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I bet twilights cake was more delicious
It's about frickin time!
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... what the fuck.
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He said "cake". *wink wink* I hear you bro.
Awesome chapter.
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This can't be good.
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FINALLY!!!
It finally fucking happened!
GG WP i broke my radio when reading this becaus of the song. "because i'm happy" during the good parts and i was like SHUTUP but still a good chapte
Please please please let Twilight be pregnant.
Still, the situation isn't really solved between those two, in fact Twilight messed up big time.
As I see it, additionally to a fucked up past with a fucked up mom, he now fucked what looks like in his eyes his more beneficial, generous and kind mom, which he had genuine mom & son feelings for, thus making his mental state more fucked up by adding a fucking 'incest' fetish to his psychology.
Twilight begging him literally to pleasure his 'mom', didn't help that mental condition either.
He is now:
A Schwarzenegger parody, with an imaginary Derreck helping him to activate some kind of superpowers, he is not aware of, able to take out entire mafia families.
He regenerates much to fast from any wound.
He is dense as fuck.
He has an 'adoptive mom', at least he sees her that way, he's had sex with, thus invoking guilty pleasure feelings that involve an 'incest' fetish in him.
...
Discord would have a field day with this guy.
Way to go Twilight, you made his situation worse. Instead of confronting him with this while in estrus, she could have told him beforehand, rendering his guilty feelings plus insecurity about the situation and the thought that "the estrus is to blame for her behavior' null and void.
Instead he'll think now he subtle raped his mom, while she was in estrus... and he liked it.
WTF TWILIGHT?!
I thought Twilight had that tiara/crown thingie. Author, correct this for the sake of canon.
Other than that:
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thirty chapters, ...
thirty chapters i waited for this to happen.
and ya know what?
it.
finally.
did.
that was the most satisfying part of this entire story to me. great fuckin job
When twi started throwing stuff it reminded me of your story "It was bound to happen" great chapter again.
In truth with how pent up she has been from couple of chapters I was sure she'd clamped so hard as to break it off
Evans, it's not taboo if your not related by blood. Also why haven't Celestia done anything about that women. At all?
Awesome chapter but I found two things that are out of place.
[I made a decisive move and took her queen by pinning her king into a check, forcing her to move her queen in front.]
1.) How can she move her queen if he took it to put her king in check?
[Every pony knew Pinkie was a good cook. That’s why she was in charge of the food at my brother’s royal wedding.]
2.) Applejack was in charge of the food at the wedding. Pinkie was in charge of hosting the reception.
Just two small things that stand out to me but because they're so small I can see how anyone could over look them if they're reading through it quickly. I thought you would like to know incase you wished to fix them. If not, that's ok. Like I said, they where small and can easily be over look if anyone is reading it quickly.
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in chess, it is possible to have multiple queens. I have a personal best of seven queens in one game( though not at the same time) that record is sadly, just three.
Well... ONE thing comes to mind...
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That bitch needs to die sorry but killing random ponys
How does she know those inspectors are looking for her? Celestia hasn’t asked Twilight or Evan? Wouldn’t the MC be the first source for bullet shaped pony wounds to inquire as he’s well known for having such devices?