Just some guy that likes to read and game.
My First Council. That's what this is. With my fellow Princesses. That I called together. Oh, this is bad. Right? This is going to be bad isn't it? It's okay, it's okay, just breathe twilight. In and out, in and out. It's going to be okay, it will all be okay.
It's going to be bad isn't it!?!
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I can see this council as an easy launch point for other oneshots. It was highly enjoyable regardless
They clearly don't know what they're talking about. Lusty Seductress Cadenza sounds like a hilariously terrifying villain.
That was a fun little read.
Nice job on it, man.
~Skeeter The Lurker
So many lulz!
That was a lot of fun.
Well, that was fun.
And as 2988068 said, this "council" idea could really go places... 
Some pony's in Equestria claim that two mares can have a foal together. If this is true, does the council have any plans to discourage or encourage this happening; as well as any ways to keep stallions from becoming irrelevant?
SSB?
Gee. Wonder who that could possibly be.
~Skeeter The Lurker
2998807 the super smash bros duh, he's not going to be aware that he's mocking himself. if I do this, that will be part of the joke, though I JUST thought it up now, as I type.
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Haha, nice save.
~Skeeter The Lurker
This was a hilarious little scene, and it had me laughing throughout. Thank you for this.
How about an embarrassing tape of one or more of the princesses gets out to the public and they must figure out how to deal with it? Even better if we don't find out whats on the tape until the very end.
A cult forms around Twilight, the newest Princess, and she must seek help in deciding what to do about it.
Pip and other foals have an argument about who is the best princess and go to the council for a judgement.
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Spike has done something bad and must explain his actions to the Council
The princesses need new regalia and attempt to one up each other through more and more outlandish garments. What trends in fashion might they start?
Discord comes to the Council with a problem. He's having trouble with his very first friend Fluttershy, and needs some relationship advice.
Rainbow Dash is causing thousands of bits in property damage, how can she be stopped?
The CMC want to get their cutie marks in being princesses and so they sneak into a council meeting.
Twilight tries to get her own celestial body to control because she wants that awesome hair.
Cadance is having problems with Shining Armor, what things that Twilight never wanted to know will she be subjected to?
Prank Wars.
Let me know if I'm being helpful or if you just want me to stop here.
Dear Council
Princess Celestia and Princess Luna did you ever thought of
taking a vacation and dumping all work on Princess Twilighttaking a well earned break from work and giving Princess Twilight valuable experience in ruling Equestria?Just think out it you could travel to a nice location while Princess Twilight
is alone and overburdened with workhas all the room she needs todo your jobgather valuable experience or you could stay andtaunt Princess Twilightgive her helpful advice and of course still attend to the Council.Rathalos
ps:please excuse all of the lined out parts but every time I tried to rewrite it it still came out like this
Dear Council
As an issue of Public Relations, do you sometimes feel that Princess Cadence has sometimes been overlooked? If so, do you have any plans to fix it, or do you prefer it this way?
Also, how's the foreign policy going?
-ColdGoldLazarus
(Character name asking the question: Shadowstep)
Dear Council,
Are there any plans to make peace with the Changeling Hive? Will these council meetings ever possibly involve Queen Chrysalis as a fifth participant? Sincerely, Shadowstep.
2999093 First off, I'm glad you enjoyed this so much! Comedy is the style where I really have no confidence in my abilities, so I'm glad I got a laugh. Second, you got a lot of ideas there, if you got more send them, the shotgun effect of a lot of little ideas is exactly what I'm looking for, and there are some that you've suggested that I can really see myself using.
But prank wars? Come on... that was going to happen no matter what.
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You should certainly have more confidence in your abilities. You had me laughing so hard during the story that my housemate came to check on me.
As for the Prank Wars, I think you may have misunderstood me. There's a reason it's capitalized. I'm not talking about pranks that can easily be played upon one another. I'm talking epic pranks that involve concerted efforts from hundreds of people and affect the GDPs of small nations. Things that the common folk just couldn't pull off.
Dear Council,
I am seeking a donation to help in my work on technology, mainly engines and motors. I'm also going to need some explosives, as I'm running low and they keep me out of depression, and I can hardly do anything when I'm depressed (details available upon inquiry). If you would like to speak with me in person, Fridays are the best bet for minimizing possible collateral damage.
Sincerely, Technia.
The second Discord came into play is around the time the plot went out the window.
That's not a bad thing, mind you...
~Skeeter The Lurker
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Oh man princess poison joke bomb...
The Lustful Seductress Cadenza just loves her Aegis Shield
Very nice, this Cadance is so much fun.
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Plot can survive against Discord? Never knew that.
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Not really. But it happens on occasion.
~Skeeter The Lurker
3061155 Actually I ran out of plot and Discord just happened to be available. Now if he would just stick to the script..
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Yeaahhhhhh.....
Not likely.
~Skeeter The Lurker
Well, things took an interesting turn, there.
What the hell is going on in this story?
lol.
3109501I have no idea. Whatever I think up really. I was stuck on xcom for the past week and I thought to myself 'HOW WOULD THIS HAPPEN IN EQUESTRIA' cue chapter.
Best drink name ever.
~Skeeter The Lurker
Fantastic.
meh
3112276Meh what? Meh what?!! Tell me! I must improve!
I love Twilight's telephone thing
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I didnt like this chapter its too loose and only consist out of "sleep deprived alicorns"(with is a good gag if rightly used but thats it:its a gag not a major point) and a cheap x-comm(great game btw) shout out.
Wasn´t the orginal plan to answer question in the comment while shenanigans and antics ensue? You derailed that into a wall -.-
that chapter cant really stand on its own it would be better suited as prologue part to a longer chapter (where we see what luna does with comm-x)
3113173 First, thank you for the critiquing, I appreciate the opinion and it helps keep things together. You're right about what the idea was for the story, the questions thing, but like I said, I was trapped in a game and I wanted to post something and that was stuck in the forefront of my mind. It is very loose, too loose, and I intend to fix it up a bit. You called it a gag, I agree, but to me that is also what this whole story is
, I started it with just that first gag and then I was done, then when people liked it so I asked for more gags. Happily however, I do intend for this to come up again in more.. coherent chapters down the way, no aliens though.
Thank you for your assessment, I hope I answered questions and wasn't just a defensive jerk.
BTW got any ideas you'd like me to consider?
Also in case anyone was wondering, I was playing The Bureau: XCOM Declassified.
I give it a B-, maybe a C+, but that holds more negative connotations than it deserves I think. Whatever I'm not a game reviewer.
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well only the usual get a editor advise^^ it never hurts to have someone read your story and give some input about it.
3114354 Meant for the story, you know the letters?
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? i have no idea what you want to say^^
Dear council,
As a concerned citizen, I wish to ask why the Buck are the Mares in Black and Comm-X beating the hay out of each other over a foal's frisby on my front lawn at 3 o'clock in the Bucking morning???
Signed cHaOs PoNy