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Still no clop....
This story is one of the best things I have read... And your comment at the end I agree whole heartedly
4139881 One does not simply say,
that there is enough Firearms
NO ONE MESSES WITH DERPY AND GETS AWAY WITH IT!
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You sound disappointed
who is derreck!?
Something burst.
Those dudes are gonna be as broke as [Tartarus].
(If I sound calm about this, its because I decided to type it out like that, I actually feel like flipping tables)
So something's bugging me. Is Derreck a ghost or is he really there? And if he is a ghost, is Burdy the only one who can see him?
p.s. Is "Belladonna" a Desert Eagle?
well done
They are going to pay!
its times like this i wish i was in equestria and had powers like a super saiyan so i could just toss those goons around like rag dolls and pummel the crap outa em. also about that kid getting bullied ive had people make fun of me for it cuz they think they can get away with it cuz im small but i usually give em the middle finger and say who cares what you think you you piece of crap, have yet to actually beat the crap outa someone fer it yet.
They broke derpy's wing Those bastards.
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4241722 My editor asked me almost the same thing "What's with this Derreck guy? Is he real or not" Now because he's my editor, I explained it to him, but I won't ruin it for you guys, or maybe your girls, dunno, anyway, we haven't actually seen what Burdy was doing before he was zapped to Equestria, so we don't know if perhaps there was others with him. Now that being said, I won't ruin for you either because it's gonna be a shocker. For the basics, Derreck is one of Evan's oldest friends who helped him through his younger life with an alcoholic and negligent mother and an abusive uncle that was kind of like his father figure except not a good one. That's it. In the next chapter it'll delve slightly further into who Derreck is.
And yes, Belladonna is a Desert Eagle, but her resemblance is completely fictional. I don't have a Desert Eagle, I need a range membership before I can buy one.
4244563 Kinda funny cause I read the comment but my eye twitched a bit and I saw your avatar and thought briefly that you posted that as a picture. "They broke Derpy's wing" *Picture of shrugging pony like they don't care*
4245519 you know i thought that might happen eventually.someone will look at my picture and they base my comment on the pic. Weird?
(-----as my picture says.
4245540 Well... my left eye has always been a little bit bad on terms of sight. I got some dust stuff in it and was supposed to wash it thoroughly with water for fifteen minutes... instead I went to rugby practice for two and a half hours but realized that it was getting worse so I tried washing it out cause it was stinging. Then later I had to go to an eye doctor for it cause my eye kept twitching and watering up, and they told me that I would either need a pair of glasses with just the one glass piece magnified, a single contact lens or a monocle (Which could only serve me up to two weeks hilarity before it got annoying) so I declined the offers and left. They told me my left eye's sight would just continue to get worse unless I used something to help see better but... well meh, it's not my shooting eye so... putting in contacts creeps me out
4245576 well hopeful you can still see enough to write your stories and being able to see what your shooting would be nice.(granny walking down the sidewalk, you walking around with a....spas and think shes a deer then bam. gramma got run over by a....got shot...) no it doesn't work. keep on writing.
(----- Meh
4245509 thnx
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Gotta be really there, he beat the crap outta some ponies this chapter.
4246918 There was a chapter Derreck helped him throw 100 lbs of iron through a wall, so I think he just gave him the strength to do it. That would mean that he's the one who beat-up those guys and Derreck just gave him made him stronger.
im starting Derreck is a figment of Burdy's imagination. I also think Burdy created him to help him cope in the world of ponies. but this is just a wild theory yet it would make sense
4248299 oh gods its a Victor Reznov situation
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Derrick makes me think of the situation in the Fight Club movie where there was an alternate persona that the main guy doesn't know is his self.
4255687 But how it's described it sounds so much like a Desert Eagle.
p.s. My name is also Erik (But mine is spelled with a 'K')
I think derek is a manifestation of burdys magic that appears when burdy needs help. (he did do a kamehameha and apparently is capable of magic)
4257796 Very compelling argument But I didn't write it, I just read it. You should ask the author.
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Then how the hell did he deal with the crooks at the toilett room? Did he imagen Derreck mopping the floor with them, while it was really him who did all this but can't remember the real truth?
4261985 well yes but we would have to wait for other chapters. Besides if you ever took psychology you wouldnt really be confused
Wait, I'm confused. When you first introduced Derrek, he seemed more like some ghostly apparition, but now, he's physically there? I don't get it... unless he's Chrysalis.
I think I know what the point of Derreck is. It's a Tyler Durden type deal like in Fight Club and he's not actually there.
4264567 I'm totally getting the same vibe!
When is twilight gonna date him it's been like a lot of chapters. i want to know the chapter number when you gonna do it.
4268983 Depends on how you determine 'Date'. In chapter 26, he starts to develop strong feelings towards her in a non-family kind of way but is conflicted by his emotions and afraid to tell her how he feels, though he isn't even sure how he feels because it's so different for him.
Well worth the wait as always.
I was so immersed in this chapter, it was that last thing I looked at before falling asleep and the first thing I reached for when I woke up.
This Derrick guy is a bamf and I thoroughly enjoy how you've written Derpy's character as a sort of moral compass for our protagonist.
The inner turmoil is interesting and the combat scenes seem flow better every time you write them. Bravo sir.
4270423 Well like a proper date with twi and like be her marefriend and other stuff.
Also I really like this soo far but it get's updated like not much at all only seems like 2 times a moth but that my opinion
4273793 I know the updates are slow as piss. My editor is in deep with schooling... University I think, so it takes him a bit of time to get it done, but I don't blame him... that stuff's scary you know, highschool still gives me nightmares (Seriously, I'm petrified from the mere thought of going back to school, unless military collage)
They done fucked up.
So is Derrick real? Or just a figment of his imagination?
I imagine him going super sayain (sayian?) By the time he hung up...
I salute you trigger finger on behalf of your fellow bronys
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I’m wondering the same thing. Maybe this is a fight club situation. Neither the hotel pony nor the phone mobster indicated acknowledgment of a 2nd human.
Poor Derpy.
im so confused, this whole time i thought derreck was a figment of burdy's imagination. cause of the way he presents himself seemingly out of nowhere and burdy just being fine with it. so derreck actually came to equestria???
thank you trigger finger for being the badass you are, people like you give hope to the community. fuck the bullies.
also this goes unnecessarily hard.