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Fun chapter. I'm very curious where you're leading us to. Keep up the good work.
“Think of it like... an intensive to try harder,”
You mean an incentive?
“E-e-ev-evan... tha-that's a-a-a t-t-trans-transparency sp-spell... how'd you... you do that?”
At no point did his hand become see-through, which is what transparency means. And unless her shield is photon-based, turning clear would not allow you to pass through. That'd be a stupid flaw, anyway. What he did seems to have been more like bending magic around himself so the shield couldn't block him.
“Wow... Evan that's... it's incredible. Some of the spells that give you the most trouble are so basic yet you can accomplice the most intermediate spells with ease,”
It's 'accomplish'. An accomplice is someone who helps in something.
I find it odd how all the dumb things being said are coming from Twilight's mouth. You tend not to portray her as a dumbass like the show does, so this is very weird for me. Also, I think the spa sisters are secretly nymphomaniacs, drawing in ponies with their aphrodisiac flowers so they can get more sex. XD
You can smack Rarity's butt just don't call her a mule. I'd have done her.
Huh, he can change the color of an apple, but not levitate. He can shoot things, but can't manipulate things outside his body.
If he shoots a beam at it, that's a different story.
My boner...it hurts.
This story is always fun
Wow.
Well I have been reading this whole thing. I like the story but Burdy is full on dumbass, he is more stupid than Peter Griffin (I love him) which I would find impossible but you proved me wrong. Also where are you proof readers? I find it hard to read through the sheer stupidity of Burdy and bad spelling. Passed all that I love the story so far but I really didn't like where he had sex with Rarity and Aloe, I think that breaks the special thing between Twilight and Burdy. Still love this story plus it is very funny.
damn... evans mommy issues is worse than i expected, i thought he just decided to ignore all the signs of twi being his mother on purpose for his convenience and comfort but when he's confronted about it... its like his whole world starts falling apart.. how long is this gonna go on..?? i feel bad for both of them..
and despite everything twilight still puts up with this. god their love is SO REAL. GREATEST (fake) MOM EVER.
this gotta be by far the most chaotic chapter i have read in this story, i dont know how but it is.