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Either you're editing more content into previous chapters, or my memory just isn't what it used to be. Because I swear for the last 3 chapters or so things have been coming completely out of left field.
See I knew Derrick wasn't real.
nice chapter brother. More awesomeness has been written.
Epic chapter trying to imagine that was nuts... But seriously how many magazines did he have for belladonna... Can't wait for the next one
You should have made sure he kept one of the 'railguns', just to add it to his arsenal (After figuring out how to recharge it I mean).
poor derpy, hope that broken wing doesnt cripple her, damage like that is extensive.
4340036 He had enough damn it.
I keep thinking Belladonna's a revolver, butt it isnt.
And its getting annoying for me!
The entire time that the battle scene was going on I was just thinking of Army Of Two and the near infinite amount of enemies that would show up. Still a good chapter though.
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Trigger, I though you were on vacation with the amount of time I waited. But, all is forgiven. So you say the next chapter is done but it needs to be edited. I can't wait.
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4339996 you meant to say Derreck, right?
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yeah just realized that like 30 seconds ago.
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not cartridge... How many magazines did he have.
Damn.
That was such a good chapter. With the battle scenes my mind went throug fallout 3 (energy weapons) and battlefeild with the way the enviroment was being destroyed. and with all the explosions that I envisioned one would have thought Michael Bay was directing it
Once again great chapter and i cant wait till the next one. Keep up the amazing work.
everything about this chapter screamed commando, nicely done ^^.
I beg you Author commission someone to draw a picture of burdy holding derpy with the crippled wing and all, that would be epicly bodacious
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Yeah, just get some magnets, wire, and some other things and shoot away. I wanted to make a really big one and use railroad spikes. It's legal.
Was there a 'Trigun' in there? Loved it !
thats all i have to say
No words needed, this story is just too good
Thank you sooo much for this chapter is was brill. just can't wait till the next one. hope it's good
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Its movie logic, just like how Belladonna can "blow away" a full grown stallion with minimal recoil on Burdy. If you think too much on it you are doing it wrong.
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You have to picture Belladonna as Alucard weapons from Hellsing.
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Still the greatest.
"With an iconic scream, the stallion was tossed back into the booze cabinet,"
Awesome!
This was exciting to read and those rail guns seem oddly familiar, like from an old movie I've seen.
4352094 But if you think about it...
'Belladonna' is obviously a Desert Eagle, which is chambered in .50 AE, the largest caliber ammunition that any handgun can take (that I know of). Those rounds do similar damage to their full sized cousins (obviously not the same, but if anyone tried to fire a .50 BMG shell from a handgun it'd probably break their wrist and/or arm) A.K.A., fucking extreme. They could pretty easily "blow away" a pony stallion.
However, because of the rounds being fucking massive compared to other rounds, Desert Eagles only have a 7 or eight round magazine capacity, unless they have custom magazines. It never said that ' Belladonna' had said custom magazines, so when Burdy fires "several times" into one stallion, he's pretty much using up a whole magazine on one pony. Also, when it says he took quick shots with the gun...
You can't. It's a .50 Cal. for fuck's sale! Every time someone who isn't on steroids fires the thing, they have to brace themselves so that they don't get smacked in the face with the barrel, and then again before the next shot, and again, and again....
This is the same as Chudnofski's dual-barrel Deagle in 'The green hornet'. You can't fire multiple .50 Cal. rounds that fast. It doesn't matter if it's handgun ammunition! You just can't!
So, yea. I call bullshit.
I enjoyed the Eraser references here, though I would agree that on a whole it felt more like commando. Very interesting work.
I like how this chapter was a reference to the movie Eraser with a little bit of The Punisher spliced into it. But I can't help but think that his friend Derreck is actually a split personality in his head, like the guy in the movie Fight Club.
4744146 same thoughts like he is what could of been if his home lift had not been so broke
This is like 'Fight Club'. Cool.
Poor derpy...
meh she'll live
But damn that was badass
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you don't talk about fight club.
This is like the Last Acton Hero or Commando
this chapter reminds of something out of the puinsher or Max Payne, super cool
6225092 i had the same feeling
Welp this is starting to hit saints row levels of ridiculousness, Railguns out of nowhere? 250 killed by one assailant when the chapter describes Derreck doing work. I mean i imagine that this Derreck situation ends up with some clarity later but the whole mob fight and killing 250 ponies just throws off any kind of flow i felt this story had. Ah well, onwards to the next chapters
Derpy’s going to need some therapy after this. I wonder if she’ll still spend time with MC afterwards. Also, her wing was broken. Dude didn’t stop by the hospital? Well, I suppose it would have been better to do it in Ponyville…
pissed? christ brotger schlawg consider yourself disowned💀
...are you sure?..
this is straight up some street fighter shit, your telling me all the kills they both got was actually all done by him, WAS HE DUAL WEILDING THE FRICKING RAILGUNS????
mlg edits and ytp's have ruined the emotions behind this music for me. im sorry
(ended up settling for Johnny Cash's "Hurt")