As a fan of the show, I always loved Rainbow Dash and her cutie mark, but I never wanted it to appear on my leg! Now that it has, lots of things are getting weird around here. I'm a guy, not a mare! Cartoon ponies aren't real, right? (Mature version)
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...only one more chapter.
I CALLED IT! I...sorta called it. I didn't think it would turn them human in that sense, but I did work what would actually happen about halfway through their talk of "Hey, won't this turn me human?" So like, does she have radical rainbow hair and everything?
OHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSH!!!!!!!
I think Sweetie needs to give them all their memories back now. They'll probably need it to be able to wield the elements, and Discord will know of their arrival anyway, and so it shouldn't hurt to give as large an advantage to the heroes as possible.
Perhaps a parting gift as the mane 6 go through, since the Chrysalis side fic says the CMC dont go through until later.
Hate to see it end but damn good writing and story.
So instead you are going to make us wait twice as long for the next chapter.
Just write faster
so sad is gonna be the end soon
is one of the best story i read here (if is not the best)
That was another damn fine chapter ^-^ cant wait to read the last bit!
Do you guys think he will make a sequel after this one?
Oh man oh man. Next chapter, it happens. Can't wait.
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Love ya bro! ... wait ... no r34 pic of dash. So mean.
Love how you handled this! Hope there will be a sequel exploring them coming back to visit, or resetting Equestrian society
Well this sets the scene for some very fun antics.
I would have expected Dash to still have her Rainbow hair as a human female, as while not exactly common, its not abnormal and could be explained away as hair dye in the case she ever meets with another human.
aslo... Twilight showed up naked in front of the school for EQG then? LOL
Heh, seems fitting that the anniversary is the day after April Fool's Day. I wonder if the author has anything planned for that auspicious day?
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From everything I read it looks like humanized-RD is just a very, er, perky tomboy/athletic type. (And I bet all of them would be smokin' hot)
I would love for AJ to take a trip back and forth Just to see her be "a blonde with a big rack."
A endgame shall soon take place. At last the grand battle will begin.
I hope they'll obtain their memories soon.
The last trace of the previous person, through winds and despair— so flaccid and struggling...
Awaiting further releases.
I'm wondering if there is going to be any way to make sure that they actually got everypony off Earth. The whole kidnapping thing earlier would make me think that at least some ponies are being held against their wills somewhere. It would be pretty crappy for them to be left behind.
This has been one of my favourite stories I have read in my life,
Not just amongst fan fiction, but in general... and I am the textbook definition of an "egghead"
I have loved every page of it and it has been at the forefront of my thoughts since I discovered it a few months ago. It is sad to see it end, but I look forward to seeing the thrilling conclusion.
It's so cool to see this great story finally coming to an epic end. I look forward to the last chapter, hopefully we'll see some more of this gender swapped human thing.
Even if you can't finish it buy the April, you should try and do a little something to celebrate my epic Shining Armor story My Mortal Big Brother
Also, If anyone needs a five score fix, I'll be updating The New Boss over my spring break. He's finally going to take Chicago.
Will Equestria be anything like in this story?
$4.38 says Discord heard that last comment.
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I was unsure if I should give her rainbow hair or not. On one hand, it would make sense for her to have it (and other humans would just assume it was dyed.) But on the other hand, I thought it would be kinda neat if her Earth form was a totally normal looking skinny girl with just brown hair or something.
I couldn't decide in time for this chapter, so I purposefully left it vague.
I think I'm leaning towards rainbow hair though. It has it's charm.
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I wish I wasn't so pressed for time. I'd love for them to all go through and spend a few days as humans.
Jack sure cleans up nice. Seeing him get used to that curvy body would be enjoyable.
But nah, I'm short on time here and it wouldn't make sense, story wise, for them to all turn human right here. Maybe I can throw something sexy into the epilogue though...
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I read, and enjoyed that story. I think the basic idea will be the same in Five Score (a few ponies hiding here and there trying to survive) but you do have to realize that 25 years have passed since Discord took over, so really the entire landscape should have been destroyed like fifty times over by now.
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Thanks guys, you humble me greatly. I find it funny how I really never intended to write this story, and then one day I just started writing on a whim. Don't be afraid to try new things yourself, you never know what's going to be a hit.
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Curiously,
While I know a sequel seems to make no sense, will you be doing more with the Five Score universe?
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Sadly, no, I think I'm done with this once I submit the epilogue. Two reasons really...
1) As successful as fun as Five Score was, my heart honestly isn't in it as much as it once was. Back when I started I would honestly look forward to every writing session, and the story was legitimately fun for me to write. I'd love planning every little scene and couldn't wait to sit down and start typing. But now... urgh, it's honestly like a job. I always see a deadline coming up and I sigh and think "Well, looks like I have to spend my entire Saturday writing the new chapter, urgh this sucks, I wanted to play video games this weekend..."
Anyway, don't get me wrong, I still love the story. It's just that, I don't know, it's hard to stay interesting this long in something. My mind wants to play with new ideas and write new things, I've known the ending of Five Score for like 6 months now, all this typing is just like sitting down and checking off boxes. I want to just be done with it already.
2) Even if I wanted to, I'm really not going to have the time to do anything. You probably noticed how I went from weekly updates, to biweekly updates, to like "once a month" updates. Medical school is just getting more and more intense, and I really don't have the time to write much these days. That's sorta why I made that short compilation fic thing, Twisted Transformation Tales. With that thing I can just write some little 5k word one shot and put it out there. There are no time commitments and no long and complex plots to write. Just quick little transformation stories here and there.
Maybe in the summer or something I'll write another longer fic, but for the next few months I just wont have time for anything other than little one shots.
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Medical School? That is Awesome! What Specialization you thinking about going into?
though I also understand how hard it can be, I am amazed you made something this amazing while going through Medschool,
I understand mate, I look forward to any future updates and stories you do and will always love this fic...
I can't wait to see what you cook up next
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I haven't 100% decided yet (I don't get my MD for another 2 years), but I'm learning towards Infectious Disease
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Twisted, you sir are amazing If I could afford a medal I would give you one
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You could always make a sequel-ish story where you write a few small side stories every once in a while That could be one of them: The six of them going back to earth, for example Or just Aj and Dash. I have no doubts that Dash is perverted enough to suggest the two of them going back through just to try and have a roll in the hay as female humans xD
4058603 actually there are going to be two more chapters
also they will be long plus the epilogues
I cant help but think the best end is a means of keeping the portal open 24/7 best of both worlds as it were.
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Well great things normally don't start off to be great. They just are. One major problem with stories is that they end, but without ending they would lose their purpose.
When this is done I will be very interested in what ya write next though. Your a great writer
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I have another story you can always check out. Granted, it's only for those who are really into clop, but seeing as how this is the mature version, I assume that's the case here.
Royal Duties deals with the same human -> mare shenanigans as Five Score. It's just less of an adventure fic and more of a "learning how to be a mare".
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It's high on the to read list already hehe
On the clop... it happens no denyin it
Blughhh... why did this movie have to happen...
Anyway good chapter looking forward to the segue into 5score/4 part 2. I mean the end.
4065831 Nyeh, I was close enough.
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Ooooh I can't wait till the end of the story!
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It's a shame that Five Score is coming to a close. You better make the ending amazing!
I'll be waiting for more...
So i just read this in one sitting...
at first i was like, the fuck am i reading, then i was like, this is a good story, then i was like.... and ...hehehe, now im like MOAR
...but seriously, first it was change ALL the body parts, then "Shampoo all the things , then find ALL THE PONIES...and changlings...and dragons...
saw the Candace twist a mile away when you made the twilicorn canon to the story
and there better be a story 2 to this...
I was hoping to see Sunset Shimmer involved in this. Granted, I pictured her as more of a "Keeper of the Portal" type of thing, but I guess what she did counts as guarding it from falling into the clutches of the wrong perjavascript:void(0);son. I thought that this was a great chapter.
4108520 It's a good thing really. Things like this need an ending and dragging them out would be annoying. It's a great fic, but if it was like 60+chapters and didn't end by then, it would just be like an anime that never wanted to end (like One Piece). An ending makes it complete and much better. I'll admit though, I'll miss seeing new chapter updates from this fic.
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Please don't remind me about One Piece.
My brother will never stop watching it!
boom chicka boom chicka boom chicka boom
Man, sad to see it all end. I remember when this first came onto FimFiction, back when I didn't have an account. And earlier I remembered this, checked on it and BOOM it's only 1 chapter away from being finished. Well, this has been a crazy ride, I just wish I was here to experience it. I hope you write a multiple–feature worthy 666-million-like story for us to enjoy again, I need my crazy ride dosage. The maker of Cube Land is now dead for all we know (he left in the middle of it and a bunch of other stories)
and Pokemon Trainer in Equestria isn't updating at all. GIVE ME MY CRAZY RIDES