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that explains absolutely nothing.
I was never really looking forward to this whole twiburd thing, but if it's gonna take this long then maybe a different cover picture is in order.
Burdy gonna use his magic powers?
its kinda unfortunate when you have to paraphrase your main characters development to people asking you "when is x gonna happen!?"
Umm.
Did you manage to 'randomize' and get BellaDonna?
If you did, search it and something REALLY off shows up.
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Or, BurdLight.
He got a deagle?...either way Sic Semper Tyrannis
Ahah love how his handcannon is a "pocket pussy"
I thought he was going to pound the mail mare or is it plow
Love it! Can't wait for the next one
The Executioner? Haven't read those in years. And I'm old!
Rarity is second best pony.
3811395 You know, I really like Rarity in this story. She's got that... esque nature in which she really cares about her friends feelings (Twilight's) yet at the same time she's constantly toying and tugging at Burdy. Kind of interesting really...
3809601 If you mean the name 'Belladonna' as in the porn star name (I just looked it up) I had meant it to be Belladonna, like the plant.
Actually, I forgot to mention it but this gun is the one fictional gun of the story (As in, I don't actually have it) but in turn it's got more character to it than the others.
3809159 lh6.googleusercontent.com/-qxVYEsF_fv8/Utv5qzF6dOI/AAAAAAAAABg/sHnoiBQxUXM/s476-no/Picture+of+me+3.png something like that or did you have something else in mind?
3811478 Oh, no doubt. I've liked Rarity from season 1 'dog and pony show'. By the time 'The last roundup' finished airing I was a HUGE fan of Pinkie.
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Kinda blurry, but sure.
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I vote for something like this:
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You know, was Twilight in heat already in the story? She might lose her cool once instincts start to kick in. And since Burdy spents most of his time under the effect of tetanus potions...
And speaking of potions, I KNEW this stuff had sideeffects! Now his senses go all looney!
Yet I wonder how long it will take for Celestia and Luna to intervene. Being her former price pupil and faithful student, I think Twilight is very dear to Celestia. So dear in fact that I almost expect her to have a little talk with Burdy over a cup of tea...
As for Luna... Since Sleepless in Ponyville we know that the Princess of the Night visits dreams. She could counsil in his dreams as well.
And don't tell me two mares that old don't know some tricks up her tiaras to get a guy even as dense as Evan interested to the idea of a relationship.
Bonus points if they baffle him with spanking their flanks with their wings in front of Evan. It doesn't get much more obvious then.
OH MY GAWD ITS AN ARTIFICIAL VAGINA
Burdy doesn't come across as "dumb as a sack of bricks", just charmingly naive about all things romantic, or social cues in general really. He can be clever at times, such as the trick he pulled to keep his gun.
On the other hand, I keep wondering how long it's going to take for one of the many mares attempting to flirt with him (and utterly failing) to be more direct. (It's also hilarious how he sometimes unintentionally flirts back without realizing it.) Rarity came close in this chapter, before getting ponynapped.
On the bright side, Burdy is slowly picking up on things, such as the moment with Derpy and the chess set where he acknowledged cuteness.
WHEN IS HE GOING TO PUT HIS DICK IN TWILIGHT
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I vote that you immediately change the cover pic to that. This website could use a bit more manliness. I mean, not too much more, because of this, but whatever.
3815214 lol cause he said before you ask
welp
burdy is now wolverine
u mad?
Great chapter.
Regarding A/N:
Why teleport the human woman\girl (the weapon dealer) then? (that way he won't need to put in anypony, which is good for him, and I'm definitely not against it)
I think you've really hit your stride with this one.
The pacing was spot on and the set up flowed naturally.
Loved the Metal Gear reference by the way.
Quick Burdy,use the kamehameha wave to escape!
MORE CHAPTERS
3931379 I know. I'm really sorry about the wait. The day after I posted the last chapter, my right hand was slammed in an industrial door then one of my fingers got infected so I had to cut it open with a jack knife so I didn't exactly feel like writing.
After I got better from that I caught some sort of flu and went pale white and was on the verge of vomiting for a while... then last Friday I finally got a finished chapter to my editor.
Truly (I shit you not) I am sorry from the depths of my heart (Whatever that stands for because I'm pretty dopey when it comes to all this: My heart is full of love, stuff)
I
Hahahaha!
I was kinda waiting for the "Who's footprints are these?"
*Dies of laughter*
3931997 Oh god.
WOLVERINE!!!
well I hope to get my idea across with out giving spoilers (cuz I don't know how to do that black line thing) that bit with redheart I think its a combo off his body finally getting as much magic into his system as possible and a build up of the potions he has been using (this mite lead to a crash of sorts if he dos not get more of it in the future) and poor twi at this rate I got a feeling she is going to go single white female on him and lastly words lots of words spoken at this point that you just see ramblings(from this commenter)
Ok so what i'm getting out of this story is that he is Holk and Wolverine busting down walls to save Apple bloom and healing really fast ok i can deal with that.
Only spidermare saves fillys
“HUH? What was that?!” the first doctor asked aloud.
“Who’s there?” the second joined in as the trio turned towards the direction of the cardboard box.
“What’s going on?” the third chimed in as they started to search for their eavesdropper. They searched for several moments before all letting out sighs.
“It must’ve just been my imagination,”
Did you just...mmmmmmmmm references...a good funny one too.
I'm guessing Belladonna is a Desert Eagle.
Also, the references, they just make the story that much more fun to read.
5498009 I thought he called it a 44 Automag earlier in the chapter. 4.bp.blogspot.com/_pPsuc9rvU4Y/SqhGU3TKJCI/AAAAAAAAAds/J09Zm1AJ3cg/s400/Automag+44.bmp
The character development of Burdy is done quite well actually. It is quite believable and as realistic as possible in the current setting. No there hasn't been much romantic development between teacher and student, but that's fine that's a part of his character.
F*CK YOU! I WANT BURKY AND TWILY ROMANCE!!!!
D:
YOU'RE MAKING ME READ ALL OF THIS STORY JUST TO SEE WHAT WILL HAPPEN WITH THAT GIANT BLOCK OF DUMB THAT EVAN IS!
btw, loving the story so far....
A lot of ponies are giving Twilight a wide berth on Burdy. Maybe it’s because they don’t want to get on the bad side of a princess? But somepony is going to snap and make a move if Twilight doesn’t start trying to break the motherly image.