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Twistedsteeldagger


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this is .....................................glorious

2920922 I hope you all enjoy it, i doubt this is very good for a first story but ill do the best i can to make it as good as i can.

(Warning: Self-promotion ahead)
I did something similar to this, though it was only a single chapter long.

Other than that, I like this. I like this alot.

Good so far. But capitalize your I's I the middle of the sentence, and place commas where needed be, and you should be set! P.S: Check this pasta out! (I made it, and its really bad, so be careful)

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/The_Silent_Sonata

Hay man, your stories are amazing, I can't stop reading! Oh, btw I hope you get that 'Jeff the Killer' sweatshirt we talked about. :pinkiehappy:

This story is AWESOME!!!!!!

I thought he was called Slendermane.

2929588 Im gonna go through and fix it as soon as i finish this chapter.

2924068 Maybe because Slenderpony basically has no mane to begin with?

1 in two days!? Holy poop!

2929588
There are many variations to the ponification version of the infamous ShlenderMahn. (As Warfstach pronounces it.) This Author just had pony instead of mane.

I was grinning like a motherfucker while reading this!

-The Good Doctor

i can see jeff hanging with slendy hiding in the woods.

THERE CAN ONLY BE ONE!!!

Is it just me, or are the chapters becoming better written as time goes?

Could use some work, but it was a refreshing read. Liked it :D

Oh, I will enjoy it.
And make my friend a pegasister perhaps in the process.

2920987 this is your FIRST!? Mad skillz

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"Your mother didn't think you were beautiful, and she HATED your smile!" She grinned deviously.
"Wh-what did you say?.." Jeff took a step back, that hit really close to home..a burning sensation irritated from the back of his head.
"Mommy lied to you, daddy lied to you..they ALL LIED TO YOU!

That hurt... Even for me, whose almost as crazy as Jeff. He's one of my top three favorite creepypastas, too. And to think, if she stayed away, Jeff might have made friends, stop killing... That often at least.

What I imagine Jeff does in his spare, when not killing ponies (pony Jeff)

Plays poker in the woods with slender, Jane, eyeless jack, and Ben.
Plays video games alone or versus ben
Polishes his knife collection
Drinks milkshakes
Attempt blinking, to see if he can
Reads creepypastas
Reads fanfic about masky X hoodie to tease them.
Hunts down people who ship him with BEN
Trolls people on 4chan
Griefs on minecraft
Watches Doctor WHOOVES

Human Jeff
Exact same as above, except watches MLP, and change doctor whooves to Doctor WHO

Go home Jane, your drunk, and you were molested at the bar :/

Jeff the killer will hunt you down unless you right more. Nah, but you will make Fluttershy cry. :fluttercry:

Im very pleased with this :D

shhhhh....
Go...
To...
Sleep...

YAY THAT MURDEROUS BITCH OF A TYRANT CELESTIA IS FINALLY DEAD:yay::yay::yay::yay::yay:

3842904 THE POWER OF CHRIST AND CELEST COMPELS YOU :twilightoops::pinkiegasp::flutterrage::pinkiecrazy:

2943942 So Slendermare, Slendermane, and Slenderpony are some of the names to the ponified Slenderman

I lov flutters, hate to see her killed, but killed by Jeff or another pasta, that's a whole other story :pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

4629874 yes, yes yesyesyeysyeysyeysyeysyyes, it FEELS SO GOOD, ACHIEVMENT

Hahahaha Ponyville! Am i the only one that see the crazy pinkie meeting the insane jeff?
Really good!!!!!!!!!

2920987 first?!?! holy fuck, your good

My name's jeff


I'm so sorry

7199547
Gonna need more than that :pinkiecrazy:

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