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Of course Daring would write it in her favor.
History is written by the victors.
how many times has he been in the hospital.....like 5 or 6 times. but what ever its a good story.i hope we see some Twibud.
*Having mixed emotions about chapter*
All I can say is...
What?
He went into her care shed...
And with that raging boner-thon after all these tetanus potions, he sooner or later should release himself with a pony. You know, that stuff might get sideeffects if you overuse it. Maybe it starts to becoming a permanent state. A permanent voice in your brain driving you to bang ponies.
You wouldn't need to keep taking more tetanus shots. One lasts a long time, and having more wouldn't make it any more effective, in fact it would be dangerous. I'd suggest coming up with something else if you want to make that a running gag.
Ohh Daring, you bitch!
what if he included something at the end like
"P.S.: im at the hospital... again, got another tetanus potion, so i have a boner and i don't know what to do with it, plz halp"
3632060 Just make Pony meds in general use something that works as a aphrodisiac for humans?
Also,I can see Our Arnie Reskin here Finding daring and getting the bitch to rework the book
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So... abusing tetanus potions causes a permanent second conscious voiced by Cloud Kicker to appear in your head? Is that what you're trying to say?
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I don't know... This stuff certainly was not tested on humans before... The side effects after prolonged exposure to this stuff could be concerning to disastrous.
However... This could be, in fact, part of the story. Since this guy stumbles from one incident to another and the amount of potions they fed him already, I wouldn't be surprised if he sooner or later turns into a sexdriven caveman. "HULK BANGS!!!"
Imagine this guy in tears after he 'violated' Twilight in a lustful frenzy.
He's all like: "Oh God! What have I done?!? Violating my mother/a pony... This isn't me, this can't be me!!!"
Yet Twilight's all satisfied like: "That was the best thing ever happening to me since getting my cutie mark!"
I would die laughing!
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I would probably join you in the afterlife and buy you a drink in Pony Hell. But, yeah I could see it.
Sweet!
Burdy, by this time should have a room in the hospital permanentily reserved for him.
He's lucky the deer wasn't a full fledged sentient, like they are usually depicted in fanfics.
3630961 Yeah, that struck me as a bitch move cause I thought they were more or less squared away at the end of that chapter. Now she makes him sound like some kind of monster. O well, good chapter.
He should have mentioned to Twilight how Daring Do was trashing him in her book.
oh shit
hey hey hey
what i tell yall about comin IN MY SHED! [Flutterrage]
great chapter but my letter to twi would a been a tad different. Dear Princess Sparky, Angel Bunny's a dick your gluten for punishment Burdy. ()
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you read human in pony's clothing?
And isn't a tenus an infection?
Didn't this happen literally a chapter or two ago? I really want to really like this story, because I really want to read a long Twi x Human like I used to in the good old days, but the OTT fight scenes and hospital visits are just getting a bit repetitive. This story is tagged as slice of life, and I enjoy the slice of life parts of the story where he's just having antics and interactions with ponies around Ponyville, but I don't feel like I'm getting them as much as I want to. I don't mind the story touching onto darker things like rape though, as it did with Tristan, as long as it is justifiable and not just thrown in there haphazardly. Also does he need to carry a gun around everywhere? He goes to visit Twilight's parents and decides to bring a rifle? Why?
Time to apologise, it may sound like I'm being overly critical, and I know that there's not much you can do since so much more of the story has already been published, but I just want to kind of vent my frustrations. I do still like the story and will keep pushing through it, because something in my mind is telling me that there's no way you can write 700.000 words purely of fight scenes in the Everfree Forest, hospital visits, and tetanus potion induced sexual deviancy.
for the chapter Three of four types of ponies it would be four butt I can't find celestial
So I'm just starting this chapter and I have to call even more Bullshit.
The events in the book only took place a couple weeks ago. How the hell did a book get published across the nation in that time?
What's with the obsession with Arnold's voice?
2 more issues.
Christianity in Equestria? Wtf.
And the whole Daring Do mini adventure was epically dumb.
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I know I'm very late to the party, but this I seriously have to agree with.
Here's hoping the story gets better further in, but currently the moment the dude leaves the library he is basically guaranteed a hospital stay. It's getting very old, very fast. It has not even been a day in the story since he was last in the hospital!