• Member Since 2nd May, 2012
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Spiral Eyes


I can't believe I'm here.....

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After losing the Elements of Harmony in order to save Equestria, Twilight has been haunted with nightmares. There's only one pony who can help the scared Twilight Sparkle, and bring her away from her dark dreams.

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Ending seemed a little abrupt: "Deal with it, Twilight. I did." Maybe they're magic anti-anxiety cookies?

A face of filled her face as she chewed at the treat.

?????

She was overcome with a great happiness and comfort that she hadn’t know over the course of her two month period of night terrors.

known

A face of filled her face as she chewed at the treat.

I guess it's not a face that filled her face or those cookies are indeed strange :twilightblush:

good story and I think it's also in character for Twilight to fret about big decision like that :facehoof:

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...oh dear, I have a few things to fix. The price you pay when you self edit. and nope, just regular, plain old cookies.

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Nope, cookies are normal....but I do have some issues to fix xD

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Do the regular plain old cookies sparkle with rainbows like everything seems to do these days?

Looks like I found another underrated writer!

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To be fair, its hard to be underrated when you only have one finished story and one that's on indefinite hiatus. But thank you so much for the compliment.:yay:

Twilight sat across from her mentor, looking up at her the shining goddess like a child would look up and the sun, hoping that some kind of abridging of her view would keep her from going blind from her radiance. “Princes..Celestia” Twilight corrected herself, the words nearly melting together”…am I still dreaming? Are you really here?”

*At.

Everything else was great. I love how Celestia comforted Twilight.

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