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This is a wtf chapter and it was hilarious.
..wat?
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This chapter....wasn't very good, it felt so random, just completely chaotic. Almost unfaved right here.
4123439 Yeah... I was kinda getting the same thoughts through writing it but then figured "Well... it is his first time in Manehatten and he has no idea what to do or where to go." So things were probably bound to be chaotic. Sorry for the disappointment though
This was shorter than some of the others but you still managed to say what you wanted to say, so that's good.
Anyways, I don't think I saw anything wrong with grammer or related topics.
The German Model 24 "stick" hand grenade did not have the same pin-and-spoon design as US or UK hand grenades. Instead, a pull cord ran down the hollow handle from the detonator within the explosive head, terminating in a porcelain ball held in place by a detachable base closing cap. To use the grenade, the base cap was unscrewed, permitting the ball and cord to fall out. Pulling the cord dragged a roughened steel rod through the igniter causing it to flare up and start the five-second fuse burning. So arming the weapon is not as simple as it is for US/UK designed grenades, since you have to unscrew the cap and then pull the cord, which would take several seconds. More then enough time for the guy to open his eyes and wonder WTF you were doing.
Yeah, hand grenades aren't powerful enough to vaporize bodies. In fact, most of the skeleton would probably be intact, even though the soft tissue of the chest cavity would be ravaged and blown apart. Most of the skeletal damage would be to the ribcage, which would likely be collapsed and/or shattered, but the rest of the skeleton should be relatively fine.
Nice.
4125504 Maybe the dude was an idiot,And had the cap removed beforehand,For quick arming and throwing?......Fuck if I know
This chapter was for the most part rather pointless and didn't continue the plot at all
4136510 I have a tendancy to name my guns after flowers because... dunno. Just seems innocent, cute and adorable. Apple Bloom was originally going to be Apple Blossom but that was a little long and I kinda snickered at the thought of naming it after the character. The SVT-40 got the name No-Name... well it says why in the story. Daisy is the Winchester 30-30 Centennial because Daisy is the name brand of those quirky bb guns and it is a lever action rifle and Daisy is a flower name sooo... Lotus (Not the car, the flower) is the 91/30 Mosin, Heather is the Norinco 870, Violet is the Boito 590 combat shotgun clone... well I guess I don't need to continue, most would think at this point I'm insane, own too many firearms and have a weird fetish for flowers
this chapter rocked.this chapter filled in the blanks.thanks trigger.
That moment when my name is Julio and i'm latin (not mexican)
F-ing brilliant.
Nice! Time to upgrade my Minecraft account! :D http://minecraftcode.freegiftcode.com/
4142363 I kinda like your response. In thought though, I've kinda figured "Most every human comes to Equestria, the human just hits it off and is like "Oh I love it here it's great" then he hits it off with a love interest, I kinda thought... it would be unique if he didn't want to be here but he secretly didn't really have much to go home to. On top of all that, he's screwed up in the head, not sociopath like but mentally trauma... I liked the thought of it... well I mean, there's no real originality in Self inserts but, I dunno, it seems interesting.
4140536 I remember in one of the old stories I wrote... there was this Australian pony side character named... Roo... oh shit I can't remember now. Anyway, he had this kinda stereotypical Aussie... oh wait shit, his name was Aussie, I think... anyway, he accompanied the main character later on in the story to hunt down 'The Apache' who was basically this zebra guerrilla warfighter who was kickin the ponies arses. Anyway, I don't remember exactly what happened to him but man, was he ever cool. He had this classic Lee-Enfield No.1 Mark 3 and... anyway, your comment just made me remember him and I kinda wish I remembered what happened to him. He ended up... shit now I gotta figure it out.
my lord do you own a lot of guns, almost like my grandpa who has a shed with 3 gun cabinets all of em full.
during that chase benny hill was running through my head.
Well that's akward
Marvelous scene with Heifer. That would fit in an actual action comedy.