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A tip of my hat to you, for your hard work Thanks for putting this up!

Much better! I can't tell you how glad i am to finally be able to read this in an ePub version!

Mark as read, mark as read, mark as read, mark as read, mark as read...

In all seriousness, sorry about FimFic being such a pain lately. Hopefully you don't have to perform another circus act and jump through more flaming hoops in the future...

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It only took me eight hours of formatting and editing Not like I wanted to do other things today...

So, thank for the complement, I needed that

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i know this might sound cliche... but that was AWESOME!

"my favorite dash quote"

you sir make my life every time a new chapter is released... so you have made my life... *counts fingers* 29 times

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Bleh... And here I am having trouble even sitting down to write things for even ONE hour at a time! We all appreciate your dedication though. You're bringing us one of the best stories of the genre here! I dunno what I'd do without my Five Score fix.

TwistedSpectrum!!!

How could you possibly have devised such a devious, confusing and all-together impossible tutorial to find this story? It took me an entirety of 15 seconds to find this, and then 10 more to click "mark read" on every chapter.

You sure do like to work your readers to the bone, huh? Humph!

I probably put it on a bit thick... but I couldn't resist xD

Much thanks for the hard work of reformatting this, man!

hoh my gawd the "reader advisory: explicit content" in the cover image I am cracking up

Yay, now Google wont be a dick to me whenever I try to read this story from it!

Can't wait to see where the plot thickens (Get it?) in the next chapter!!

And, to set your creativity into a very great place, here is a vid.

3535650 It looks really good, didn't see any obvious formatting mistakes in the last chapter.
Which was a nice one, by the way, I was glad the tensions of the previous chapter melted away some.

3534762 you better be careful, thats against the rules of the site. So take this gif as a reminder.

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3540977 Oh I apologize I wasn't aware that that was against site rules.

3542425 right here in the rules
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I honestly don't care that much, but I thought it fair to warn you, and I just wanted a reason to post that GIF

3542773 Well thanks for the heads up. I would prefer not getting banned or muted or whatever. XD

Look's like things are going to get more interesting with the CMC showing up.

Making million of people piss themselves in fear, yeah, that’s something to be proud of.

I know it's dialog, but the missing S annoyed me.

I don’t think Luna thought about how the humans would react.

If you are incorporating a Luna from a story on this site, I have a good idea which one and am not surprised by her lack of forethought. We can say I have some issues with a couple spinoffs.

Apparently his special talent is tingling and he thinks someone, or something is on its way.

Depending on how recently he did something to Rarity or she did something to him, that tingling could just be blood.

When I first became an alicorn

TWILIGHT, I LOVE YOU!
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What? Did I just spend time to type that, got a problem with it? Luna's better though.

I’m lifting over a thousand pounds!

Wonder how much an ursa minor weighs.

Woo-hoo, way to go Twilight! Now lift the X-Wing out of the swamp and then go into the cave to fight a vision of your father.

SASSYSHY... or would it be Sarcastishy?

Our fight with him isn’t over, and sooner or later we’re going to have to finish it.

This seems like Halo music time!

I mean, look at the examples. Frodo and Sam took the ring to Mount Doom even with an entire army in the way, and a few small X-wings destroyed the Death Star.

Um, might be being a killjoy here, but didn't Tess not really care about those things?

Whatever it is, it’s all quiet on the western front.

Looks like they better get ready for a bulge!

“I think they might be your little sisters.”

Scoots is Dash's sister now?

I don't know how I didn't read this chapter when it came out. Wait, four ponies? But there are only 3 CMC, anymore and it would be hell on Earth.

3546255 Somepony is forgetting Babs Seed

Who gives a fuck about Babs? She's a background at best.

Ugh. The CMC? Really? Well, you've just removed 60% of my motivation to read this story.

"Cutie Mark Crusaders story ruiners Yay!"

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I am aware this comment was quite some time ago, but i can't help but notice how asinine it is.

Scratch this, i found a few more comments that are apparently similar.

Well... things are about to get a tad bit more chaotic around the farm. I think I might have to read the 5 Score CMC background story to find out more about them and how they got to this point. I hope you at least mention who they used to be, because that's what I'm most curious about. Also, I've got to agree with Dash about the no flying rule. Twilight gets to pretty much send a signal out to everyone for miles around them while Dash hardly gets to stretch her wings. Heh, she should just hollow out a cloud and hide in it while using it to fly around. People would just see a fast moving cloud, zigging and zagging through the sky. Onward to the next chapter, and hopefully more ponies will start showing up.

~SolidFire

Ha! Official side fic intermission for the CMC? Here we go again, again!

Why again is this a time to panic?
The CMC just arrived at their door.
TJE CMC ARRIVED FOR CELESTIA SAKE!

Senator Corddis has been very vocal about that prospect, and he had this to say at a rally last night:”

Unless, wait, did you mean Discord is here on Earth?”
Pinkie butts in. “He is! Well, aspects of him anyway.”

Discord is pulling some strings behind the scenes, even here on Earth.”

Corddis
Cord-dis
Dis-cord Found him!

Fantastic

“Well, Luna did sort of ask me for this address.”

Oh boy, this farm is gonna get crowded.

Fluttershy laughs as she clops

Oh my~

If you're interested in reading their backstory and finding out how the CMC got here, check out The Last Crusade written by CyborgSamurai.

Oh my god, I'm already invested into reading 300,000 words and now I have to read MORE???

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It wouldn't be ponies without a female majority lol.

I wonder how much of this story was planned from the start, and where it diverged from that plan to include references to the explosion of sidefics it inspired?

“Woo-hoo, way to go Twilight! Now lift the X-Wing out of the swamp and then go into the cave to fight a vision of your father.” Fluttershy laughs as she clops her hooves a few more times.

I'm liking this Fluttershy.

Senator Corddis