As a fan of the show, I always loved Rainbow Dash and her cutie mark, but I never wanted it to appear on my leg! Now that it has, lots of things are getting weird around here. I'm a guy, not a mare! Cartoon ponies aren't real, right? (Mature version)
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Ohhhh shit son. This story is seriously great...
oh i so calld it omg i bet the book store had the same thing were some guy turnd nto twi and grew a horn and accidently blew it up.....
I loved it all so much and that part with the little girl was cute and sad at the same time I can't stop reading seeing all the changes was awesome.I just can't wait to see what happens next and why that Scotch got there.
3854265 shhhhh!!!!!!!
"waa applejack isn't a useless pony!"
*can't drive stick*
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Yet she's a farmer!
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That is a really good point. Not a farmer myself but I have friends who are. Pretty much all farm equipment is manual shift.
I've been meaning to read this story for quite some time. I'm just glad I've finally gotten around to reading it. It has certainly started out interesting and has remained interesting throughout. There have been quite a few laughable moments, and it's fun to see how they interact with each other. Now I wonder just who else is going to become ponies, and who they will be. I can't wait to read more of this badass piece of literature!
~SolidFire
I had not planned to read any transformation fics because I find the whole idea to be really stupid and annoying. I did however say the same thing about shipping once upon a time and look at me now: a fanatical TwiDasher who can't stop talking about lesbians ponies. On the other hand, I'm constantly looking for new fics to read and it's starting to get hard to find something that doesn't remind me of things I've read already and at the same time manages to capture my interest. Therefore it didn't take too much persuasion from one of my brony friends to make me put this fic at the top of my list of fics to read.
The first few chapters definitely needs some re-editing (which I understand is ongoing). On the other hand, it is a real page-turner that's almost impossible to put aside. The chapters tend to end in a cliffhanger and the gradual transformation makes it hard not to continue reading to find out what happens next. There are plenty of comedic moments and Dave and Jack cannot help but take advantage of the situation and tease each other relentlessly.
At this point I already have my own theories about what is happening. Equestria and its world exists for real and everything in the TV series reflects actual event. In order to save Rainbow Dash and Applejack, both of them have been transported to Earth by someone (Twilight?) where they are reborn in human form. On their 25th birthday they are transformed back into ponies in order to return to Equestria and set things right.
Dave is an interesting character: completely obsessed with Rainbow Dash and a clopper of the first rank. When his body begins to change he immediately jumps at the chance to live out his fantasies. It fits surprisingly well with my image of Rainbow Dash as someone with a strong libido who masturbates to pictures of herself.
First I was like. Jack is taking the gender change well. THEN the hooves came up and then I was like
And Hi Twilight.
Yup. they are 25 now the show lasted 5 years, this goes by the idea they girls were twenty at the start of the show. Yup they are the girls and they are reverting.
Round 3 of: Spot The Typo.
6362376 Yeah it was a sad ending alright.
I read the teen version of this story before i read this one, so I'm technically re-reading this story, and I love that there is foreshadowing this far back that everypony just skips over!
Alright, who wants to play: Spot That Typo!?
(tip: there are two typos in this.)
6929078 I... what? I'm not getting this at all, sorry, but you got upvotes so clearly there's something obvious I'm missing, right?
Again, how do you not notice stuff like this? I mean I guess he has an excuse since he was a bit more focused on his lady bits but...
Them gloats.
Officially dead, killed by a pony fic.
This is probably a bag of alfalfa or oats or something and I'm going to find it hilarious when its contents are revealed.
Someone turning into a unicorn maybe? Can't describe a "weird blast" and NOT have it be plot relevant now can we?
Called it.
Taking it in stride like a boss.
Quick someone age me up a couple years, I desire to be mare'd.
Behold, the smartest character thus far.
I... may or may not own a bottle of this.
...I don't own an horses.
Don't judge me.
He's finally starting to pick up on the tropes!
DUN DUN DUNNNNN
Bookstore, hmm?
Found Twi.
I'm reading the comments on this...I'm just doing a full re-read of this awesome story, but seeing others discover this story....that's awesome. Yes, this is one of the best stories on fimfiction. And check out some of the side stories as well. Some are really worth the read.
While Dave is giving up his fingers and thumbs, he kind of gets to keep them by using his wings as large hands.
its a SIGN
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I would just like to point out that the show which this fanfic is based on was intended for little girls
Yes. Yes it is
I think i can safely say that losing my canines would freak me out more than changing gender.
On the other hoof, there's that thing where teeth are not positioned correctly, just turn some of 'em sideways and we're fine
Also lmao
*Spoiler* I've read this story like 23 times and this thought only just occurred to me. I wish Twisted was still around to confirm or deny this but... Am I the only one who thinks that little girl is really Sunset Shimmer who pulled the same trick Twilight did?
This is my new favorite sentence.