John Kramer is known to some as a madman, others as a psychopath, a few as a prophet, but he is known by everyone as the Jigsaw Killer. During an attempt to escape from the police, John was teleported to the magical land of Equestria. Watching from the shadows he saw that so many ponies were ungrateful to be alive. Can the citizens of Equestria escape the wrath of jigsaw?
A/N This story is a crossover between saw and My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic. There is also one other crossover I couldn't help add to the story
Chapters (8)
Awesome chapter
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Thanks!
your welcome
I just noticed that there was several words missing
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I like where this is going. I love all 7 of the movies
definitely worth a like and a favourite. I would recommend an editor though. Otherwise, it's good.
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do you know any good editors? I already have the second chapter finished just need to edit it.
I know I suck at grammar
4158677 not personally, but there are groups dedicated to finding editors. Perhaps try this link out.
Saw that Author's Note. I'd like to edit.
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Ok I will let you know when chapter 3 is finished.
If any pony has an idea for traps message me or leave it in the comments. If your idea is good it might be used inside one of the stories chapters
I am going to look through the other chapters and fix the grammatical errors so you can read it
P.S. Accidentally deleted the first chapter so I decided to do a MAJOR reboot on it. I suggest you retread it
That is interesng, he doesn't see misguided ponies. he is just misunderstanding them.
Dang you Twilight and your magic, you ruined the game.
Please like and spread the word
Idea for a new chapter th00.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/f/2013/289/a/7/twilight_sparkle_in_the_reverse_bear_trap_by_mibevan-d6qpg1c.png
Hello Twilight. I want to play a game.
Since birth you've live a very organized life. Even when you mess up you intend to learn from your mistakes. However if I'm correct not so long ago you made a small mistake with no consequence and ended up causing the whole town of Ponyville to go insane over a mere child's toy, proving that you would force a mistake to learn from even if it means using your magic on the innocent to maintain punctuality and learn a lesson of friendship.
Which is more important to you Twilight? Let's find out? The device atop your head is hooked up into your upper and lower jaws. When the timer goes off your muzzle will be permanently RIPPED OPEN. Think of it like a reverse bear trap. To avoid any risk of Cheating, if you attempt using magic to escape this device the trap is set to go off on on its own taking your life.
The only way to free yourself is by locating the key located within your unconscious friend in the room with you, one by the name of Fluttershy if I'm not mistaken.
Live or die Twilight make your choice.
Billy. Alive? Interesting.
4225830 hmm... Maybe if the victim is a Pegasus it could be related to ripping their wings off. For a unicorn the horn should be removed. Earth ponies? No clue.
This is NOT going to end well...
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It is difficult choosing who to put in the reverse bear trap. I want to save it for somepony special.
I don't think you have actually seen jigsaw movies. Or you are writing really OOC.
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awesome chapters you are doing a amazing job
Oh and cool story bro. Read and liked it.
Cool story. I wonder if you're going the Rack or The Rock in Saw III
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One of my personal favorites is the carousel from saw VI so expect to see it.
4662183 Bloody Nice brother. Literally and Figuratively.
Jeff the killer? Interesting,
Blueballs deserved to die. I wonder how everyone will react.
I am going to laugh my ass off if celestia just goes blank for a few second before smiling like a maniac and hugs Luna
This is a really good fic, I haven't seen many Saw crossovers here, and the ones I do find are pretty bad, so it's nice to find a good one, the only problem I have with this fic is a few spelling errors (witch I can ignore), I can't wait for the next update
when do you plan on continuing the story
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It's coming soon don't worry. I took a longer break than I was hoping to but now I'm back. Plus freakin Apple lost literally all my progress so now I will be more focused on writing.
5023996 YAY MORE JIGSAW AND DEATH
Um.... this trap seems really simplistic for a jigsaw trap, it diddint evean have an ironic twist to it (ex: guy cuts himself for attention, has to crawl through a maze laced with barb wire) hell you may as well have used This becuase im sure it would have the same effect as this one did. I mean seriously? The most creative trap jigsaw could make is driveing nials to her hooves? This better be a cupcakes reference.
Jeff and jigsaw, you sir are a genius.
I salute you
I'll be your editor! i like this, but the grammar kinda annoys me, so i'll edit! :D
Not much of a fan of Jeff, but I can deal.
I think you should spare her
I liked the shotgun carousel, but another trap that is good is the coliseum trap, festering the diamond dogs. Or rarity gets tested on how much she really cares for spike and sweaty bell. Or even the closing walls with shinning armor.
hello, john, i'd like to play a game...
the first pony you encountered in the new world approached you, with nothing but enthusiasm and kindness, and while the talk about partying and eating would ring off some alarm bells, you made the ill considered decision to test her without looking into her further, the reasoning behind this is that not everything is said in the correct context, therefore you may have made the mistake of causing her unnecessary suffering.
your other... players, were taken into your hands with very careful and decisive action, making completely sure that they were in need of your help, you seem to have lost sight of why you began your work in the first place. (blah blah some joke about flamethrowers and flames and continuity mistakes)
as much as I like this story I have come to believe that this trap is a poor representation... no, knock off of the original, while I like the idea of applying filthy rich to this kind of game, I really feel like there should be at least one or two chapters of setup for each character before their game begins, because it get's us to a place where we think we know whether jigsaw or the players are right.
I knew it was going to be one of these, saw ftw. I would have used saw 2 though a bit since his daughter but it doesn't matter, I still like it!
finally an update
This is supposed to be a saw crossover, AND YOU PUT FUCKING JEFF IN IT??? WTF!?!?!?!?!
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Looking back, I do regret adding Jeff into the narrative. Full disclosure, when I wrote him into the story, I was on an internet horror craze, and added him without really giving it to much though. If I ever revisit the idea of a “Saw” crossover, I wouldn’t include him.
What the hell did pinkie pie do to be tested?
If the carousel trap is like the one in saw 6 the chains ⛓️ could be locked 🔒 with a carapin hook 🪝 and all they would have to do is open it and they would be free