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The childish tone you've used in this story fits perfectly. Feels were had.
Woah. Man.
I really hate the soccer moms that complained about Derpy. I could make a long winded statement in defense of her but we all no that would do nothing, so instead: Thanks for writing the fic, it's an interesting story on Derpy's deletion. Keep writing other stories!
2844307 Thank you. :)
2844310 I agree with you, although I think they aren't done with Derogatory yet. Thanks also, and don't worry! I will. Follow me, perhaps? For anything I may post in the future? :D
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Done. I hope to see great things of you, my boy!
2844422 I'll try not to dissapoint! :D I won't post much new stuff, but I am working on an Assassin's Creed fic that a lot of people seem to like. Why don't you check out that? Or perhaps another sad one shot I wrote with Rainbow Dash. Or, if you want, I wrote a couple of stories with my OCs.
Well....anyways, enough promo stuff. I hope I meet your expectations!
This is actually really really really (just multiply the really by like a thousand) cute. I was actually really worried when I saw that it was so short but this was full of detail and emotions. It also really puts the whole Derpy thing (of which I'm still angry about) into perspective. Good fic, made me sad. Also approved for Twilight's Library. Ah what the hay have a fav and an upvote as well
2860470 Thanks! The upvote and the fav are much appreciated, as is adding it to the Library! Hey, by the way...I have a question. Do you mind?
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I'll send you a PM about it
So sad... I enjoyed the writing though.
2870768 Thanks! I really tried to made it sound kiddish. Hopefully that's what I did.
Famous last words...
...Sequel?
2987296 Eeeeeeehhhh I don't think so. Perhaps if I had gotten more response and views, maybe, but as it is now....no. Sorry.
I'm glad that Hasbro didn't get rid of her. She's a sweet pony; a little slow, but sweet.
I genuinely enjoyed this story. I really liked how you took show controversy and its canon to the show and made it into a story about that pegasus. I look forward to reading more of your work.
3358890 Thanks! I'm glad you liked the story so much. I tried hard to mix the two worlds, and I think I did an okay job at it.
Thanks for the follow as well!
3358811 Aye, indeed. Supposedly starting next season we won't see her anymore, but I don't know if that's true or not.
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For all our sakes I hope not.
3358984 If its true, they will lose a lot of fans. And if it does, I'll still adore, love, and admire the cute mare. I will still make stories in her name and draw her pictures.
3602354 And it's attitude like that that will keep Derpy alive, even if they do decide to "kill" her, so to speak.
However, she is in the new intro, so I don't think we have to fear anything.
Oki doki loki! lets do this!
May contain SPOILERS!
Welcome bronies and pegasisters,
I´m here today to do a quick review on "Fade Away". A story about a fan favourite. I expected something else when I read the description. I will come to that later.
The writing and storytelling were good. There were only minor mistakes and in this story the pacing was good. Nothing seemed rushed and it all in all felt naturally "Derpy". The childish tone and the background with the doctor was nice and made me smile.
The sad only kicked in shortly before the end. the main focus was on Derpys inner discussion with the voices in her head. It was a original idea to not use split personality or magic in this one and it is good to take risks as a writer. So all in all I really liked it.
most of what comes next is more like a personal opinion. As I already said I liked how the Quillin took a risk with how this story went. There are, however, two thinks that may be worth a discussion or advice.
First of all I have to say that I doubt that anyone at hasbro would have the power to "delete" Derpy. The fandom brought her to live, gave her the name and brought the character into the show. A more "neverending story"- approach would have given it a darker and melancholic tone. That the fans turn away from Derpy and she fades out of memory.
Second point is that this felt a lot like breaking the fourth wall to me from time to time. Putting best pony Pinkie in there would have made a lot more sense. There were discussions in the fandom that season 4 wasn´t too good for Pinkie Pie and using this with Quilling Words idea would have been a better combination.
Maybe not a "mistake" from his side and more like a personal opinion, but you get what I mean.
So all in all the originality and the writing bring in the points. My final Verdict for "Fade Away" is a four out of five.
Good job Quillin!
NightmareShredder
5429436 Wow, 4/5! Thanks for such a great review.
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I hope to read more good stuff from you in the future. If you make something bigger, I may make a bigger review. For short stuff the max. score is 5. If you are interested you can check "Button Hash" or "Archmage" for example.
PS: Any suggestions for another review? Anything you´ve read recently?
NightmareShredder
5430839 Well, if you want something REALLY big, check out "Blue Angel" by V-Pony. It's long, and it's epic. Over 700,000 words and counting.
As for stuff by me...well, I've had something in the works for basically a year now. Whenever I get that done I'll send it your way.
Good story and thanks for quoting the 10th Doctor. I love Derpy. Why do people hate her? I don't see it.