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And I was just complaining about this never updating..... nice Chapter
Damn good.
...them 'shrooms though...
whos derreck?
you know I was just thinking about this this morning and its got updated again yes.
3937840 I would like to know as well
Here's Hopin' your luck improves trig,You might need it evantually.....Also,He needs to either find his coat or grab a new one(I forget if its still existant/repairable anymore)
Burdy had a run in with 'The' nightmare????
I would have just shot the diamond dog in the torture room and in the main chamber.
To think you could've saved me from reading 6000 words if you just had the guy shoot the diamond dog.
That was tense
This Writing piece is a story within a story.
> Implying "69 Shades of Neigh" is a(n) actual story that has been written (but probably not)
If not..
"69 Shades of Neigh" MUST be written....or something in that category of story telling..... Who agrees?
Yay or Neigh.
if twilight doesn't make a move fast, then rarity is going to ride that dick first
3939931 Ew
Oh boy, things are now getting real intense. I take it Derreck was a friend of Evan's?
I heard this kind of thing was common just after world war.
Post pneumatic stress?
3940624 Love You Forever
3940591 I won't ruin it, but it's another one of his mental problems. I kinda like his... mental issues, because in the beggining it just seemed like a really nice guy who was big, strong, athletic (Basically all the good stuff) and his only drawback seemed to be his dislike to the world. Now it's turning into a fact that he is just screwy and it's kind of interesting.
Thinks Twilight is his mother (Or replacement motherly figure), has some serious sleep issues, Derreck (Who will be discussed upon later)... the whole thing just makes me clap in excitement... wait a minute... this is a self insert... man I'm fucked in the head huh?
first i was like then i was like then i was like wdf was that.please tell me he isn't going crazy.and hes still going fuck twilight please stay awesome don't go crazy . thanks i liked the first halve with the dimond dogs little different but near-death combat was that held up the chapter.then it took a trip to hell and back.keep writing.but watch the balance.you could have ended the chapter there.plus this was reallyyyyy gory.but hey write how you want.this just my 2 cents.(now i'm broke.DAMN IT!)
3941520 Fucked in the head? Nah, we all have a crazy side. That's what makes life unpredictable and slightly less boring.
3940624
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Love_You_Forever
Still the best.
This is still a really good story!
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3940029 This is Technically a clop fic...
3941520
I'm gonna take a wild guess and say that Derreck is a past-self.
Anyway cool chap keep it up!
3947919 Why thank you, it makes me smile during this gloomy... nah, more like... dunno, spent a lot of money that I shouldn't have and was trying to find a reason to smile, but you made me smile so thank you.
Loving the story. Can't wait for the next chapter. And hang in there dude. Life doesn't always suck. Just gotta get through the bad days to see the good ones
3959573 Oh believe me, things just seem to piece themselves together. You have to first fail to succeed... if that makes much sense?
3942246 Don't worry. He's not going to go postal, or get some depression issues. He'll be (More or less) the same as he has been lately, it's just now his problems are coming to light.
"What happens in the dark... comes out in the light"
I really enjoyed the descriptions of the fight scenes and the demon creatures.
Nicely written and engaging.
looks at story theories then looks to chapter read then back down to theories...drops theories into trashcan sets trashcan on fire...what? ()
I honestly dislike the foreboding (or the lack of it?) that some other human is going to appear. No Pony for Evan, eh?
It was tirek
And you just moved it further away. Ugh.
He’s had a lot of dream issues. I wonder why Luna or Twilight haven’t picked up on that yet.