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3219948 This comment is the best thing.
First, I want you to buy a scrabble set. Feed the words to a severely mentally handicapped person and feed him a laxative filled dinner. Then observe as he shits in your home and then look at the words in the bowl. Those shit stained words from a mentally handicapped's ass would make a better story than this.
I see that bumper sticker all the time down here in Texas.
Also the Grinch?
Great chapter. Rainbow is gonna hate herself for missing today. It was really nice of Evan to do that for her. Guess the pony lifestyle is getting to his rough and tough exterior. Anyways great chapter and keep up the great job.
4941035 ....I have to give that comment a thumbs up purely based on creativity...
I don't mind what other people say about this story, in my opinion it's pretty enjoyable compared to some other 'dark past soldier' crap stories on this site. Burdy is unique in handling the situation he is in, he may be dense but he is also not taking any crap from his past. He walks over it and laughs, then looks onward, while still having some emotional moments, instead of becoming a complete paranoid, introvert with PTSD or similar. He just gives away this very aura of honesty and loyalty, which makes him sympathetic.
Granted, he reflects a younger Schwarznegger, with all the puns and his escapades, but even then I really like how you implemented some of Schwarznegger's movies into this story.
Even then there is action pumped chapters, and laid back slice of life chapters. This one for example ends on a very positive note, after all he's been through lately it really helps to lift the spirit of the story.
I really start to enjoy Lassie as a companion, she is fun to read. It was a good idea to make her sapient on the right occasion, especially with what kind of character you made her.
Funny enough, though you described him differently, I always picture Derreck as a kind of younger Chuck Norris? I don't know, the things he does and his personality meets him in similarities.
I'm curious as to what you will do with the woman.
Keep up the good stuff!
4941006 No it's not, it's just a rant.
Also, the comment is 69 weeks old, a lot has changed since then and many of this guy's assumptions and claims have been disproved, first thing with him not being a soldier at all.
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4943684 See, I'm giving that a thumbs up. That's a pretty nice review. Now, not that I'm one of those people that only like reviews that say it's good, but one that has thought into it. You can see he's changing. He's no longer this brash, hardheaded asshole that he was in the beginning and there's reason to it. He's finally accepting Equestria because... well, because it's just growing on him.
That and your other comment made me laugh. I seriously don't know why in the beginning everyone thought this guy was some sort of soldier. First off just because he has a gun doesn't make him military. (Though a cool guess would've been child-soldier, that would've been a cool idea, child soldier ends up in Equestria) anyway, then he went on to rant about all the things that a US soldier would never do/have and I was thinking the whole time "Okay... you've shown evidence that this guy doesn't seem to be a US soldier... so why the fuck are you thinking that he's a US soldier?"
Somone's been watching Spaceballs.
Now I got the song stuck in my head.
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Okay, this has got to be the best line in the whole story.
Burdy, that was a dangerous and reckless demonstration for someone who claims to know firearms. Would have been better perhaps to show off your eye wounds from battling Freeze and talk about saving Applebloom.
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but MOOOM i wanted to show the kids i was cool