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I feel like I did something like that already.
heh burdy is lucky he was dealing with pony fire fighters, our fire fighters wouldnt have let that slide
"static"? What?
Actually, as of the last several chapters I'm criticizing Twilight for being insufficiently direct. Not once has she actually sat down with Burdy and cleared up the obvious misunderstanding; Twilight should understand by now that Burdy is immune to subtlety, and it would take all of a minute to give a blatantly un-subtle explanation to start a real conversation with Burdy about it. She has almost gotten there a couple of times, but she always seems to let the conversation get derailed.
nice to see the chapters rolling out
Spotted a minor typo...
Well... It could have been worse... At least there's no tetanus potion for him this time.
...
And Twilight should probably take anger management lessons from Fluttershy... bad ones that is.
"Evan! You're going to"
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"LOVE ME!!!"
Or, for a more calmer approach...
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Doing a little shake right into his face a couple of times might be the next best thing to get that idiot onto the right track of thinking.
Twilight needs to give Burdy a Gibbs smack ( for you NCIS fans out there) and give him the 'talk'.
Every time I read this story it makes me smile. Keep typing
3753559 look it up in synonyms or dic.com
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No, I know what the word means, it's just not clear how it applies in that context. None of the meanings of "static" seem like they could describe Twilight's reaction to Burdy being in the hospital.
3759251 She was probably freaking out because he was torched yet didn't take it seriously, just like all his other injuries. Probably was just like "Meh, I'm alive so it's good."
No mention of Schwarzenegger in this chapter...I'm quite surprised!
Such a sweet story.
Always a new adventure with the loveable oaf, always a treat.
Great chapter really liked it. I guess Burdy is starting to warm up and is taking a liking to twi now. Can't wait till the next chapter.
Keep up the good work.
allrighty, so, possible future:
gun selling chick is in Equestria with her Plane full of Guns (tm) and that's what could happen:
GC: "Haha, i have guns! I will conquer/enslave and sell ponies on Earth blackmarket/sell the location of this place to terrorists"
Burdy: "Stahp. Let's be friends"
GC: "NOPE.avi. STFU & GTFO."
Burdy: "k. KAMEHAMEHA!"
or
GC: "Oh shit im stuck in a world of colourful pones no humans never sex wat do"
Burdy: "...can call me Burdy if you fancy"
GC: "Wow. Sex me forever, you majestic buffed studmuffin"
Twi: "NNNOOOOO!!"
or:
GC: "Oh shit im stuck in a world of colourful pones no humans never sex wat do"
Burdy: "hey i just met you and this is crazy, but im the only human so sex me maybe"
Twi silently cries nearby.
GC notices that
GC: "You better make that purple hoers a happy mare or i'll shoot ur balls off!"
Twi and Burdy lived happily ever after
or:
Burdy: "...can call me Bur-"
GC: "Nope. You're Adam and i'm Eve now and i really hope you're into incest."
Burdy: "Nyoro~n"
i better wrap this up until i wrote something really
3781160 Yeah I know I loose %20 of my torque with an auto, but try finding a '97 in fair shape for a reasonable price. Went looking for a parts truck on kijiji and everyone is like '2wd, automatic 6.0L, has transmission problems, engine is finiky and has rust, $10000-great price!" and I'm like "I JUST NEED A FUCKING PARTS TRUCK!"
Absolutely beautiful.
im gonna laugh when twilight finally does this
click this
So, I was listening to this song (Your Guardian Angel by Red Jumpsuit Apparatus for those of you who can't click the link) on Pandora during the fire scene, and maybe it's just me, but I think it fits rather well. Especially if you imagine the scene mostly in slow-motion.
stupid dash putting her tricks ahead of her bucking job worst employee ever.
He is unable to learn by bringing a dog to a restaurant and for Twilight to forgive or even have romantic feelings for such a immature dick degrades her image.
I didn't think there would be explicit scenes on this one since it didn't say it had them. But I ain't complaining.
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i disagree. twilight almost laid her feelings out but was interrupted
And fuck you too, author. While you made Evan as dense as a black hole and Twi unable to express her feelings or at least put a stop on whole mom thing, this particular tidbit of bullshit was all yours.
...no, seriously, she should understand that she can't become his lover while he sees her as mom. At least Cadence should have told her so.
Aaand again, for the good measure.
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Disagree with what? He surprised why Twi even have feelings toward this immature dick and not that she couldn't express them in this particular case thanks to his immaturity.