• Member Since 4th Oct, 2011
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Melon Hunter


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Have you ever heard the phrase 'it's cruel to be kind'? When a friend loses all faith in themselves, sometimes the only thing that can pull them back from the brink is a bit of tough love.

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Wow, i really liked that~

Good job! I loved seeing backround on spitfire too~:rainbowkiss:

Very nicely written! I'm surprised there aren't that many comments down here so let me be among the first to say that you did very very well and I expect more goodness from you ;)

This is pretty good. I liked your version of Spitfire.

Very well done. Very well done indeed. Characterization is spot on. I agree with John Perry 9354 this would make a fantastic episode. The concepts may have to be toned down but overall I think this is a worthy message.

I can see myself reflected in the Dash and Spitfire.

Nikola of Tesla
Head of Applied Magic, Canterlot Institute of Technology

Believe I'n your self but sometimes you'll still need a push In the right direction :rainbowdetermined2: now knows it and is gonna become a wOnder bolt

god dang it.made me cry a little:fluttershysad:

Really nice story!
I enjoyed it allot and it's really deep considering that the story isn't that long.
yes, it's kinda sad but everything worked out in the end and I think this story deserves allot of love :P

Keep it up!

Not bad, though I did skip the flashback of when spitfire got rejected, i’m More here for rainbow dash than anything else

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