Homicidal Serial killer, Jeff The Killer is on the run from his latest killing spree. He now sets his eyes upon the quiet village of Ponyville.
(Warning: Self-promotion ahead) I did something similar to this, though it was only a single chapter long.
Other than that, I like this. I like this alot.
Lol slenderpony
Good so far. But capitalize your I's I the middle of the sentence, and place commas where needed be, and you should be set! P.S: Check this pasta out! (I made it, and its really bad, so be careful)
http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/The_Silent_Sonata
2924068 I wish i would of thought of that XD
(Warning: Self-promotion ahead)
I did something similar to this, though it was only a single chapter long.
Other than that, I like this. I like this alot.
Lol slenderpony
Good so far. But capitalize your I's I the middle of the sentence, and place commas where needed be, and you should be set! P.S: Check this pasta out! (I made it, and its really bad, so be careful)
http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/The_Silent_Sonata
2924068 I wish i would of thought of that XD