As a fan of the show, I always loved Rainbow Dash and her cutie mark, but I never wanted it to appear on my leg! Now that it has, lots of things are getting weird around here. I'm a guy, not a mare! Cartoon ponies aren't real, right? (Mature version)
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Oh dashie
I loved it all so much I guess some of the funny is back.And it looks like whale Shinings away Rarity will play I can't wait to see what happens next to them all.
everyone's gettin pussy except Twi and Shy.
I must admit... I checked your profile for said fic. Just your standard Stan Lee check.
“Back in the parking lot she said I owe you, so she gave me the keys to your room. Ah, Pinkie, getting revenge for the time I tricked Shining into sleeping with her, by playing my own game against me.” Rarity smiles. “Clever girl.”
clever indeed xD
This was good. This was very good. It was nice to see Twilight and Shining bond like that. It gave us some good laughs too. I'm glad that Starbreezer came in handy in this, and Dash's gift to him was also really cool. Dash and Rarity had some sexy fun, but I wish you'd write out one or two of those scenes. I get that it would make it more like a clopfic, but a couple thousand words for a full clop scene out of 295k words isn't bad. Still love the story though, just too much of a tease for me in that regard. Most of the gang is going to be united, and then they can begin their journey home! I'll continue reading in the morning [provided I can fall asleep with my mom sawing logs (in hotel, visiting family in North Dakota)] and on the journey home.
~SolidFire
I think I founded a good anime-sque opening for the fourth part of this chapter (Twilight´s Flashback):
Having a trustworthy human ally would be incredibly helpful. Seems like if Starbreezer was more level headed he could have helped them immensely with their journey to Iowa and beyond. Shame he was just an obsessed fan they didn't want to keep around.
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To be fair the reason he wanted to help at all was because he was an obsessed fan. 9 times outta 10 a level-headed person would realize they'd be going far out of their way for complete strangers and be less interested. They'd never have made friends in the first place.
4063463 You forgot Pinkie Pie. Pinkie hasn't gotten any pussy as yet either. Only Apple Jack, Rainbow Dash and Rarity had girl/girl action.
I could use a very good scenario from this for none of my characters.
Wow.its unbeleiveable how much chaos a new sentient race could cause just by suddenly popping up.
Imagine unicorn terrorists....I mean...just, wow.
That would indeed be a terrifying thought.
Just think about the library " incident" now think of that, only on purpose.
And multiplied by dozens of factors.
Omg.that is a scary though.
Best line out of the whole story *your a pony Harry*
This is one of those stories that I wish I could give more than a like and a favorite.
7834329 agreed
Holy shit I'm dead.
Oh my GOD
I missed this mare so much, I'm so glad she's back, 10/10 best pony
Dammit now I'm gonna want to read recursive fanfiction once I finish this to fill in the gaps. Darn you!!!
I love it.
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Maybe add two more zeros then one more for good measure
Awww right in the heart! Impossible not to identify with Starbreezer