The Cutie Mark Crusaders try to follow the example of self-styled survival expert 'Bobcat Griddles' in a new quest to earn their cutie marks. What could possibly go wrong?
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Why does this only have 2 likes?
1258666
I take it you liked it then?
Being in the 'write-off' meant it didn't get its shot on the front page, so exposure was minimal (lack of a cover image doesn't help). I'm kind of surprised you found it at all! I keep meaning to go back and refresh it; maybe it would be worth resubmitting.
1258945
Yea it was pretty good, nothing compared to your other story but still, I say go for it.
I should probably start out by saying that I'm not the best at critiquing, but I'll try.
There's one word I could see that could see could be changed
I think that nearby is one word.
This sentence also stood out as being a bit awkward.
I think it might be something like "At least you won't have to carry it all back!"
As a Slice of Life story, everything checks out. Their interactions are true to character. And knowing from personal experience that pine sap is indeed flammable, when I heard they had covered them in it, I thought things were going to get very hairy very fast. Good thing Applebloom knows about fires.
1981006
Thank you, much appreciated.
Always nice to see a responsible Rainbow Dash for once.
2375654
Hey, it has to happen once in the multiverse, right?
This fic doesn't get much traffic -- do you mind if I ask how you found it? Was it a result of fimfic's layout changes?
I follow WASP and just decided to check out your other stuff. Must say it was a good choice.
2379607
Excellent, thank you.
*snerk* Bobcat Griddles fic... let's see... ah! Drinking-one's-own-urine joke: check.
You can has review!
9613208
Oh lord. You know I wrote this bloody ages ago, right? It was for one of those writing competitions, and I've never gone back to it?
Thank you; I will take a look, with some trepidation.