As a fan of the show, I always loved Rainbow Dash and her cutie mark, but I never wanted it to appear on my leg! Now that it has, lots of things are getting weird around here. I'm a guy, not a mare! Cartoon ponies aren't real, right? (Mature version)
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no comments? is everyone trying to make a statement or something?
but i cant help wondering how the hell the end part is translated in the other version...
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I'd say most people comment on the regular version instead of this one .
One thing I'd like to point out that I don't like is the way chapters start, I haven't read the regular version yet , so I can't say how that is in relation to this. But starting a chapter referencing something that just happened (last in the previous chapter) makes me HAVE to go back and rea what was said (I guess not all people have this problem though ).
Really liking this so far. It's fun & silly, while still maintaining a sense of "realism" in terms of reactions. A few mistakes (mostly missing periods), but not too many. I should've gotten around to reading this ages ago
Would read more, but it's 1am and I have to get up in five hours.
Noticed only a few typos in here. I fucking love Five Score, and just now reading 18+. Yay!
So, um. Typos I saw:
Might wanna strike the 'he'.
I think that should have been 'considered'.
Yeah, those were the only two that stood out to me. I only actually started paying attention to this detail once I noticed the first one, though, and I'm more keen on reading the story than analyzing it for discrepancies. Lemme know if this is helpful, or if it's just annoying. I hate being a bother.
Your Faithful Reader,
Michael, 'Pinkies4thWall'
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Thanks for the finds
If you find really bad errors in future chapters, send them to me a PM. Leaving them in the story comments works too, but PMs are more ideal since then they don't clog up the story comments.
Thanks for your time, and I hope you enjoy the mature version. It has a fun juicy scenes scattered about
ima just make a guess right now that somehow this is gonna make a 180 . i have a few ideas whats going on lol. fiona or whats her name is really fluttershy turnd human by twi or the other princesses and is turning them nto the new aj and rd and will end up fighting discord or something but if im right ima probly die from to much loling. still think there lucky .
I loved it all it just keeps getting better I can't stop to the point I pass out from lake of sleep thank goodness it at night so nobody freaks out.I can't wait to see what happens next and I think most likely Even is going to be Big Mac .And I can't wait to see how Jack reacts to being a girl or should I say mare now
Would have helped if they'd put together a PTEK.
You just perfectly described puberty.
4845488 I think I'm dying, I'm pretty sure my lungs exploded. Call an ambulance.
Dave should have done the shopping that day, not wait.
Aw.. No picture?
Round 3 of: Spot The Typo.
6362292 That is too creepy.
I'm super curious to find out what is causing this transformation. Feel sorry for the characters being affected.
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if you just clicked on this, you clearly want to know, but you just got trolled, now if you clicked on this AFTER you finished the story, good on you sir!
You know what it should be, right? One word too many.
Well gee, I didn't know Big Mac was racist against himself.
How is he supposed to wear shoes with weird hybrid feet?
This would be hot if it weren't bestiality.
I laughed out loud. 10/10
And suddenly I was given a reason to laugh harder. 11/10
Is... is this supposed to be funny? Because I keep finding more things to laugh at despite this being a sexy scene.
I'd say zero fucks were given, but he's currently attempting to give a fuck.
Jack finally catches on “Everything we would ever need to live once civilization fell.” I nod, “Or, in our present case, everything we would ever need to live secluded, far away from society Lul
“Chaucer never bites stallions.” Pfft c'mon really? This is almost as bad that the villain is Obviously Discord. I just hope we get more character interactions before or after then.
then promptly piss all over the floor. Gah! What the hell, hold on a second. I force myself to stop pissing and reach back and turn on the light switch. What the hell is going on here, why did I piss all over the, oh. Oh.
A pussy is in place of where my penis once was. Not just any pussy either, a fully developed, equine shaped one. I closed my eyes and started banging my head softly on the wall. “Fuck me...” Wait, wait, oh god, poor choice of words! Let me try that again:
“Fffuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuccccckkkkk!”
That's better lol
I crease my forehead as I think back to what I said. “Wait, fuck you brain. Fuck you.” *giggles*
...What, no picture?
...That was a joke I do NOT want to see that shit.
Wow,the first time he find he change gender,he touch himself……
Chapter four, brought to you by Walmart!
Dude is surprisingly chill about this.
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wouldn’t you do it if it was you?
just admit it.
i know i would.
Question! How can he, or either of them for that matter, put shoes on when they can't put/keep there heels down? Sorry my inner egghead took over for a moment there.
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Hell yeah I would. From what I've seen and read women have full body organisms, I'd sure as fuck would want to know what that is like.
And this is the chapter where they turn female, isn't it?
I’m dead
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poor choice of word indeed