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Yeah, she's been the best from the moment she was introduced.
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...maybe I have too.
Juggernaut is my most used perk.
Lassie reminds me of Cloud Kicker from the Winningverse. Kinda a well meaning pervert with lots of bad ass tendencies.
Yeah, I enjoy lassie.
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All this emotional baggage is going to wind up hurting more. I for one would love to have Burdy unburden himself to Twilight.
I just wanted to say I had spent two weeks trying to read last chapter because I made it half way and I couldn't just skip it, but holy s**t was it painful to read, you added way to many easter eggs. I would of liked if you didn't add the WW2 part because how you did it, how would Burdy have memories of that time. You just wanted a WW2 chapter, if you wanted to make a WW2 theme thing you should of made a new story instead of moving that here. And them waking up wasn't even at all worthwhile. Twilight couldn't at all give no f**ks about him waking up and also how he still looked like Derrick and Twilight flirted a bit and liked the new look not at all questioning why or seemed worried or happy that he just woke up from a coma. I love the story bro but how you're doing it, is pissing me off really and in future stories back off on the easter eggs a bit in singular chapters, it's a bit too much. I hope you know I still love the story.
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well tbh even though showing the ww2 part was unnecessary and could have been shown as another story, i think its small enough to fit in one chapter. plus, twilight might have not shown much emotion mostly due to the fact that she's used to burdy getting in danger and she trusts him to come back to her nonetheless. but i'm just talking to your past comment you probably read the whole story by now and i'm completely wrong, but i still liked the ww2 part and id like to see how luna is doing after all of that. i hope derreck didnt vanish from existence