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If i knew how to use the emoticons id be usin one to define your story so far. ( Better than great)
he's so fucking dence.
MOAR please!
Why did he take his shotgun... What could he have possibly thought would happen in a heavily crowded city with an princess by his side?
You messed up... Spike is totally gay.
>>Mogss Go to comment section type yo omment, look to your right there yah go there yo emoticons now click on one of the faces.
3306242 If you think that's shameful, you should meet me in real life. My brother is always sooo pissed at me whenever we go somewhere and I talk to a girl (Chick, babe, whatever you want to call it) Just last night I went to Wendy's and there was this kind, nice, pretty young girl working the cashier. So I order, make small chat, then get on my way. My brother punches me after and is like "You fucking tool! She was eye raping you and flirting with you and you didn't even ask for her number" and I was like "huh?"
3306728 now that is funny.
3306728 oh and profile pic thats one of my fav movies.
3306774 Favorite part of the whole movie. "V-raptors take out dino-dundee but can't manage to catch two children." that and the random part where the t-rex steps out of the pen then later there's a random cliff there for drama and I was like "What? Oh fuck it, it's awesome
Ehh, there are some grammatical issues, nothing that I can't overlook for the sake of the story though. In addition, how do you like the norinco shotguns? I haven't been able to find one because the only gun stores near me treat all norc guns like they're made of tnt and will explode the moment you touch them, that and I refuse to put my credit card number online.
Oh right, great story as per usual.
3306790 I look at Norinco like a Honda. You get what you pay for and usually nothing more. The milling is so-so but the gun will last if you take care of it. It's fun to shoot but because of the short barrel there isn't much use in hunting with it because the shot spreads a bit quicker, and I'm not sure but the barrel looks to be modified choke, not cylinder bore, so no slugs (Well, I never tried but I'm not willing to either) Like I said, I like them because they're cheap, but don't expect it to be on par with a Benelli or something, though the fact that they make clones like the 1887 or '97 really make them kind of fun. I've always thought about tracking a 1887 clone down just to try it out. Anyway, final verdict "Fun, cheap, and it's within reasonable reliability."
Riding a shopping cart?
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Done it.
Great chapter.
too much ice cream will make you fat
I just love how dense this guy is XD
Haha the tingling back-arching sensation happens to me too! It really sucks cause people ask me all the time if I'm alright. I didn't know that happened to anybody else!
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Well, fuck you, too!
Getting the whole ill kill you if you break her heart talk from a girls dad never gets old truly beautiful.
Hmm...
The main character, Evan, i'm still not too stoked about him. Maybe I can't connect with the guy because I don't wear camo on a regular basis (or at all, really), use a big exaggerated truck that i'm sure every redneck bag of douche has wet dreams about, have a gun collection, and repeatedly reference Arnold Schwarzenegger. I don't know. He just seems too Gary Stu to me; like he's trying too hard to be macho and cool. I guess I just can't connect with him.
As far as the other aspects of the story... Meh. Really, the only things i've stuck around for are the bits and pieces of humor and slice of life. I really don't like being a Debby Downer, but... That's the truth of my situation.
best part is getting the "talk"
This just keeps becoming more fun to read with each chapter.
I liked this chapter.
this is very enjoyable, i like this guys cocky attitude.... kinda like mine :P.
Can we say Mr. Oblivious.
Maybe she took some "remains" after your MP session and is now pregnant. Somehow.
Well, at least you're not Flash Sentry. Uh oh.
Oh Celestia dammit, I just thought about Flash Sentry. Uh, I don't feel well.
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Kill him with FIRE!!!!
*ahem* viagra...
youre a mare?
nice troll
...I hate you so much...
making me remember that....story.
3859504 It sounds sad. Link pls
3306242 not as much as Sharky White is believe me that dude
Twi practicly shouted shae had a crush on him and he did not notice
Thought I'd give this a second chance glad I did (should of read past that chapter the first time) welp my mouth is sore cuz now I'm hooked.
How dense can one guy be?
It us a childs book called "mommy and me."3940624
I loved this chapter it had me ROTF.and sweet I still hope he make a herd. I can't wait to see what happens next to them all and between them all next.
Man, this guy is about as smart as a box of rocks... I'm really hoping he wisens the hell up.
So, why did the guy grab a gun and load it to go meet her parents? Also you reiterated the fact that she's "like my mom" way too many times, to the point it was frustrating to read
this would be burdy verison of what is love
I don't know how I'm supposed to feel about this MC I mean when he's not being a literal moron he acts like a edgy douche and a creep. His whole Arnold Schwarzenegger thing is super cringy I will say that again super cringy , and he "gulps"...like, alot at lest 4 times a chapter he gulps its really weird. Also when it comes to sex he acts like a 13 year old which is also really weird.
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then muad would love him
I'm starting to have this nagging suspicion that he's not just built like a shitbrick house...
Is this about some alt-universe Johnny Bravo or something? They should start a gym together... "Clueless & Clueless"
...
Okay, now I'm not so sure. I'm torn between "clueless" and "dense on purpose". I mean, can anyone be this dense? Maybe he's not dense. Maybe this is just how he rationalizes shit to himself, so that he doesn't rut a mare stupid.
Isn't no frills a canada only store? Like only located in canada?
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thats now my headcanon about this guy now.
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That part is a pre-equestria part, and the author lives in canada
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