next time you insult me, try thinking of something that I don't know to be completely false. 'Cause all that happens when I see someone defame me is make me giggle. But thanks for that, in a way. Starting the day off with a laugh is always nice.
Not to sound like a dick or anything but I hope they don't find te portal and get discovered by humans. Mainly for these reasons.
1. Maybe the humans panic, cause we all know they will, and report them to the government like in a story called ,if I remember correctly, typhoon and they have to explain their way out of it and If possible gain the help of the government then be.... Integrated? Yeah integrated into society.
2. It'll be a major set back for them and they'll have to 'cop with not being able to go back and sadness....
3. The rivalry with cadence and rarity may happen, and I feel it won't if they go back, since shining will most likely have to go back to ruling the crystal empire with his sexy bit- I'd rather not say but you know what I mean, the kids don't but u do, anyways it can happen where those to start fighting for their love.
3. The food supply is running out and now... They'll need food but how, from where, from who? That will be fun to read.
4. The changlings are multiplying, and soon they can find their way Into human life but...... I'm sure with a little but spray they can talk about te farm exposing their pony companion.... Or foe's whichever you want.
These are my reasons, tell me what you think.im talking to all of you people on the interwebs.
Found this in early January, Saved a link and forgot about it... Just yesterday I decided to start reading, and now....
It's all that's on my mind, for the first time in years my own mind is flooded with Ideas, I need to keep reading and to do so I may or may not have read it during Trigonometry. Also gone out of my way to memorize Discord's Curse...
Twisted Spectrum, keep up the amazing work...I can't wait to see what you cook up next
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She does as we both always do.
And into eternity we shall.
Well it's kinda sad to me as I tend to stick to canon pairings, so confirming them broken up is a bitter pill, the chemestry Shining and Rarity have of course has build up from their time as human so it does work, I was just figuring that they might have been flexible or something, that said leaving her story ambiguous is helpful for me as once this was finished I was going to write my own story (carefully writing Chrysalis's Role to fit with what it seen in this one, I had plans for her before learning you had picked a New Hive)
Can we expect an update any time soon?
Story status update
Sorry for my absence everyone. I had mid terms up through this Wednesday (they went pretty well by the way). I had hoped that as soon as my midterms were over I would immediately get back to writing. That really wasn't the case though, I'm so totally just drained of mental effort right now.
Anyway, I'm spending the weekend out on a mini-vacation so hopefully I'll recharge my batteries and get back to my usual schedule soon. I have about 2/3 of the next chapter done, and I should have plenty of time to finish it starting Monday. It will be up in like, I don't know. Some time. I'm not going to give dates anymore, I just break them.
Sorry for the unexpected hiatus. You know how things always seem to come up. At least we have new MLP episodes to keep us happy in the meantime, this season has been pretty solid so far
Also, I'm totally behind on replying to comments, so I'll do that over the next 24h. Hope you guys like replies to comments you left like 12 days ago >.>
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She was making her way over there since ch12, it just all happened "off camera" while Tess and her friends were doing stuff in those last few chapters.
Oh, ended on the most interesting thing - long trek home!
Man i love that download button